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A Soldier's Life - 348 - Godok (minor edits 2-20-25 +200 words)

🕑 Added 2025-02-20 05:29:05 +0000 UTC

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Adam V

Edit: A green-looking Raelia nestled into +[my] arm asked, “How many people?”

Jordan A

A green-looking Raelia nestled into arm asked, “How many people?” Change ‘into’ to ‘under my’ as the current wording is odd and this is what I think you were going for (could be wrong).

Andrew Crews

Our “private” cabin was barely large enough for the hammock, and Baldo had to sleep underneath Raelia and me. It also smelled like fish and ammonia, just like the rest of the ship. Konstantin might have been a bit hasty in booking passage, but he was unapologetic. It was a four-day voyage to Kryvan, and I noticed the temperature [dropped → had dropped] significantly as we sailed away from Stone Mountain Island. The climate zones on this planet made no sense to me, but I knew the ley lines influenced them. Some roads in the Telhian Empire even followed the ley lines because the snow melted much faster above them. It was hard to be intimate with Raelia in these conditions, and she even started to get nauseous from the constant smell of fish. She hadn’t been seasick [in → during] the long voyage to Stone Mountain Island from the Caliphate, so she would just have to endure. The only member of our group that didn’t mind the smell was Baldo, as he had developed a love of raw fish. “As long as we don’t get too flashy with [coin → our coin], we should be overlooked by the locals. Hard to find anyone who speaks Telhian, and those that do have nothing good to say about the Empire.” I could tell this irked him some. “Couldn’t find any ships that would get us to Godok any faster, either.” “To an alley. A baker is across from us, and further down the alley is a tinkerer[.” → ,”] I replied. Konstantin paused momentarily, too prideful to ask for it, and then left. “No one knows for sure, but more than two million [for sure → at least].” I could believe it as the city’s coastline ran as far as you could see in both directions. The captain offered one more piece of wisdom, “You will need to muzzle your pet, or the constables will fine you.” With that, we left the captain to dock his ship. He would unload his [foodstuff cargo → cargo of foodstuffs] and then moor the Lucky Equilibrium, giving his crew time with their family. One race I noticed was absent was [orcs → the orcs]. In this part of the world, they were known more for being pirates than traders. It took us four attempts before we found an innkeeper who spoke Elvish and would allow Baldo to stay. The Shaggy Bear [was → was built] from ancient lumber but carried the smell of ale and incense in the common room. It was easy to follow the road to the white spire that the captain had indicated, as it loomed [cleary → clearly] above the other buildings.

Erick Thiemke

he is going for dimensional door at last check in on this. he doesnt have a large enough aether pool to make it effective

Erick Thiemke

corrected

NovaZero

I don't. Or... Maybe her dream amulet will tell him or browbeat him or tell his other dream companions or they might comment. That'd be funny 😂

glare31337

I don't think he has seriously asked around about World spellforms either.

Ivan Kanewske

The Shaggy Bearwas built from ancient lumber but carried the smell of ale and incense in the common room. Bear and was need a space

Ivan Kanewske

I was holding it in pretty retribution for our accommodations Pretty to petty

UnfortunateRadish

Has he learned a displacement spell form yet? I’m disappointed that he focused on affinity’s that mean nothing to him instead of maximizing his strengths. It was mentioned in like a sentence 80-100 chapters ago and never brought up again

Silver Beard

Save for his investments already; Godok seems like a better match to settle down and disappear than Grammery.

michele 00

Really ? How do you know that ?

John Van Buskirk

Make sure to take a break before this ends up like all the great novels with overworked authors

Samuel McCarren

Gotta build up the dreamscape library. Knowledge is power right

Andrew

Thank you!

NovaZero

She gives it up by all of a sudden having huge cravings of certain food lol

NovaZero

RIP burning the midnight oil while holding a rope with both ends lit

Enk

Delia and Eryk have been using proper...protections, yes?

kaalveiten

>When we docked in Kryvan, Raelia was happy to stay in a small inn. Her seasickness seemed to follow her ashore, though. Lol is she preggers

Erick Thiemke

I'm still working on the world sphere chapter. I hope to have that and the next Soldier Seraphim tomorrow.


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