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A Soldier's Life - 324 - I Am Your Father

🕑 Added 2025-01-08 02:32:52 +0000 UTC

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Brianna Stormcloud

Thanks for the emotional chapter, that scene has been a long time coming ... You did it proud :)

Bryan Schnebly

Edit: Unlike most builders designed to symbolize authority, it didn’t try to dominate the buildings surrounding it. Unlike most buildings designed to symbolize authority, it didn’t try to dominate the buildings surrounding it. If you don't want to use buildings twice, you can replace the second one with something like "those" or "the ones"

Erick Thiemke

thanks, i made a lot of the corrections

Erick Thiemke

edited

Erick Thiemke

edits made

Adam V

Very touching chapter :') Edits: He spoke with [surprisingly]->[surprising] formality and pose, Maveith stood in white robes with a silver sash, [he wore]->[wearing] a massive grin. Her tone was not such that she was trying to make me feel guilty and -[make] decline a reward, just stating the truth.

Erick Thiemke

i thnk he gave the wine to Castille....but I dont recall how much if not all

Aspiring Sage

ARAO, in the previous chapter about provisioning, you should consider mentioning he got casks of water and juice, and that he used the elven ambrosia chalice daily on the ship, etc that way you can explain away how he has food, drinks, apples, grain etc in future chapters and books without a problem. Also, I just realized, did he lose the last 50+ bottles of Caledorian wine too? Ouch. That's like 5,000 to 10,000 gold right there...

caeven

its just one type of essence that he already has a fairly high score for. it should take him a couple weeks at most. would you NOT hustle for less than a month to save a friend from a life lived in agony? this is completey reasonable.

Jordan A

She slowly turned red and touched her face, hiding a smile. “I will remember that next time I am trying to kill you.” her -> my I’m not sure why she would touch her own face so changing her to my makes her action teasing/sultry with Eryk.

R. Maxwell Steele

"What I don’t understand is how the island supports so many manticores" Manticore dungeon nearby for sure. Very likely that it's not had a surface opening, so they have to come up from deeps nearby. Each new one probably fights the established ones for their spot. So no matter how many the goliaths kills, they always come back. If they put out the word that they created channeling essence, could probably attract many hunters like our MC. Alternatively, they could gather enough money to buy the island a collector and then export the the channeling essence and bring tons of money to the island. Ideally they could trap them and then put one in a each dungeon to really make the channeling essence more available, but that would also be less lucrative.

Ben

Eryk the doormat planning to farm 45-90 essence but not for himself…. Classic Will he ever try and improve his own magic seriously? It’s becoming annoying

Andrew Crews

We dressed in our best available clothes. I had my clothes from Telha and the manticore cloak, while Raelia had a shirt she had purchased during the shopping spree and comfortable blue linen pants. She added [a subtle] rouge gloss to her lips, the only makeup she wore. She had pulled her silky dark hair back and braided it. She wore a gold necklace with a thumbnail-sized emerald [that complemented] her eyes. Her ears were [prominently visible], and she had sapphire earrings shaped like a hummingbird [taken from] the chest I got from the werewolves. I admitted [to myself that] the jewelry looked good on her. Even in her common clothes, she looked regal. “Why are you staring?” she asked demurely. I inhaled sharply in appreciation. “If you looked like that when we first met, you might have frozen me in my tracks and been able to put your blade through my heart.” She slowly turned red and touched her face, hiding a smile. “I will remember that next time I am trying to kill you.” “You say the most romantic things,” I [teased]. “We should hurry. [Even though he had brought back Zorana, Maveith was apprehensive about seeing his father again.]” [Clarified] We warned the innkeeper about entering the room with the [griffin] guarding it and made our way through the city. The city streets were immaculately clean, and all the structures were simple stone, with some ornate, realistic statues scattered throughout. [Each statue had inscriptions at its base, possibly serving as an educational tool or a way to document the city’s history and the dangers lurking beyond the walls.] [Clarified] Konstantin appeared at my side, clean-shaven and not wearing armor or a sword. “What?” he asked, [noticing my scrutiny]. I didn’t respond, just shook my head, and we continued to the [Council Assembly Building.] Each goliath town and city was a separate government, usually run by a clan, but they functioned as a cooperative nation on the island. Goliaths had a different outlook on power and wealth, much of which I [had already learned] from my time with Maveith. They didn’t crave either, as goliaths focused on family and achieving a quality of life. This was one of the reasons they looked down on the [Adventurers’ Guild] and adventurers in general. By nature, an adventurer sought wealth and power by risking their life—something goliaths generally frowned upon. Maveith had also told me the goliaths used to serve the [Titans, particularly the stone giants.] They [had assisted in constructing] the wonders of the world back when the Titans ruled Desia. I assumed some of that subservience had carried down through the generations. Nothing was ostentatious in Eternis, not even the [Council Assembly Building.] It was made of large blocks of stone, carefully laid, and had only a single story. Unlike [most government buildings designed to symbolize authority, this one blended modestly into the cityscape.] [Clarified] Pristine white stone statues surrounded the building. They all depicted [larger-than-life] goliaths, probably their heroes or leaders. [Perhaps one day, Maveith’s statue would join them for bringing back the lost members of his people.] [Clarified] As we approached, Konstantin put his hand on my shoulder. “Gilda says the families are reunited at the feast every night. I don’t know where [she is now, nor where the Stoneskin Clan members are, but I am guessing Maveith has not seen his father yet.] You shouldn’t tell him he is here, or you may anger the Council.” “Anger the Council?” I asked, confused. “They want the emotional spectacle to play out publicly,” he said [with a hint of disdain.] [Clarified] It made some sense to me, and I thought it would benefit Maveith’s standing. “Thank you, Konstantin. Are you joining us?” I asked as we approached the structure. “I heard the food was good,” Konstantin grunted noncommittally. “I’ve been talking to the goliath hunters about hunting manticores.” I looked at him to continue. “The other end of the island has the largest population— as many as a hundred, if that’s to be believed. They hunt the shallow waters for fish, the jungle for other predators, and the slopes for goats. [Not ordinary mountain goats, either—the ones here are massive and aggressive.] What I don’t understand is how the island supports so many manticores.” [Clarified] “How many do the goliath hunters kill annually?” Raelia asked. Konstantin appreciated the question, nodding at Raelia. “There are two goliath clans that focus on hunting. One only hunts during the birthing season, [hoping to curb] the population. The other focuses on hunting in areas where the manticores are encroaching on goliath farmlands and attacking livestock. From my conversations with the local hunters, the two clans combined kill less than three dozen a year.” I followed up with a question. “How many manticores [are] on the entire island?” “It’s a big island, but the hunters I talked to think there are fewer than two hundred,” Konstantin said, which made me nod in relief. I estimated Castile needed between 45 and 90 [apex] channeling essences to heal her burnt aether channels. Not that it was guaranteed the manticores would give [channeling essences—or even apex essences.] The two adults we had killed had given major channeling essences, but the juvenile one had given an [air] essence.

Jamie Idle

I was wondering the same rarity vs efficiency of essences doesn't quite make since. Without Eryk's two advantages with essences they seem almost pointless. Also I am surprised rituals or spell forms to make essences more efficient aren't more common.

Karnnie

Are we sure it will take 45-90? That is quite the difference between high and low and APEX essences are supposed to be able to bring a normal persons stat up by +1 right? she only lost 3 points. Is there really that much of a difference in the potency of APEX essences?

Invalid Entry

I never said he wasted it. His choices are eminently practical especially for innate abilities considering he’ll eventually find enough shaping essence to become a real hairy wizard (if nothing kills him first). They’re just not the most exciting picks. However I think intrinsic flight, especially without cast times so he could work it into his fighting style in short bursts, is even more practical than cool. He wouldn’t just be able to make impossible leaps to escape strikes or boost himself into insanely fast strafes or charges, but even couple little bursts of flight with his footwork to move almost like a character in a gpa video game, changing direction of movement near immediately in a way that defies the concept of momentum. Once he worked it out he’d be near impossible to fight and considering girly (I forget her name lol, updates come too slowly to remember such details. The elemental isn’t girl who sat on his face) could fly for minutes at a time using short bursts for combat shouldn’t even be a significant mana drain except in long battles maybe.

Shandlar

He's no longer under continuous threat of instant death. Given how much of a hardcore pragmatist the character has been, there's no reason to assume he won't realize his near immortality gives him time to get high common affinities before inscribing a spell. His night vision was accidental and his void choice was due to knowing he had literally no chance of obtaining void essences in the empire. He hasn't really wasted anything else imho.

Invalid Entry

Flight would be amazing and not just for flying. The potential in adding the power of short bursts of flight to your ground based combat movements would be game changing. However first he needs to see one of those specialists to deal with his core issues and then he’ll probably choose something boring but really practical from the lowest tier as soon as he gets enough air affinity like he usually does.

Shandlar

Tolerance was multiples of your pool per 24 hours, yeah. But I think channeling was flat gain over time that grew exponentially. I did do the wrong math though, going 10 20 30 40 50 instead of 10 20 40 80 160. So he'd be at 22.75 aether an hour or 2 hours to fill his whole pool now. 37 minutes maximum time to use the space kill given we know it's possible with 14 aether points. 5.25 minutes per air shield. Half that per earth pulse. However we weren't given an exact amount the drain from the ageless time imprint is so some unknown amount slower than that.

InfernalDrake

It’s exponential though if I recall? I think it scales off of both his channeling and his aether pool size, which has also increased since then. At the very least, I remember that Burning was linked to Aether pool size.

1536539

Yeah but my point is, he doesn’t need to use it back to back, just once per manticore, if he somehow missed, he still has other ways of defending himself

Shandlar

I just looked it up from book 1. When channeling was 14 it took roughly 4 hours to recover 9 effective points of pool. So each effective channeling power is 1 effective aether pool point per 8 hours. So Eryks uper high channeling now gets him 14.5 points an hour. So yeah, I guess still not even close to using it back to back. He still needs essentially an hour recovery to use the space on a living thing between each time.

Shandlar

It used to take a long time to regen, but his core and channeling are way bigger now. 24 is not double of 12 core it's 3.3x bigger. He was able to kill the land shark thing with only 12 core, so we know he only needs to recover a third of his aether at most now to kill something with his space.

Shandlar

No way. He's 0 on air, so he'd have to unlock it. I can't imagine he'd risk destroying his core for that. With his core already way overstressed he'd probably need 20+ aether core ess before he can unlock another affinity from 0.

Chachi

and now eryk is on to farm essences i wonder if he can unlock the air affinity to make make him faster or fly would be kino

1536539

Yeah but he doesn’t need to use it multiple times, Manticores are solitary creatures, plus he has trusted comrades to watch over his back if anything happens, he can set a bait in a manticore’s hunting territory, wait in ambush, take a chunk out of the manticores frontal lobe when it lands to eat the bait, use the collector then manually butcher the carcus, repeat, even if he hunted a single manticore a day he would still reach his target in less than 4 months, there is no rush for him, he is the hunter not the prey.

Zurko

each time he uses his space on a living thing it bottoms out his aether, and takes a long time to regen. he can't do it multiple times in a fight. I don't think he could get every limb + tail + wings in a single use of space on a moving target. plus, didn't the also have some magic or something last time he fought them? or a poison or something.

Eriach

Loot everything!

Eriach

Yeah..

Ivan Kanewske

=) :) Good one

Salvo

She would need to channel essence, which she might not be able to do.

Salvo

I love the shameless taking of the meat and cheese trays, freakin loot goblin!

Erick Thiemke

Thanks I will change it.

Robert Briscoe

Erik best hope real Zorana never meets Dream amulet Zorana. I bet those two would get up to mischief

Justin Barnett

Also, Eryk got a minor air essence from the baby manticore.

1536539

Thank you for the chapter, if living creatures yield better essences, he can use his space to effectively lobotomize the manticores then use the collector on a technically still living body.

Justin Barnett

Yes ignis told Eryk they were platinum.

Erick Thiemke

damn, really? they were platinum though, right? i have them in red in my notes but didnt note who got them

Justin Barnett

Eryk gave the leaf earrings to ignis in chapter 267.

Andrew

Thank you!

Erick Thiemke

3rd of 4, this is yesterday's chapter. If it doesnt get the reader to choke up a bit, I will try to edit it to do so


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