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A Soldier's Life - 312 - Changing Fortunes (final edit 9-25-25)

🕑 Added 2024-12-15 04:15:25 +0000 UTC

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Justin Akers

Give me more haha

Erick Thiemke

Nuclear bombs, space ships, understanding the cell, the internet, human influencers

Jesper Hansen

I liked this chapter :) and I do not agree with the comments, I don't think Eryk is being all that out of character, we've heard a lot of thoughts about how he is holding it in for his friends sister. I did not like how he just bowed down and didn't really get angry at the titans.. But they are seemingly like gods who could tear open his dimensional space, so it makes sense, I guess I've just read too many novels where in a situation like this a protagonist would surge with some weird anger potential power thing and either slaughter them all or impress them enough to do lose out.. I did not like this tho: "but technology that is far superior to what mages can do with spells", because that's just factual untrue and doesn't make any sense.

Brianna Stormcloud

Oh dear! Thank you for the chapters 😁

Louis Nel

At this stage I just assume Glasha is working against Eryk because she cannot go more than two chapters without manipulation or deceit.

Erick Thiemke

edited in master

Erick Thiemke

edited

Erick Thiemke

added him in a bit, but not dovetailed with the trails

HappyNoms

Just pointing out that a spell form to selectively remove memories exists in the world's magic/lore, but has yet to be used. One would think Eryk would highly prioritize getting ahold of an artifact with it, or establish an ongoing relationship with a mercenary who contracts for it's use / memory edits on targets, or would add a specialist memory mage party member to the company, etc. It would give him a lot more optionality than just invariably needing to kill anyone that glimpses his dimensional ability use. Sometimes it's awkward for the plot for a rival or observer to be killed off, and it would give other plot point options.

Erick Thiemke

yeah the interactions will be rewritten. i might go with a straight up promise to free Zorana if Eryk helps Mynasha rather than the back and forth indeciveness

Martin Ljungberg

The biggest letdown of all of book 5 so far, is the complete lack of anger. Eryk was just robbed blind after bending over backward for a complete stranger, and he didn't have a single angry outburst? He has been exploited mulitiple times by Glasha, yet he has never gone for any reprisal. That strikes me as uncharacteristically unrealistic for the whole series. The human side of the series has been one of the better sides of this book, and despite the general spinelessness of all characters, there has been some realistic negative emotion shown; however, since Eryk started travelling from Telhia, there has been no anger or sorrow, frustration or grief or otherwise expressed emotion that shows that there's a man in there somewhere. He takes everything in a horrifically unsatisfying stride, even in a situation like this, where killing Mynasha would've been a completely reasonable reaction.

GucciG

It's kind of annoying to see that Warlord live but that's just me grumbling. I like Maveith as a character, but this entire arc to save his sister has been a massive investment with little to show for it. All Eryk really did was become the leader of his small crew and join the Guild. I'm hopeful that saving Maveith's sister was meant to act as a vessel for Eyrk to meet Mynasha for a massive payoff at the end.

Andrew Crews

Ginger’s head pushed into [me] for attention and an apple. I didn’t have the heart to tell her I only had one left. I didn’t even have any grain to supplement her grass. —— Glasha and Tarnasha met us at the guard post when we arrived at the [Elders’] Valley entrance. Glasha was [finely] dressed and [grinning] at us. Both looked like they had been waiting for some time.

Andrew Crews

What?” I hadn’t considered that. How long would I wait? “I will wait [for] the day.” “We don’t have food. We could return to the town and come back?” she offered as she returned to me at the ledge. “What if you are the only one to return? Will you be the Supreme?” I asked, thinking [that] if I killed the others without Mynasha knowing, perhaps her ignorance would allow her the seat.

Nicholas Livingston

The plot armor grows. The other cleric did a simple task that took two days.

Anel Alic

Yes the author did say something about merging affinities to make one stronger

Invalid Entry

He’s got a point lol. Early on apexes were dropping for pretty much any tough creature. Also wondering what task they could have done which would be equal to what Erik paid. It has to be at least as difficult as killing a bunch of trolls and ogres considering the essences the titans stole.

John Donovan

I agree but in all honesty most of those secrets would start leaking out eventually. For how much Eryk has been involved with powerful people it's a bit more surprising it took this long.

Deliver roo

He lost his secrets he became the center of unwanted attention instead of being inconsequencial. The empire and every country that has got problems with otherworlders is now a risk and he will be now known by his potential enemies before he is even aware of them.

michele 00

Meh

Scientist Valci

Not all. He got one from a wyren, one or two from the creatures the wardens fought(when he met the goliath), a lot from the water monsters like four, he was also getting major essences from kobolds and goblins. I don't remember everything, but am sure ogres and trolls are much stronger then those creatures and i thought essences are base on the highest stat and how high that stat is.

Erick Thiemke

the apex essences were from a long-neglected dungoen. also teh trolls are not from a dungeon - their ancestors were - they bred into a population and ventured to the surface (with some help). as for the orc escaping - it took so long because he had to do a task for Khrusos. Fioasha could not complete a task and was allowed to die

Scientist Valci

Yes it was nice. But why would the MC get himself into all this situations eludes me.

Scientist Valci

Hi. I read the 312 chapter in very quick succession and I notice a few weird balance changes. The essence drops are not consistent at all, througout the story, trolls that escaped a oversaturated dungeon dropping only major essences when he was getting apex from pretty much all the hard to kill mobs and ogers dropping minor??. I also like many have a problem with the MC doing everything he can to get involved with orc politics. You know they could have just waited for the Supreme to be chosen and than steal the slaves? Also the other orcs escaping makes no sense. He escaped because of the tons of dungeon food he had on him. They don't care about artifacts so how could they possibly escape.

Mark Corwin

Right. She with draws. Then the new leader says they are gonna need his things and they off the new leader while freeing his slaves. Sounds perfect.

Gyatzilla

Weird question. If Eric raised his wind affinity would it increase the power and durability of his air shields? If I remember correctly he gained the spell form from a different affinity but elementally it is still air magic?

The Cobra Den

If the your a DnD party it would be Fighter - constantine Elf girl- rogue/ ranger Orc- Sorcerer. Or druid Eryk- Paladin / bard

The Cobra Den

orc becoming the leader seems like the natural progression. I'm a d&d player and always thinking of party composition. We got Eric, Constantine, the elf girl and the ork. that's a strong party right there

Carlos Guzman

I appreciate the reply! Love the book. Your writing is phenomenal!

Erick Thiemke

see the pre-comment above. the edit is going to include that the Titans do entertain visitors so this is a test of the candidates diplomacy. Fioasha had an unknown advantage that he had already visited the Titans in his youth but this meeting he made an error and angered Khrusos. Khrusos struck down Warlord Etos and injured Fioasha

Carlos Guzman

I'd like to point out that with the current iteration and even the rewrite the challenge makes no sense. The elders are supposed to be creating challenges that are in Fiona's favor, but speaking to a bunch of giants that are essentially gods doesn't seem like it is a good challenge for her at all, because they don't like her anymore than anyone else. You mentioned she was looking for artificats in the lower levels that she already knew of, but then completely rushed past any attempts of her finding any or trying to. Why would she rush to the top?

InfernalDrake

Damn, the people in. comments are more murder-hobo than I thought. I think this is a good direction for the story to take. Plus the inventory clearing is nice. A spring cleaning was due anyways.

John Donovan

How and what did he lose?

Deliver roo

Well he let the other orcs live so news of him being an otherworlder and of his power will reach his enemies anyway. Who cares about Mynasha even if she wins Eryck lost already.

Deliver roo

Honesty Eryck shouldn’t even care about being disqualified at this point. He should just care about how many orcs he can kill before getting out of the Caliphate and before word of him being an otherworlder spills out to other countries. Nor the goliaths, nor his companions or his relations to important people in the Caliphate should matter as much as keeping his secrets. One of his enemies making it back to base with that lind of knowledge is potentially a game over. Eryck can fix the situation by disappearing for a century I suppose, but I don’t think this is where this story is going.

Deliver roo

It is difficult to move on when he just lost most of his shit and suddenly his enemies know who he really is and can use it against him. Basically now Eryck cannot go to any place on Desia that has got something against otherworlders and needs to be alerted at all time, it should affect the story and probably not in a good way.

Kimberlee

I like the dimensional space reset at the midpoint of MCs overall story. Good to humble him a bit and not have a cure for every inconvenience at his fingertips.

Aaron Weingrad

Mynasha will be a disaster for the Orcs or at best a useful figurehead.

Valter Anunciação

Damn that's tarded. At least my membership ends in a week. Dropped.

Erick Thiemke

it is probably going to go something like: He gives the apple-berry jam up. The Titans like it. He will not be volunteering the bear meat, instead Khrusos will then forcibly empty his space next. So he only revealed a 24" cauldron on his own. It will be such that the MC will be painful aware he is no match for the three storm giants. Angry about it - yes. Can he do anything about it - no.

John Donovan

Why does this feel like this is foreshadowing of Mynasha joining Eyks ragtag group. I can't see Eryk leaving her alive with the knowledge she has when he leaves. That is just another loose end that could come back to haunt him. I still feel like instead of the giant tearing into Eryk's personal space he is able to look into it and pull individual items out. Eryk can then try to individually resist the giant. The fact he was completely helpless just doesn't feel right. On a brighter note the Bruins decided to show up and sure enough I feel asleep before it even started.

Justin Garrett

It definitely was frustrating but a potential god did it and he was out numbered without allies except Mynasha. Eryk was smart enough not to get himself killed and make it out with his most valuable possessions.

Manfred Schütze

he kept all his most important stuff, he only lost food and the only secrets that came out is that he is an otherworlder(which the orcs dont give a shit about aparently) and he has a big storage (which also doesnt seem important to them) so the loss isnt as big as it seems

Salvo

It was hinted at more than once most of the warlords didn’t back her unless they coupled up. If the rewrite wants Eryk to side with her, crafting the narrative more deliberately about this would help. That Eryk relied on Raelia as a scout and trained with her, and Eryk cooked and lead his team: support and command. If that is what she wants for Orc society it would at least make since why Eryk sides with her. “I want to lead like you do now”.

Valter Anunciação

Só the consequences are the same. The Mc still gets mugged for no reason and is fine with it?

Erick Thiemke

307-311 rewrite is still in my head. I’m reading comments and taking feedback. I don’t want to miss my 4 chapters a week release schedule to do the rewrite so they will be over the next week. The conclusion/plot is still the same for book 5, just how it gets there may change

Erick Thiemke

No the rewrites are still in my head and taking feedback for 307-311. I want to flesh out the ending a bit before going to them

Erick Thiemke

Ten books for this story. Halfway done when this book is complete! The rough outline for the series is in authors notes

Valter Anunciação

Só wait. When is the rewrite coming? Is it gonna be rrl only? Are you gonna stop posting regular and re-writing from 307? I'm confused

Lexy Joy

Are the rewrites completed or are you still working on it? Your writing is excellent. Love it so far. How many books are you thinking of writing for A Soldier's Life?

BubblyGhost

Well apparently clerics can just scry, as they stated in this chapter by if Eryk killed them the clerics would know

BubblyGhost

My vote is for eating the titans (figuratively. . .maybe just a heart or two) after a hundred years or so of dungeon delving for gear/essence; maybe a fun little jaunt into the spooky endless depths or whatever they were called

InfernalDrake

Spite is among the most powerful of motivations.

PatronTurtle

I wonder how many warlords will want her as Supreme to have a woman in the position to try and woo or tie to by way of children

visigoth

This seems like a little much for a scorned researcher ngl

Silver Beard

Her research was laughed at. Being in favor of the Supreme likely will give her some immunity from harassment.

Salvo

I’m shocked getting Glasha to read the giant key’s history wasn’t required. People could have gone up with an artifact right? I imagine that is a play, challenging Eryk for his artifacts.

Andrew

Thank you!

Shandlar

It'd refreshing actually. He was upset, pushed his luck to gather up everything he could despite it being a risk to his life, and then moved the fuck on knowing it was the best he could have done. It's mature. Way way better than we ever get from MCs of trapped in another world stories 99% of the time.

Chachi

i agree orc blood must be spilled imo

KipBR

I think letting them live is probably something he has to do - we have no idea about the ability of the remaining candidate, but the fact that it has been a while means someone probably is holding them back from returning. Either a clairvoyance thing predicting their deaths if they return now, or a farsight thing revealing the ambush. That could either be the titans stirring up trouble or the remaining candidate still being tricky.

Eddie

This author doesn't like melodramatic monologue. Good thing cause I don't either. He lost his shit? that sucks. now let's move on.

Chachi

murder hobo eryk cant come sooner

Justin Barnett

Eryk seems too calm right now. He just got screwed out of most of his possessions and had most of his secrets outed. I think he would be raging, at least in his own mind.

visigoth

So what does Glasha get out of this? A puppet Supreme after getting Eryk to play Kingmaker? This way she can force more progressive policies through an avenue of authority denied to her?

1536539

Letting them live is a mistake, but he already knows that, I don’t understand how killing the other candidates would disqualify her, wouldn’t she become supreme by process of elimination? As for divining their crime, isn’t that what the orb is for? It should block clairvoyance magic right?

Erick Thiemke

1st of 4. So I am surprisingly only one day behind - A Town Builder chapter or 4 chapter edit. I will look at that first tomorrow before writing the next Soldier chapter. As noted above the audio book is getting close for book 3. I will post a link for those of you who want a free copy. Free copies are only available in the US, Canada, and England for some reason. I have 10 for US/Canada and ten for England, so first come first serve when I post the link for Seraphim patrons.


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