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A Soldier's Life - 317 - Why Do They Always Run? (final edit 8-5-25)

🕑 Added 2024-12-23 20:24:28 +0000 UTC

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Aspiring Sage

ARAO, great fight, and a superb ending to the quest chain. I do think in the edits, you should consider increasing his returns from this dungeon. Maybe they find the third set of horns and he gets to keep them, or he gets something more significant fom the warlord/cleric than just another weapon. I do think he needs more juice from the book 5 squeeze.

HappyNoms

If he can liberate creatures out of dungeons, as the quasits seems to prove, then he can liberate the greater dopplegangers. Who are highly intelligent and amply capable. The kind of deal he could make with them for their freedom could be both fantastic and dangerous, which is great for narrative tension. And great for Eryk's moral ambiguity. If he frees them for a mission that does good, does the mission success outweigh freeing them? It gets delicious with amoral complexity. If they are a mated pair, despite being untrustworthy/evil in nature, he could keep one in dimensional storage to compel the other to do his bidding, etc. Just seems rich with possibility.

Erick Thiemke

i will correct it when I get to editing this chapter

Angus

Is it meant to be Boris's sword not Brutus?

R. Maxwell Steele

Haha maybe after she consolidates her power. Her little quest cost him a king's ransom so she definitely owes him. Also he paid for that Giant Key so he better get to keep that too. Feels like he lost wayyyyy more than he gained this time around. I had hoped the dungeon would make up for it.

J. L. Mullins

Okay, he had the PERFECT dungeon to gather a bunch of the essences that he wants and a leader of a nation who would likely be happy to just him delve it for a week ... Why doesn't he ask!!!

Andrew Crews

Glasha had been right; it was a highly magical creature with strong aether resistance. [Just] not strong enough to resist me.” “Mynasha was already heading for the exit [because,] as she stopped gathering aether, the cold she had been shielded from suddenly rushed to her.” “While the ice melted, I reclaimed most of the large violet aether stone so I could sort through the disgusting mess that was Warlord Rhuuk. [All I was] able to claim from the human pancake was his runic broadsword and a silver runic ring.” “We walked to where Jhuarkasha met his end, cutting down a pair of dretches and harvesting them to reach him. A pair of stirges were trying to suck blood from the stony cracks in the floor. I cut them down and harvested them as well. There was nothing left of the cleric besides [his] bloody, shredded robes.” “The pursuit became a tedious and frustrating game of endless cat and mouse as the quasit kept out of range, always stopping to sit and watch us while eating its mushroom. I tried to leave it nuts on the ground to lure it, but it didn’t seem interested—maybe even [aware] I was trying to trick it.” “Mynasha had a bag in each hand, one with a hellhound head and the other with [an] ice demon head.” “Glasha approached and saved me. She pulled me out of [the] scrutiny.” “With a flat tone, I informed her, ‘He got stuck between a rock and a hard place.’”

Andrew Crews

A rope of lightning wrapped [around] his waist and promptly exploded in a thundering flash.” “She looked at me [questioningly], and I approached her, talking while I walked.” “I looked out [at] where now seven dretches were feasting and lamented the loss of the cleric’s essence again, but there was going to be nothing left to use the collector on.” “To her credit, Mynasha supported me. ‘I can be ready in a few minutes.’ I nodded and remained standing, my eyes fixed on the spear while drinking water to restore body mass.” “When we talked with Glasha, we had already developed plans for each demon. Unfortunately, the hellhound had not cooperated, and now the ice demon was doing the same. [The creature unfolded] to a standing posture, powdered snow falling off its bony exoskeleton.” “Its massive hind legs could launch it forward at an impressive speed, but the bony plates [made] it slow to turn, so as long as you kept circling, you could remain out of its reach.” “I closed [in on the] demon, going into a slide as it swept the spear in an arc.” “I planted both my feet on its shin and pushed off, sliding backward in plenty of time before the spear came crashing down. Its movements reminded me of a clumsy robot. With magebane embedded in its knee, it could no longer bend the joint or turn rapidly. Brutus’ sword appeared in my hand, replacing magebane. I had been hoping magebane would disrupt its ability to keep dropping the temperature, but the air did not feel any different. I couldn’t wait to find out, either.” Paragraph reworded.

bbjace

Heh.

Erick Thiemke

Yes, him learning magic, true magic casting

Ivan Kanewske

Spell auto correct, Would a mages life, also feature eric

Ivan Kanewske

Would advance makes life also feature Eric?

Erick Thiemke

There is one more chapter and epilogue yet to be completed. As for the next book, it will start next week. You will get three chapters instead of four because of the holidays next week.

Alias

This was a great ending. No idea what he will do with the two demons, but at least they will drop a channeling essence if he disposes of them later on. Are we launching into book six come 2025 or is World going to be front burner for a while?

Erick Thiemke

They don’t have genitalia - not sure if that means they are sterile just an assumption. They are attacked on sight

Caledon Smith

He won’t be getting any new affinity’s, the author made sure to kill that idea in this book. I wanted to see him get a divination affinity so he could learn identity, but that won’t happen now. I am still hoping that the author will have Eryk make a copy of the Orc Priest who has the lore spell so he can have her identity things for him in the dreamscape. Outside of that, I would like to see Eryk hunt down resistance essences as I remember that being super low, areound 26 or 28. If he can pick up the charm affinity I like your idea of a mental resistance spell form.

Salvo

Right, but Glasha said the demons never last for long if they ever break out, that they are sterile if I remember correctly. Can a demon from dungeon A can survive going to dungeon B?

Erick Thiemke

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Silver Beard

it was the little guys he stashed away in his space. I'm curious if he harvests them or keeps them as potential distractions- like he kept that goblin.

Silver Beard

He's never considered a charm ability, but he's got enough to boost his affinity to double digits. He really could use Mental resistance spell-form. They found out about his interest in the Goliath's from someone- could easily have been him unknowingly. He sold that charm enhancer- he might be on the other end of it someday.

Erick Thiemke

they were mentioned only a few times. they saw a mural of the First Legion fighting demons and Konstantin commenting something like, "Demons didnt really exist and only exist in dungeons." The titans said they opened a portal to a demonic world and were forced to close all the gates and destroy the gate engines (dungeons). He said they killed all the demons that came through the gate. And the last reference was by Glasha sayig they only existed in a few dungeons on the entire planet. SPOLIER ALERT: The demons in the dungeons were captured and assimilated by the dungeons. Also Demons do not play a role in "A Soldiers Life" however if I write the next series of ten books, "A Mage's Life" the plot will likely center around them

Erick Thiemke

he only got a channeling essence

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I was hoping he would get enough shaping essences to start learning true magic as a Xmas gift to the readers :(. Didn’t one of the fodder demons drop one then it never happened again? At his low shaping score he should at least get good return on it.

ABU-UBAYYAH SALLAU ABA-HURAYRATA

The truth seekers are gonna pull their hair out when questioning him🤣🤣🤣

ABU-UBAYYAH SALLAU ABA-HURAYRATA

I was howling 😭😂😂😂😂

Caledon Smith

So far throughout his uses of the essences he has gained 1 point for a minor essence and 3 point for apex. Now the author has stated their would be reminiscing returns at certain points, but that information was given to Eyrk by Castile whose knowledge is based off normal no other world eta with a spell form for essences. In practice Eyrk has never not gained at least one point for an essence. Even if he suddenly stops getting 1 point per game essence I personally rather see him use them for the gains he still will make by using them. Sharing essences with others is fine when they are their helping earn them. These are his and we already had one major rug pulled out from under Eyrk with the loss of everything to the titans. Having him be able to use all these essences now at the end of book 5 would be a nice power boost for him going into book 6 where he will be up against old friends.

Chachi

lol

Chachi

brilliant ending with that zinger

Salvo

In the first book it mentions less of a return for the minors, a reason why nobles don’t ‘request’ all of them. Something like above half the stat max they don’t do anything. When he was doing solo training they started to not give returns. Like 1 point or 1 stat maximum increase. And he did nothing but train on top of it! The charm will be the most useful since he already has it unlocked.

Salvo

Anyone remember what the significance of demons on their planet means? Something about them not surviving long… Eryk having 2 quasits could be a huge deal. Maybe learn their language, spell forms and lore? Maybe a new Raelia romance?! Likely just alchemy ingredients.

Mark Corwin

If you are not a "dad" you are 1000% prepared to be one with those puns.

Mark Corwin

🤣 🤣 🤣

Lazarius

Does he still have the water essences ?

Salvo

Don’t think I didn’t notice the ‘flat’ tone, ‘buried’ in the final line. We all felt the ‘weight the of moment’ ‘baring down’ on the scene. ‘Heavy is the head’ that crafts a warrior most fell, ‘laid low’ in his prime. Brave Ryuuk, you will be squished, I mean missed!

PatronTurtle

Aww, you dropped the ice demon swinging the spear like a switch. I liked that visual

Caledon Smith

Thank you for the chapter. Now I hope you let Eyrk actually use all those quickness (and the other useable ones he’s gotten) essences and not have him give 98% of them away or be taken for some reason.

Andrew

Thank you!

Filip

Who of u voted for renna pov cmon...

Justin Barnett

I cracked up at that line

Jordan A

“He got stuck between a rock and a hard place.” I love this line haha


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