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A Soldier's Life - 346 - History Lesson

🕑 Added 2025-02-17 04:02:41 +0000 UTC

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Erick Thiemke

Maybe a question for A Mage's Life or beyond that

daniel dantas

Does this universe have an eternal battle between demons and a race similar to angels? If we take Earth and its myths as a basis, it is safe to say that Earth has already been the stage for this war. Perhaps the Titans are indeed powerful, but not that powerful, maybe in the top 3 behind demons and possible angels?

Aspiring Sage

Yet stories like this require a question giver, no? Also, I do think the author has earned enough credit with his creation to share HIS vision for the story, not ours. I would welcome an opportunity to read a story YOU might write with your vision for an MC doing whatever they wanted. It might even be good. Looking forward to it.

caeven

man just for once I want to see Eryk go somewhere and do something, not because someone else told him to or because hes once again a pawn in their game to gain power, but simply because he wanted to.

Justus Halbach

A chance a immortality. Change a to at? A chance at immortality.

Andrew Crews

I looked at the others for agreement, and everyone nodded. “Then we also tell the Eternis Council and let them decide what to do about it. [Take → We take] the decision out of his hands.” I produced a pouch of essences. “Your share from the delve.” It was not an equal share. Just three major coordination essences, one major power essence, and three minor endurance essences. Still [a → a small] fortune for not contributing anything. “She is where you met her last, traveler.” He turned his back on me to continue instructing a young goliath on how to cut [the → a] fish for salting. After such a long time not using furniture, sitting in the welcoming bamboo chair felt slightly odd. I reached for what I assumed was my tea. I sipped it before remembering I disliked the taste and [putting → put] it down. She had [a slight annoyed → a slightly annoyed] look at being interrupted. Ancient titans, close to death, submitted themselves to become the dungeons, a chance [a → at] immortality—or so they thought. A civil war broke out among the Titans as many of their number wanted the aether engines destroyed as well. [” → ,”] she revealed. I waited for her to elaborate, but she never did. She finished her discourse[. → ,] “I have planted the seeds, and I just hope those who make the decisions make the correct ones.” I stopped her, “[Tell → Tell me] as if I do not know anything.” She pursed her lips, “[Very → Very well,] but I will keep it short. The Titans once ruled all of Desia, but it was not enough for them. They wanted more—they wanted to rule every world among the stars.” “The Titans succeeded and began to conquer [world after world in the cosmos. → one world after another.] Aphora, Luatera, Earth, Ionus, Traxephus, Evithea, to name a few.” Then they encountered the demons. The first race [who → that] had a stronger mastery of magic than themselves. Finally, Khrusos decided to close the World Gates permanently. The World Gates were destroyed, but the dungeon aether engines were left intact. A civil war broke out among the Titans as many of their number wanted the aether engines destroyed as well. She took time to pour herself [some more → more] tea. She had a slight annoyed look at being interrupted. [“Yes. → “Yes,”] From what I have seen in the past, the aether engines were built by the Titans but required intelligence to manage their complex workings. I took the rebuke and gave her a nod of appreciation for the knowledge. “So, you want your people to use the dungeon and become stronger[?” → .]” Namao nodded. “It is my hope. We cannot remain so blissfully ignorant and isolated forever…” She trailed off, growing tired, like she knew something—or [a → the] possibility of something in the future. I waited for her to elaborate, but she never did. She finished her discourse, “I have planted the seeds, and I just hope those who make the decisions make the correct ones.” Now, present the artifacts you want me to examine for you. I will go until I have exhausted myself.” I hesitated, [a number of questions on my mind → with many questions on my mind,] but I started to lay out the collection of artifacts I wanted insight into [their → regarding their] workings.

PatronTurtle

Eryk is pretty slow sometimes. Nowhere did she say that the demons were defeated. It's only a matter of time before they show up here. She wants her people able to defend themselves from that and other threats

Erick Thiemke

corrected

Erick Thiemke

corrected

Erick Thiemke

lamest name for a planet, yes

Erick Thiemke

she is putting her people first. but yes she is a manipulator, Navek was right

Erick Thiemke

we are talking 5000 years ago. maybe back then the goliaths had mages. as for the titans spirit being trapped in the aether engines - i see it like someone today wanting to have their consciousness digitized into a computer

Silver Beard

Still hopes he claims the bounty from the Adventure guild on the new Dungeon; seems like win-win for the Goliaths. Potential aether potions for Adventurers and a constant fighting force to beat down the Manticore population. Sadly, Mavieth will be leaving the party soon.

Andrew

Thank you!

Salvo

Thanks for the chapter, lore is always welcome. My big problem with this whole history, is the essence this dungeon provides is somewhat mage type; not tailored to goliath racial qualities. Nature, coordination? Not stone and strength? I’ll grant the armor and power essence, but the end treasure probably won’t be collected by most. The fact the thing was a former titan seeking immortality is interesting, maybe it can only provide magic essence it had an affinity for?

NovaZero

Nah they make wonderful slaves. Don't you see? They love the leash. Then again if they learned to fight for themselves they wouldn't be a bunch of whiners who got uppity over some maniticores. Manticores are a good choice to bait the Goliath's into breaking their own stunted development.

Chachi

dont like namao one bit shes too much of a manipulator

BubblyGhost

Doooooope. Sucks we Earthlings got the lamest planet lmao

Ivan Kanewske

“Now, present the artifacts you want me examine for you. I will go until I have exhausted myself.” Add a to Me to examine for you

Dominic French

I really hope the goliaths take this chance to get stronger. Honestly with having the orcs enslaving them, manticores hunting them I don't understand how they have not started fighting yet. With the dungeon there's a path forward for both the pacifist and those who would take up arms.

Ivan Kanewske

I was soon walking on the sandy beach around some turtles laying eggs. I was soon walking the two-mile path to the fishing village. It didn't take long. The use of I was soon used 2x in a row should be adjusted

Erick Thiemke

1st of 4 for cycle. Another tomorrow plus two book 4 edits. I will come back to the interaction with Khrusos to edit it. It is obviously another point of view on what happened. I thought to lay out everything clearly in this chapter for the reader.


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