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A Soldier's Life - 320 - Prologue (final edit 10-26-25 +100 words)

🕑 Added 2024-12-30 05:31:39 +0000 UTC

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InfernoDroid

Not reading this yet, I'll give it a few weeks to a month to let them build up. (Sorry, but $25 is too much for me to justify for the rest, not saying it's a bad deal, just something I can't justify)

Aspiring Sage

No, otherwise he would have been the porter and Eryk would not have joined Castile

Erick Thiemke

Firth was not at the EMperor's Death but Wylie was

Andrew G.

Firth is as stupid as Castile said. He’s one of the people who know’s Octavius’ secret. He’s a loose end too.

Andrew Crews

Tilley finally sauntered out of a side room, fixing her dress, [her face frowning] on seeing him. She had burnt auburn hair, and her makeup failed to cover her [bruises]. She settled in across from Firth, tightening her bodice defensively. Firth didn’t understand why women didn’t like him[—]he always paid well. He smirked at her but was not here for pleasure today—at least not at this moment. “Whaddya need[,] Firth?” she asked unhappily. Wylie shifted uncomfortably in his chair. [Not that Wylie objected, but this place was much filthier than most.] This was the fourth time Firth had introduced him to one of his “contacts,” and he needed to learn how to handle these lesser informants. Firth’s philosophy was a firm hand [combined with] quick rewards in coin for good information. At least Firth was this Pack’s alpha and decided how they hunted. He had convinced Wylie to join him in the Hounds, even though the boy didn’t have a spell form. The Empire was desperate, and he persuaded Wylie to take advantage of the opportunity. Hounds were better paid and had much more freedom. They had encountered only minor trouble getting past the Truthseekers due to their association with Mage Castile. But the Empire desperately needed Hounds, and now [they] were here. Firth waited on Tilley until she cracked, and it didn’t take long. Garner, one of his Hounds, emerged cautiously from the woods and headed toward Firth. “We found a lightly worn trail leading into the hills. Wylie and Saben are watching it.” “Good,” Firth grunted contentedly. He knew the boy wouldn’t be far from where he grew up. He guessed his family [was delivering] him food and supplies when needed. “Get the others, and we will catch up.” Confirmation made, Firth wrote in his message book and awaited new orders from Centurion Kaius. Firth thought that man was in over his head, but his loyalty to Emperor Octavius was unquestioned, so he was given the job of administering the new Hounds. Loyalty over competence was the new doctrine for the leadership of the Empire. Two weeks later, Firth was reporting to the Centurion. Centurion Kaius was behind a desk with mounds of paperwork surrounding him. He looked exhausted and slightly flustered. [He was definitely not the right man for this job.] [Kaius] had been a Count of a small city before being called to serve. Firth had heard a contingent of swordsmiths had been resettled to Kaius’ city, bringing an influx of gold. Firth stopped Wylie from digging a grave. “Let the farmers bury them,” Firth barked. “See if they have anything we can sell; we’ll be leaving in an hour.” Firth allowed his men to loot and sell whatever they could [from] deserters for extra coin. The order had not even been necessary[,] as his men had already stripped the bodies and ransacked the hidden camp. “Who am I tracking? Did you find a sample of Konstantin’s?” Firth asked[,] while checking the blood compass. It was banged up but looked serviceable, and the pull on it, when he channeled his aether, was very faint. Firth hid his shock. “And you want her killed[?]” he said flatly. Firth rolled the brass blood compass in his hands. “How did you get her sample?” he asked neutrally. The Centurion’s jaw tightened. “It is not hers. The blood sample belongs to Mage Salvator. He has recently sought asylum in Bartiradia. The Emperor wants him killed. Publicly. Take care of it on your way to Manch. Your performance has been exemplary[,] to date. You know how Castile thinks[.] I know you will not disappoint. The Duchy is not a large kingdom[.] It shouldn’t take someone as skilled as you long to find a rogue mage.” Firth didn’t like Kaius trying to play on his vanity. Firth was not a vain man. Firth quickly shook his head, “It is not a problem.” Firth didn’t like the assignment for a number of reasons. It was his first target outside of the Empire, and he didn’t have any contacts to help him. He also knew this was just as much of a test of his loyalty as it was a request by the Emperor. And most importantly, Castile was dangerous, and she had some of her legionnaires, his former companions and friends, with her. He cursed Castile for not getting far enough away from Octavian’s reach. [His job had been to kill her if she betrayed the Empire, but he had to admit she had grown on him over the years.] Now, he didn’t have any choice. Kaius handed Firth a paper and returned to his paperwork, ignoring Firth. That meant he was dismissed. Firth glanced at the paper[—]it was a profile and image of Mage Salvator. Firth hated this assignment—two mages in enemy lands. He would still carry it out[,] and maybe one day replace Kaius.

Joseph Snyder

Doesn't willy have a dimensional space?

Dominic French

Yeah that's why I want to see the consequences, I'm ok with them making stupid decisions

Ivan Kanewske

First jets in WW2 were used a lot for bombing Britain when they were superior to fighters and bombers as a fight plane, not a bomber,

Ivan Kanewske

Look through most history, Leaders on the cusp of failure rarely utilize resources properly, squander them on short term stuff that they feel is important, leaders who overthrow a government or super concerned about controlling a narrative that they waste valuable resources to get something done

John Donovan

I like to edit. Have a happy new year.

Erick Thiemke

chapter edited

Erick Thiemke

you can look at it as Firth's hubris, I uncapitalized it, making it not a title

Erick Thiemke

edited

Erick Thiemke

edited the plot a little

Jordan A

Maybe your right. Do you have a reference?

Ichigo Kurosaki

I’m pretty sure this was mentioned when he was being trained

Zaffre

Maybe mention Divination magic had to be used as the necromancers had been assassinated?

Jordan A

Agreed. All I’m saying t is that it weird its first being brought up here instead of book 4 when Eryk’s going through hound training. Book 4 has not been published so it’s still possible for a small revision to be made to add a reference of some kind for the Alpha position.

Manfred Schütze

dont forget castille is planning to take down the empire

Manfred Schütze

well considering they pose as dogs the position of an alpha makes sense^^

John Donovan

Here is the problem. With this prologue nothing Eryk did in book 4 mattered. There was world building with the coup and invasions but the entire reason Eryk joined the hounds was to destroy the blood samples for himself and Castile. It's funny I was looking forward to listening to book 4 but what's the point everything will just feel empty now. As the saying goes all for nothing.

Salvo

The void emperor is dead, and Octavian betrayed his conspirators. Castile being alive is a loose end for Octavian’s rule, not that book 4 events didn’t matter. It reads like the Tahlian empire is a hollowed out power. A hound team with no spell forms? Against a veteran mage commander and her allies? It sounds desperate and was not the first team!

Salvo

Thanks for the chapter. Didn’t Octavian indirectly try to get Firth killed by sending him with Castile to her doom? I really don’t see this as a writing problem, more things about Firth you’d just notice that his brain is shut off. Eryk and Castile created a power vacuum and this is a result both should expect.

John Donovan

Doesn't this invalidate the entire premise of book 4. I mean sure we got the orc invasion and coup but from just Eryk's point of view it seems a entire wasted arc now.

John Donovan

He always was to eryk. I believe he was a planted spy.

Justin Barnett

Maybe you could say Octavius stole some of Castile’s blood a long time ago. That sounds like something he would do to ensure he could always find her.

hrs

"...her age lines showed her age no matter how hard she tried to hide it." instead use something like "...the lines of her face showed her age..." or "her age lines betrayed her lack of youth, no matter how hard she tried to hide it." I have a pet peeve about repeating the same word to closely together.

Daniel Ehlers

Thank you for the chapter. I quote like Filth as an antagonist personality wise, I just think he is too weak on the powerscale. He is not exeptionell in combat, magic, tactics or wealth to pose a threat.

Jean Kevin

does the divination is limited in time ? because i don't tjink it makes much sense to send hounds after dangerous targets such as konstantin and Castille when the empire force is this weakened. or maybe it really is a way to get rid of hounds IDK.

PatronTurtle

Why? From his perspective Cas is a threat to what remains of the empire and his home. He'd have to completely desert everything he knows, to not kill her when from his perspective there's little to balance such loyalty

BubblyGhost

lol, no. Work on your reading comprehension; maybe cry plot armor again when you meant deus ex machina.

Nick Nicholson

You lost me and everyone else at “time travel” and “DnD”. Be more concise.

Chachi

idk why but i like how grimey firth is as a character i kinda wish he plays double agent. wylie to maybe but this was a fantastic chapter thank you very much.

BubblyGhost

That there could be other reasons besides having a blood sample to track Castile down and divination sucks from a story perspective?

Nick Nicholson

Dude wtf are you talking about?

BubblyGhost

To be fair they know (or at least have a good inkling of) the fact Castile is alive even without the blood sample, as there were tons of witnesses that could've seen her leave paired with the lack of a body. The sample just seems like a way to speed up the process of hunting her down, but good old fashioned tracking/investigation could potentially work. What I dislike most is 'divination' is such a broad and unexplained field of magic that just feels irksome to exist as it's such a massive 'handwave'. ARAO uses a lot of DnD mechanics in this story, and even in DnD divination is fucking broken when you know how to use it. Getting to see anything in the past, present, sometimes future; across vast distances and planes of existence. It's like the ugly brother of time travel when it comes to being a pain in the ass to write since it's such a 'well why didn't they know that with divination' type of power. And the excuse of 'it's unreliable' that I have seen used feels unpleasant to read as that means it works or fails at author's discretion.

Jordan A

Maybe, but who goes around calling themselves an alpha other than an egomaniac. Firth doesn’t seem to have that large of an ego in prior books. It’s written more like a title IMHO which led to my comment. Who knows though.

Jordan A

I think Nick meant some aspect of dues ex machine and not plot armor.

Silver Beard

I agree; whatever knowledge Castille had of the coup would have been disseminated by now. Chasing after her is as fool's errand and likely pointless. More likely Firth is being used as bait or a test to see how big a threat she could potentially become.

Silver Beard

Looking forward to Firth discovering Eryk alive and then dying an ugly death.

Silfir

Also how is it plot Armor? I mean we do need the MC to survive to continue the series...

Nick Nicholson

This was the comment I would have written if I wasn’t a lazy a-hole

Silfir

I feel like there are many ways to explain how they know as well as how they got the sample.

Jordan A

While Nick’s comment is a bit harsh, I do agree with him. The entire point of destroying both archives is to avoid being tracked after they kill the emperor. While it’s possible for other blood samples to exist (by happenstance, found through good fortune/luck, etc.) it really needs more explanation at a minimum as it makes Eryk’s mission and efforts in book 4 a complete waste. You’re the author and it’s your book, but I’d recommend writing a different reason for how they are tipped off about Castile surviving for the reasons mentioned earlier.

Jordan A

If divination magic was used then it needs to be mentioned it was used and that’s how Konstantin was tied to the event. Konstantinos POV chapter at the capital makes it sound like he and his group got away Scott free so something countering that (and is specifically explained somewhere) is needed.

Andrew

Thank you!

BubblyGhost

Honestly it just sounds like Firth being an ass lmao

Dominic French

Honestly, I would not want to be in Firths shoes trying to assassinate Castile just from a technical point of view. Also the collapsing empire has the spare resources to do stuff like this? I just hope there's consequences for the empire for devoting key resources to ancillary projects when the empire is collapsing.

Jordan A

“At least Firth was this Pack’s Alpha and decided how they hunted. “ I don’t recall an ‘alpha’ position being mentioned in prior books. If you’re going to add it going forward then it needs to be added somewhere in book 4 as it doesn’t make sense for it not to be mentioned somewhere during Eryk’s hound training.

Erick Thiemke

divination magic

Nick Nicholson

Plot armor

Alex Clevenger

50 more chapters please lol thanks for the chapter

Erick Thiemke

the Archives were destroyed, yes, but finding another sample is feasible if looking for it. maybe some armor or clothes Castile wore. They knew she escaped so it was something they were looking for. the other direction was to make their meddling come to light (Viridia, Castile and Selene) but I think for now they are being careful about what they are doing

BubblyGhost

Hmm, I guess multiple blood samples could be explained? But it is definitely a bit off when the whole plan revolved around the importance of the archives being few yet tightly guarded and secret. What I find more strange is how apparently people know it was Konstantine who broke in, not sure how anyone would know that

Nick Nicholson

I thought all her blood samples were destroyed? Bc without an explanation this seems like lazy ass plot armor

Erick Thiemke

and it starts. I will add a picture to this collection soon. Firth is going to be developed a little more in this book. The next chapter picks up with Eryk and his group. It will be written tomorrow.


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