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A Soldier's Life - 302 - The Student Becomes The Master (final edit 7-10-25, hope i didnt use this chap title somewhere else)

🕑 Added 2024-11-27 01:27:15 +0000 UTC

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Rodmin

'Changelings were inferior to doppelgangers, lacking many of the qualities of true doppelgangers. While they could change their appearance, they were limited to a mostly humanoid form. They also lacked the superhuman strength of a doppelganger.' Well and humans are inferior to elves if you think like that.

Kevin O'Malley

“Mynasha promised to free my sister, and Myra, if she [assumed became the Supreme.]” [assumed the Supremacy.] , [assumed the position of Supreme.] , or [became the Supreme.]

Patrick Robbe

Two small typos, I think, in that phrase: "He slowly nodded, probably repl[a]ying everything he had see[n] me do"

Brianna Stormcloud

This was fun/nice, showing how Eryk has grown, But that he still values Konstantin, both his advice and friendship.

Erick Thiemke

edited

Erick Thiemke

corrected

Erick Thiemke

rewrote this

Erick Thiemke

i added a few in the edit and I am about to edit in to being involved in the Choosing starting next chapter

Erick Thiemke

fixed -how did I miss this twice?

Erick Thiemke

chaned this

Erick Thiemke

changed to something esle

Erick Thiemke

corrected

Erick Thiemke

edited

Javen

he didn't say he thinks Eryk is a better leader than Castile, just that the men respect and look to him more. while she was definitely a good leader, she never pulled the kind of things he does on the regular that would inspire awe and admiration. the fact Eryk keeps them alive, treats them well, pays even better and isn't hoarding their loot makes him a great leader. that is all that matters to them. whatever extra subterfuge Castile got up to dosent factor into it at all. its like how the children of single parents might prefer the one they don't see often because they only have positive memories associated with them.

HappyNoms

There are so many good aspects to the story, from the noir lite writing style to the basic premise to the flashes of humor, that when the story missteps it drives me bananas. Eryk is not remotely close to being a better leader than Castile. Castile identified and deftly managed not one but two spies watching her, shrewdly read people, effectively kept multiple secrets, bought her companies loyalty with essence sharing tactics, kept her company turnover rate low while consistently taking the most dangerous jobs, and slow burned a strategic plan with groundwork laid over the course of years to set up toppling an empire and making her break with an inner circle of loyal allies. Eryk is fumbling along and was literally just lightly roasted for being a naive bean who didn't realize he could move his group about the country without taking missions. Having Konstantin say he's more respected for his leadership skills than Castule is unearned. Be serious. He is a better swordfighter, but trying to have one of the most cynical and clear eyed characters lavishly praise him as a more astute leader is lazy wish fulfillment. The story is so good, and then it does random things like this and drives me absolutely bananas.

Story Seeker

This chapter mentions Centurion Sergius’s son name as Aesop but I am pretty sure it is Corvus Did you kill Centurion Sergius’ son as well?” I nodded. “I killed Aesop and destroyed the Archives.” My casual tone had Konstantin chuckle.

Andrew Crews

In another room, I could sense Maveith’s agitation; he was pacing, the soft thudding of his footsteps echoing in the silence. Meanwhile, Gilda [had] quietly slipped out of her room and found a perch on the roof of the adventurer’s hall, where she stood watch in the cool night air.

Andrew Crews

You can handle yourself, and the men respect you. Maybe more than they [look up to] Castile,” he said respectfully. I [wasn’t sure] if I believed him and remained quiet while I thought [about] it.

Andrew Crews

While Konstantin wrapped his new blade out of sight of the others in the yard, [I noticed] it was a runic weapon.

Andrew Crews

The stubborn man did not give in and came at me repeatedly. I noticed my companions standing on the second-floor balcony watching. We were drawing the attention of the other adventurers as well[/].

Andrew Crews

It had riled him up, and he pressed into me again. I dodged a snap kick he [had used] his shield to conceal and slapped the edge of my blade on his knee, giving him a limp as he retreated. I almost felt guilty as Konstantin’s mind churned to find an advantage. I was faster, stronger, and with the dreamscape amulet, I had an equal, if not greater, amount of combat experience.

Andrew Crews

He shrugged after everyone calmed. He had talked about her like she wasn’t in the room. “She [has] attached herself to me and is mostly harmless. Changelings are intelligent and have the same desires as people. But any emotions or facial expressions they express are just an act,” he [said], [gesturing] to the young woman. She studied Konstantin blankly for a moment before her body changed, and Mateo [stumbled] as he fell backward to get away. The woman grew a few inches, and her hair receded into her scalp. Her face went from pale to gray, and her teeth yellowed [slightly]. Her limbs elongated [a bit] before the transformation finished after a dozen heartbeats. Unlike a doppelganger, the [changeling] still looked mostly humanoid in its natural form. They had a mouth and sexual identity, unlike a doppelganger. They were still hunted in the Empire, so my shock did not waver.”* Final Edited Version: *“He shrugged after everyone calmed. He had talked about her like she wasn’t in the room. “She has attached herself to me and is mostly harmless. Changelings are intelligent and have the same desires as people. But any emotions or facial expressions they express are just an act,” he said, gesturing to the young woman. She studied Konstantin blankly for a moment before her body changed, and Mateo stumbled as he fell backward to get away. The woman grew a few inches, and her hair receded into her scalp. Her face went from pale to gray, and her teeth yellowed slightly. Her limbs elongated a bit before the transformation finished after a dozen heartbeats. Unlike a doppelganger, the changeling still looked mostly humanoid in its natural form. They had a mouth and sexual identity, unlike a doppelganger. They were still hunted in the Empire, so my shock did not waver.”*

CryptoBird

Just a general comment…but it’s been a bummer that Maveith has been back benched so hard this book and book 4 as well really. His interactions with Erik used to bring some much needed depth in his own way to this story.

MJ

I think what became interesting here is the introduction of the concept; What did they want to do with their future? For a long time, it was just escape the empire, then it is going to be rescue Maveith’s Sister. But after that, what did they want to do? Adventure throughout the world? Start a kingdom? Retire?

Nicholas Ramage

...since I was not an orc. - Is he now an orc? ... since I'm not an orc.

Salvo

I think that’s the ‘you tell yourself just 1’ plan. Likely, Zorana won’t approve of her going free without all the other goliaths as well. Let’s face facts, the last leader was assassinated, and that’s probably not gonna fix itself cleanly.

Silver Beard

Rofl- time to find out if Mastiffs like Dungeon Bear meat too!

Prinny Knight

Kinda had a flashback to when he first joined the group...

Justin Barnett

So has Eryk decided to become her first or is he just trying to get in, grab zorana and run?

KipBR

Thank you for the wonderful chapter! It reintegration Konstantin really well.

Salvo

I really liked this whole chapter. Konstantin basically approves of Eryk hiding all his spell forms; not betrayed. He basically admitted him coming was unnecessary. I was rereading book 4 and he sparred with Eryk and told him to hold back in front of the hounds; the result being he never gave him credit for his growth til now. Very good group talk about the long term problems with being a First. And it’s summed up well that, are new enemies really scary? Nice that everyone was impressed with Eryk achievements on the trip. Really a good way to cement a hero was walking among us all along.

Andrew

Thank you!

Jordan A

I thought the transition of Konstantin back into the story was well done. The edit you made to 301 went well and smoothed out some rough edges.

Jordan A

“Now she is belly ache that won’t go away.” Now she is ‘a’ belly ache….

Alex

Loved E and K training amd.talking. Reminds me of farther son relationship. The chapters title try : " Let the games begin!"

PatronTurtle

How many countries actually keep track of the happenings in the Dark? If this troll group was driven above ground, would anyone know? Could Glasha use her spell on a corpse?

Dominic French

Thanks for the chapter! Like always I'm left just wanting more lol.

Erick Thiemke

3rd of 4 for cycle. Will get the 4th out before working on Town Builder. Town Builder will prob be on Wednesday. Feel free to give feedback on the last three chapters. Konstantin is destined for a bigger role in the next book.


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