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Town Builder - 82 - Negotiations (edited 12-16-24, just +150 words and no major changes)

🕑 Added 2024-11-29 19:06:54 +0000 UTC

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Koral

Correction: should be stealing pies The favorite one of the players was sealing pies left on the window sill to cool.

Flusspferd

I really like the story, even though VR is usually not my cup of tea. Only major bone I have to pick is that your numbers are a mess, way worse than in any of your other stories. This chapter has an example: the skill tiers should be as follows: Novice - 7 Expert - 23 Master - 43 Grandmaster - 67 Legendary - 89 At least assuming there is nothing between grandmaster and legendary, but you seem to imply that. Earlier chapters had similar issues, one chapter you mix up expert and master, etc. All in all, not abhinge deal, but for folks like me, who really enjoy numbers, it is a bit painful.

Silver Beard

Lord's Tithe is looking pretty sweet about now. It's a late game perk- and he's still developing/building atm. Pretty sure he didn't take it b/c his level was frozen.

Ben Waschuk

Really shoulda taken that 0.1% exp. +2 npc acuction not looking so hot anymore xD

Silver Beard

Perhaps; but now it's a time issue. Regressing to level 1 he's way behind the herd. Epic/Legendary plans require a lot of time the MC no longer has to spend. Lucky to make copies of what he already has until he's transferred.

Thomas Shaw

No longer nerfed drafting skill means he can finally make those legendary plans and keep them

Silver Beard

He needs to leverage his 'sprouts' more. Just like Kuba is seemingly reaching out to folks he 'knows'; surely the other developed NPCs AI's have some background history written in who might have 'contacts' they could reach out too. High level NPCs friends, former apprentices, or Masters that might enjoy the skill growth opportunities, Lord's disposition, and culture in his town. I can't help but think the great majority of other players treat the NPCs as fakes or not worth 'developing'. I could see his interaction with his NPC population a bonus that might sway someone serving a 'heartless' master to bail or move to Malcum. Did the other guild 'satisfy' his prerequisites or marginalize him and then continue to make unreasonable demands? Based on how the game is progressing- reputation should matter. Dip too low and pay the consequences. Author stated already that his town is geared more for NPCs than Players. Time to use and abuse that. Possibly tailor and improve the quality of the 'random' NPCs showing up.

Silver Beard

dollar to god[gold] conversation rate; a new record. This is the only obvious typo I found.

J S

Hmmmm!

Jeremy Young

TFTC

Silver Beard

Still should look into more builders; just junior ones should be cheap enough. He's got the means to level npc skills quickly. Just make his current ones mentors/foreman. A little slower but maybe better targeted skills. Same with earth/stone mage.

Eriach

The lawyering was decently done sir

Erick Thiemke

sorry about that. i am a lightweight when it comes to alcohol. i drank too much yesterday. i was also still trying to feel out the ending of this chapter. needs a rewrite before i start the next one. this was 4th of 4 so even though it was late, the next chapter is next week


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