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A Soldier's Life - 329 - Living A Charmed Life (edited 1-15-24 +120 words, just cleaned it up a bit)

🕑 Added 2025-01-15 06:04:17 +0000 UTC

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Adam V

Edits: Hopefully, something in this list would strike me as useful +[to] imprint with my 23 charm affinity. (Also, multiple uses of 'Aesop')

Readreadread

Aesop was renamed Corvus, if I remember correctly

Apophixas

"Ning Ning Ning Ning ning-ni-ning! What the fox say?" "Oh gods, please kill me! Make it stop!"

Asterrahl

Don't forget the dreamscape amulet!

Brett

If you can share concepts rather than words via telepathy, are thoughts words or images? Can you imagine the ptsd someone could transfer via telepathy during battle? Just sending nonsense? Shrieking screaming thoughts being sent just before you ambush a sentry from a hidden position? Influencing monsters by passing along concepts of things they are instinctively afraid of? Could you imagine someone being tortured with “what does the fox say” being telepathically sent for hours and hours? On and off - for days… weeks…

Jordan A

I’d love to see the story of his time learning to be a mage similar to what you’ve done with his experience as a soldier (with obvious differences. He can’t be randomly teleported to the same world twice). I’m assuming it would pick up somewhat soon after you finish the 10 books on the Soldier part of his life. He’s a great character with a lot of runway left in front of him.

Erick Thiemke

the pain gets exponentially worse. another way to cure aether burn is to become an undead....no foreshadowing there. yes definitely no foreshadowing there

1536539

Are there any repercussions more severe than burnt channels for exceeding your tolerance?

Erick Thiemke

ather tolerance is a reflection of the aether pool. so say a 10 aether tolerance allows you to channel your entire aether pool in a day. A 20 intolerance would allow you to channel twice your aether pool, going to 4 times at 30. If the aether pool grew from 10 to 20, that would also double how much aether the mage could channel and give them a larger reservoir

1536539

I see, but if he channeled more than his aether tolerance allowed he would just get burned right? He could just eat channeling essences until he heals his channnels again and again, essentially making his aether tolerance a non-issue.

Erick Thiemke

corrected, just doing a read/edit before copying the corrections to Patreon

Mark Corwin

which made leaning > learning

Erick Thiemke

corrected

Erick Thiemke

corrected

Erick Thiemke

no, just the dream world. split mind would be a different spell. the dreamscape amulet is incredibly useful as it is a library/training/learning device. this is the same thing but has a much larger space to work with

Erick Thiemke

aether channeling is how fast he recharge. aether tolerance is how much aether he can channel in a day, aether pool is how much aether he can store. aether shaping is heis conrol over aether and aether resistence is his resistence to other people's magic

Erick Thiemke

there is talk of the second series being called A Mage's Life...another 10 books but lets try to finish this one first. Just passed the halfway point

Erick Thiemke

yes, one at a time and he now has three. the clarity pendant, the arcane shield amulet, and the goliath translation amulet

Erick Thiemke

will do

Erick Thiemke

both corrected, thanks

Florian Brauer

Two edit suggestions: this would be all that I had LEFT of her meaning very FEW mages in the world could successfully inscribe the spell on their aether core

Justin Barnett

You could also include the golden statue in the labyrinth when Eryk is thinking about times he was was attacked mentally.

John Donovan

How is Eryk using 2 necklaces? Am I confusing this with another series? I could of sworn he could only use one ring on each hand. Maybe make it a circlet he wears on his head.

Joseph Snyder

How is he using 2 necklaces at once.

Samuel McCarren

When you're finished writing this series I'd love to read a spin off far in the future (500, 1000, 2000+ years). Maybe where Eryk has long since become a legend and been forgotten. A story where he ends his self imposed exile but still tries to stay on the down low navigating the world of forgotten and hidden monsters. Maybe even world jumping who knows? Would be satisfying to see the outcome from all these 'early days' decisions after his time and convergence affinities have had time to bear fruit.

Samuel McCarren

It would be insane not too look, in a world where someone could use these type of spells against Id wanna know everything about them!

Andrew

Thank you!

Chachi

i know eryk wont be a full battle wizard but it would be nice if he can get high up in charm affinity to unlock mindwipe or mass charm especially if he is in a pinch of a situation. mindwipe can also help with erasing his enemies memories of him securing his secrets.

Salvo

2 chapters, wow! I know mind fortress is gonna be useful, I just don’t like it creativity. Air shield is great in design, utility and limited. Mind fortress is only resistants to a subtype of magic. How about it can flare to block others in contact, or block pain.

BubblyGhost

I get the feeling author bro doesn't want to make the MC a full mage, so this would be a good niche of a pseudo spam caster. . .or I guess a witcher would be a good comparison lol

1536539

Channeling makes aether regeneration faster as well as increasing the total amount of aether he can use continuously without being burned right? If so this dungeon can be the solution to his small core, with enough channeling he could regenerate mana faster then he can spend it in a fight, essentially becoming a spell slinging dynamo with ridiculous magical stamina.

1536539

Yay 2 chapters!

Damien P

If you don't post, we understand mate. You have a life and unfortunately, something has happened to disrupt your work. We understand and if the are people who complain, they can...... Take all the time you need and I'm hopeful that now it's a recovery, instead of anything more. Either way, thank you for your posts, we all love them. Thank you.

Ivan Kanewske

Dreamworld?? From description Could you never need sleep because part of you is always sleeping while your are functioning awake constantly working on skills? Almost like a split mind?

Ivan Kanewske

least this spell form required an affinity of 70 to imprint, meaning very mages in the world could successfully inscribe the spell on their aether core. Very makes to very few mages

Erick Thiemke

Update in last chapter. She is still in discomfort but seems better than lat night

Ivan Kanewske

experienced a very similar effect in the dreamscape which made leaning much easier. A pendant of clarity was Leaning to learning

Ivan Kanewske

Thank you, How is your pup doing

Erick Thiemke

for the readers - world building stuff to know what's out there

Nick Nicholson

Why is he even looking at the higher affinity charm spells?

Erick Thiemke

4th of 4. Will work on Town Builder tomorrow. Rushed this and was tired and will do a read edit tomorrow.


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