Patrefans
alwaysrollsaone from patreon
alwaysrollsaone patreon

World Sphere - 43 - Waiting Game

🕑 Added 2025-01-13 00:45:16 +0000 UTC

Comments

Virgil Washington

That wasn't ok for storm to upstage Gareth. He has no interest in women so why do that to his friend. I can understand a prank, but dam.

Anthony Glenn

Am I the only one who sees Stormes friendship with Gareth having an expiration date? It seems inevitable that their desires diverge as, even now, their goals are misaligned.

Erick Thiemke

he hasn't crossed that line yet. still think simplier utility spells are the best way to go. early in book 2 he starts on the path to becoming OP with listening reflexes. he turns the alarm spell into a "flash-bang" as well

Mr. Smith

I realize this is a rewrite, but why would the MC decide his next spell would be an Alarm spell? The MC has no offensive magic, has Level 2 in Lightning Magic, and almost died trying to save his sister because he had no magic to assist in the battle on the river bank. And from that experience, the MC thinks an Alarm Spell should be a priority ...

Space Cadet

Through => threw

BubblyGhost

detoured -> deterred

Erick Thiemke

no, just a cut and paste format error

visigoth

The whole thing is in bold - not sure if that was intentional or not...

Erick Thiemke

this might be a better spot to end book 1....will think on it after i read the last 3 chapters I had for book 1


More Creators