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A Soldier's Life - 326 - All You Can Eat Wings

🕑 Added 2025-01-11 00:36:21 +0000 UTC

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Adam V

Heh

TyrTheFallen

Now that i think about it they are kind of like the Witcher with hunting monsters.

Andrew Crews

Grammatical Corrections: 1. (Paragraph 5) “Looked alike” (repeated twice) → Consider changing to avoid redundancy. 2. (Paragraph 10) “Large leopard cats” → Could be reworded to “oversized leopards” or “giant leopard-like beasts” for clarity. 3. (Paragraph 26) “wracking” (in “wracking her body”) → Should be “racking” (correct spelling). 4. (Paragraph 9) “at the last second” → Could be “in the final moments” for variety. 5. (Paragraph 22) “Voicing the unspoken” is a smoother alternative to “stating the unsaid.” 6. (Paragraph 23) “Maybe one day, when I let her read my assessment reading, and she asked what was my spell form was for my 90 affinity in time.” → Corrected to: “Maybe one day, when I let her read my assessment, she would ask about my spell form for my 90 affinity in time.” 7. (Paragraph 30) “properly celebrate you” → “Properly” is implied; “celebrate you” is stronger on its own. 8. (Paragraph 38) “You can bathe afterward.” → Comma splice corrected to: “Time to get back to work—you can bathe afterward.”

Apophixas

It's also good to keep it this way, otherwise he'd almost never face true danger, if he could use his space twice or more in pitched combat. I think eventually having enough aether to get just some of the more resistant beings into his space would be a good outcome, while leaving the truly challenging creatures as still major threats that can't be insta gibbed.

Erick Thiemke

or maybe "Sacs Full Of Nuts"

Zurko

yo Is he gonna use the essence collector on the dungeon core? I always wondered about that cus it was said dungeons are alive.

Erick Thiemke

Yes. Basically what happens is he tries to close his dimensional space and the resistance of the creature counters the magic. His aether fights the resistance and when it fails, the open space closes automatically since he has no aether left to keep it open

Justin Barnett

Is there a in world reason for that, other than you not wanting to make him too overpowered?

Erick Thiemke

He just dumped Selene in Castile s lap and didn’t talk to her. He was like, “here you go. Gotta run. Hope she isn’t too mad.” For viridia he left her as she was trying to assume control over her dead husbands merchant empire

Erick Thiemke

That will likely never change. Maybe for smaller creatures but humans will always zero him out

Erick Thiemke

Yes, link in chapter release notes post

Lemes

Why would he imagine that Selene and Viridia would have left? As far as I remember, they had taken up residence in Granmey.

Samuel McCarren

I can see some upside from a shape shifting gf tho 🤔

Samuel McCarren

Goliaths are a little strange so maybe wanting the dungeon destroyed for them makes sense given how many manticotres have killed their people over the years. That said I once found they could just control it and it would be a great national resource if only to lease to the guild.

Chachi

kino chapter hopefully eryk can get that aether pool up some seems detrimental to constantly drain it all in one use

Shandlar

Celebrity is used as a noun by itself like that in many English dialects.

Shandlar

Unreliable narrator. The person who told Eryk that was using common sense of the world. 5 or 6 Apex to gain 1 point of potential would mean what, 12 or 15 majors. Maybe even 18. The information that majors would be enough in high quantity as a cumulative effect appears to be protected information in the Empire. Recall later on the emperor gave his burned general mage a major ess to help with his burn. The powers that be are aware that a majors will still contribute like 0.08 or whatever to potential to help repair burned channels.

Sunto

Ah fair enough, love the chapter ty. Btw is there a discord?

Alex

Best chapter ending! K is Da man…

Jordan A

That makes more sense. Thanks!

Erick Thiemke

The 2400 is bounties and selling stuff Naveith didn’t take

Erick Thiemke

I corrected it to 24 hundred which is what I meant

Salvo

It says 24 hundred gold, as in 2400 gold. I think this is 2 runic weapons, Or a new griffon egg. Or likely the most valuable to Eryk, 2 baths a day for 8 years.

PatronTurtle

There's probably growth pains if not scars from his previous issue. We'll see

Jordan A

Did they get the bounties for each manticore killed? I think it was 50 gold per kill, but there is no mention of getting the gold for the bounties. Is getting that gold going to be mentioned at some point?

Jordan A

24 gold? That seems really low for everything they’re selling. They have various organs, wings, and intact poison sacs. The poison sacs themselves are worth significant amount as, when the poison is used to make an antidote, the antidote is worth 30 gold per use. I know a finished product is worth more than the raw materials, but 24 gold seems low for just the poison sacs. The cloaks made from the wings are also a status symbol so the material to make them would be worth a lot. All this being said, 24 gold gold for all these materials is not much even after considering they kept some for themselves.

Erick Thiemke

maybe "All You Can Eat Wings" ....that is funny, no?

Garrett

How about for a title "Wings on Scale"?

Erick Thiemke

i did change him from signing it Eryk to just E

Erick Thiemke

to the dungeon? she is more of a support character

Erick Thiemke

spoiler, its not. but maybe Firth finds it on Castile's nightstand...

Erick Thiemke

corrected

Erick Thiemke

he took a major essence. the other all have spell forms so they have magic. it is porbably their first time comsuming a channeling essence

Erick Thiemke

i kind of like this as is...substituted celebrity for fame

Erick Thiemke

corrected

Erick Thiemke

corrected

Erick Thiemke

corrected

Erick Thiemke

corrected

hrs

remember to spay and neuter your manticores

Prinny Knight

That letter is definitely being seen by our teammate turned traitor

Erick Thiemke

Yes that is correct from book 1, but this about repairing damaging channels. I think Zyna told him as such but I will get to that part of book 4 an the edit

Ivan Kanewske

Command = comma Spell check is evil, I am sure you understand

Ivan Kanewske

Good chapter, thank you

Ivan Kanewske

Maybe it does, just takes time from the previous damage

Justin Barnett

I kind of expected an aether capacity essence to fix Eryks core like channeling essence heals burnt channels.

Ivan Kanewske

She sifted to face me and began scrubbing down, fouling the water, but I was Sifted to shifted

Ivan Kanewske

You need to understand ships are lost at sea, and sometimes Either that ships are lost at sea Or a a command, You need to understand, ships are lost at sea, and sometimes

Justin Barnett

Can major essence do anything for Castile? Only apex essence can raise potential and I thought the only way to fix aether burn was by restoring the lost potential points.

Robert Briscoe

A Plethora of Potential Pouches. Alliteration for the win!

Ivan Kanewske

When we raise anchor, we will make for Galanoris and spend a few months without families before our next trade voyage.” Did you mean with our families??, not without families?

Ivan Kanewske

“We are closer to Eternis, and I wanted to talk with Captain Taegen if he hasn’t I wanted would flow better as I want or I would like to

Ivan Kanewske

Maveith was happy his celebrity had not reached here. I purchased Maybe Celebrity status ,, instead of just Celebrity

Ivan Kanewske

Why isn't he using the minor channeling essence? He needs them as well

Ivan Kanewske

Of the seven males we slew, six liked similar, while the Liked to looked

Justin Barnett

I feel like that letter is going to get intercepted. With Firth looking for Castile, it simply has too much information for him not to get his hands on it.

Erick Thiemke

Eh, I thought about it. It doesn’t make sense that the captain cares about the Telhian Empire. I think he is reasonable trustworthy

Erick Thiemke

I already told you the plot. It requires Raelia remain in the dark

Silver Beard

So getting Gilda to come along is going to be important?

Erick Thiemke

Yes. Spoiler. Destroying the dungeon is the first half of this arc

Salvo

Eryk letter reveals WAY too much for a trained hound agent to ever write! The letter should be to Adrian’s rest, not a wanted criminal. In hiding. And coded more, say a product salesman or something. ‘I’m still storing that elven whiskey goblet to share a drink with you. Half my bodyguard team refused to sail and should be returning from the orc caliphate. Our Goliath contact is back with his family, and we may have a lead on a burn ointment, but our aged scout says we need a year.’ Signed your griffon pillow porter.

Silver Beard

Any chance they actually find the Dungeon or Dark entrance? More interested in a Dungeon (as there are chest rewards), but either would be big for the Goliath's people...and possibly the Adventure Guild.

Silver Beard

Can't help being a little disappointed he keeps holding back he's going to live longer than her. Seems like a key part of their relationship. She's obviously keeping it loose but for the wrong reasons.

Silver Beard

He has Gilda and Eryk has Raelia- I'd be petty too!

Joel

Konstatine being petty cause he losing in training.

Andrew

Thank you!

Eriach

Sac's thrown round?

Eriach

Tftc!! <3

Erick Thiemke

1st of 4 for cycle. Needs a better title, though. Working on Town Builder now


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