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World Sphere - 27 - First Impressions

🕑 Added 2024-12-21 02:04:59 +0000 UTC

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TheIronChoad

Only a few chapters in but enjoying the read so far while waiting for ASL. I do think you’ll need another pass through for grammatical errors though rather than any spelling mistakes. Also little things like Aelyn returning clean after Gareth despite you saying one paragraph before, Gareth went to go wash after her, just little things :) Although maybe your editor will find these before moving to ebook, idk

fulli Jelly

I like this book

Space Cadet

I really enjoyed this book the first time around. It is nice that I have forgotten enough for it to be fresh, and I can't tell what has changed. It does feel natural.

Erick Thiemke

unfortunately no. they are pricy to do and i need to see how it is received before the investment. for a soldiers life i didnt do the first audiobook until the ebook could cover the cost

Kallen23

Any chance you are doing audible for this book at the same time as you release it

Andrew

Thank you!

Erick Thiemke

4th of 5. Soldier 3 Audio Book is done!!!! The narrator needs to make five changes, and then I can send it to the audible for approval. This chapter was a bigger rewrite with a lot of added dialogue and character development. I am onto Town Builder.


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