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A Soldier's Life - 323 - Restocking (edited 11-3-25) removed purchase of goliath translation amulet)

🕑 Added 2025-01-05 04:48:12 +0000 UTC

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Brett Ulakovic

Should make amulet come with different languages especially form the country (tas wood comes from) that he is pretending to be from when he got conscripted

Trevayne

Thanks for the chapter. I wonder if Raella could eventually build up her relevant affinity so she could employ a slow aging spell form as well. She has roughly a thousand years or so to build it up. For that matter, there are no guarantees. IIRC they looked at human life expectancy if there were no deaths from disease or aging. The average life expectancy wound up at about 700 or so due to deaths from suicide or accidents.

Adam V

Edit: A silver coin, and -[after] a short cold shower and scrubbing later, Raelia was nestled in my arms in a heated stone tub. (remove either after or later)

Erick Thiemke

i am going to start editing in nvember so that is an easy additon

Rodmin

What did Eryk do the 1.5 months on the ship? So far he learned all languages with the help of his amulet in mere days to at least understand much and say most things. Why didn't he at least put a few hours into learning the goliath language from maveith and the other 70 goliaths? Especially since he wants to stay there a bit and hunt manticores (and maybe team up with goliath-hunters).

caeven

there was no need to. every language he's learned till now was out of necessity.

Jordan A

“Fortunately, some of my pellets and potions had been in my dimensional belt, but I had a small supply remaining.” …but I ‘only’ had a small supply remaining…

Maxcrazy7

I'm surprised that Eryk didn't learn his supposably best friend language.

Andrew Crews

I woke with a start from a nightmare [about] being trapped in the demon dungeon, the entrance sealed, and constantly dealing with meddlesome quasits. Coming awake, I experienced that feeling [of disorientation] when you don’t know where you are or how you got there [after being abruptly pulled from sleep]. My danger sense kicked in, and I was on my feet with [Magebane] appearing in my hand. I slowly relaxed as I remembered where I was. Raelia banged on the door, her muted voice shouting, “Eryk, you put the bar lock on the door!” [Magebane vanished], and I walked to the door, pulsing [Earth Speak] to make sure Raelia was alone. I slid the bolt and opened the door to find Raelia and Baldo. Baldo chirped, irritated at me and having to wait, and sauntered into the room. Raelia looked amused. “You weren’t having fun without me, were you?” “Maybe,” I grinned back at her and let her in, sliding the bolt back in place. “The inn has baths with showers. I am going to wash, and I suggest you do the same,” she [said with a wink]. Baldo curled into a ball on the bed and put his head on my pillow. I snapped my fingers and whistled, but he didn’t move and just closed his eyes, ignoring me. He looked exhausted, and I [felt bad for him], but I still reclaimed my pillow. [He didn’t even flinch when I snatched it away, simply settling his head on his forelimbs instead.] “How did Baldo do?” [I asked as I shook out the pillow and made it disappear.] Raelia stripped to her underclothes, [her movements animated as she spoke]. “[Many goliath children were watching us practice, which made him want to show off. All the clapping and cheering pushed him to work twice as hard, but I think he overdid it.] He was so exhausted that he had trouble on the walk back here.” I [set down] a bowl of cubed meat and water for him. [He didn’t even stir, a clear sign he was completely spent.] “He [struggles] with tight turns, but once [I’m] riding him, [it’ll] be easier to teach him.” “[Any word] from the others?” I asked, [pulling] off my underclothes as well to join her.

Erick Thiemke

it wasnt mentioned but it would make sense that he would have paged through it and have the ability to add it to the dreamscape. i will not it in the excel spreadsheet as such

Karnnie

Thanks for going over his finances. It would be very helpful if you gave actual money spent for all items as well so that people can keep track. Also, He did add the Fire spell book to his Dreamscape, right, right!?

Salvo

She'll live to be 1000, right? Humans are goldfish. You go through 20 of them like that. Watch some Frieran and get back to me. My point is one party is going to face a longer time without the other, and BOTH parties could be protecting themselves, for the wrong reason. Eryk can turn it off as an example. Raelia may be rejecting her clan forever, and not need to! Eryk could be seeing her as the goldfish!

Erick Thiemke

ancient skeleton. no he never dug it up. it might be in a later book...

Zurko

I just remembered he never picked up the dragon corpse. I'm assuming that'll be in a later book? cus that's gotta be some of the strongest materials you can get.

Zurko

I dont think that's a fair comparison. cancer is a lot more immediate of a concern that naturally aging. like a 60+ year difference.

Salvo

Nice chapter. I do appreciate the trust signals between Eryk and Raelia. Had her sell his jewelry, sorted his coin supply, ‘control’ of his dream amulet. Even knows he is an out-worlder. The only problem is that doesn’t look like a date. You could just as easily use the dream amulet for that, sharing dinner for another world as an example. Maybe pretend the next meeting with the Goliath leaders is like a fancy ball. ‘Sorry, I appreciate the thanks, but I promised a dance, you understand Maveith?’ Not telling Raelia he will live as long as her is really self-destructive; imagine you’re dating someone that thinks you are dying of cancer, but you don’t have cancer.

Erick Thiemke

corrected on teh master

Enk

oops, their/there type

Enk

Ahh, Soap at last!! Thanks, this has worried me ever since the dungeon-of-little-bathing. why were their demons

Gyatzilla

Thank you!

Salvo

Konstantin called him an out-worlder to the members of the resistance, just before the bone etcher scene. I think it’s best to say everyone knows his space affinity is impossible. But, any information they WANT makes them a liability, which is why they don’t ask.

Andrew

Thank you!

Mark Corwin

Thanks. This is a good setup chapter for some exciting manicure hunting and hopefully some great essences.

BubblyGhost

Reveal was never explicitly made, just the sort of open secret never voiced sort of 'knowing'.

John Donovan

Would eryk share this? He has kept his cards close to his chest for almost the entire story.

Mark Corwin

Tube > tub

Jordan A

Excited for meeting Maveith’s Dad! I’m curious about the direction you’ll go with it.

1536539

Thank you for the chapter

Erick Thiemke

corrected

Jordan A

“I figured that if Maveith would stay here when I returned to Castile….” Remove the “if”

Erick Thiemke

i thought she knew....I know the Bartiradians suspected so she would as well. if that reveal was not made, I could edit it in on the voyage to Stone Mountain Island

Eriach

Always good to world build, background information is just as vital as battle scenes

Erick Thiemke

corrected

Jordan A

“You want to go home?” she asked cautiously. Up to this point I don’t think Eric mentioned he’s an out worlder to her. I could be wrong though.

Jordan A

“She said, pressing into me and looking up into me.” “Into me” sounds a little odd. What about “into my eyes”?

Erick Thiemke

2nd of 4, Chapter coming on Monday and another on Tuesday. Bit of a slow chapter but we should be hunting manticores in two chapters


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