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A Soldier's Life - 349 - Large Appetite (minor edit 2-25-25)

🕑 Added 2025-02-21 02:20:04 +0000 UTC

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Adam V

Konstantin is a real one, sticking with Eryk like that. Meanwhile Raelia voluntarily turns 3 months apart into a year apart, hides him from her family (understandable, but still hurtful), and probably still plans to marry someone else politically for her family.

Steve B

Great story... glad the elf girl will be out of the picture for a bit...wish mavith was still traveling with him.

Erick Thiemke

I delete the comments with vulgarity, but boks 5 and 6 are still drafts and I am upfront about that. I read the comments and make edits to enhance the plot and improve story readability. I rely on Patreon comments as I cannot read everything on RR any longer - just too many comments. You will see when I start editing book 5 in two weeks—I will open a new collection called Book 5 - Final Edit. That will be the final plot edit and shift chapters there as I go. I know there are problems that I hope to address

Andrew G.

I’ve only been catching up a couple of days but it is mind boggling how many people feel so free to heavily criticize your story. I mean they’re here because they like the way you write presumably. I, for one, trust the chef and want to watch you cook. A child is a big wrench, and I’m interested to see how it plays out.

Michael Richter

How is he too dumb to realize she's pregnant

SilverbladeTE

People in real life, do not come with a "User's Manual" ;) So II've seen people do all kinds of dumb, crazy, hurtful, brave, self sacrificing, chaotic, loyal, noble, wise, kind, spiteful or downright evil stuff So it's not wrong at all for fictional characters to do things that aren't what we'd do or would like, and it spices up a story a bit Family & home are what are TRULY important in life, those can be used for many reasons in a fiction

Medhanie Kidane

I was afraid to say it, but I think a mini Erik is coming. No need for him to search, a way to return back to earth. Home is Dasia now. 🤷🏾‍♂️

Andrew Crews

“Not granted. And you can tell that halfling sneak she is not welcome up here either,” the dark elf spat [spitfully → spitefully]. Dorrel nodded[,“ → ,”] “Only the oldest dungeons were created by the Titans. Many have been destroyed over the millennia.” He narrowed his all-white eyes[,“ → ,”] “What do you know of The Pact?” he said, testing my knowledge. I bit into what looked like a French fry. It was over-fried and crispy—by the taste, I was guessing it was fried in bacon fat. I finished all the fries before I sat on the bed. It didn’t look like I would be getting much attention tonight. Our intimacy had been awfully sporadic recently[; → ,] maybe she was getting sick of me. ⸻ Raelia’s eyes darted [back-and-forth → back and forth], as if she were deep in thought. The next day, we spent [in → time at the] private baths and shared our final moment of intimacy for the coming year.

Apophixas

I agree that him having a kid at this point in the story is a bad idea. Children are for people who want to settle down. Using children as plot devices in stories for drama is just stupid. Either they became the main focus of that character and the story revolves around them, or they're a background thing that often sheds some negativity on the MC for not being with them.

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Karnnie

I really enjoyed this chapter, masterfully done. I think Raelia might be pregnant.

Erick Thiemke

yes the chapter tonight is her POV and her reasoning

Eddie

does she not know she's pregnant? it would be amusing if she comes to the realization she's pregnant in the pov chapter, otherwise it just seems like an asshole move to not tell him and run away.

Robert Jacobs

I agree it will not be hidden for too long and is likely just a way to let the character keep growing in power and might set up a love triangle but still ruined the character for me. Hiding a kid from a parent is a real crap thing to do

Mina She

I really hope Raelia is not pregnant . I think parenthood is even harder to do well in progression fantasy than relationships, especially when it comes to the MC unless the book is about to end. Main idea is growth and power. It’s very easy for characters to come out as bad parents. Looking at Eryk and Raelia’s relationship there is not a lot of communication and if they are going to have a child then there has to be some serious considerations which won’t be the focus in a progression fantasy story and to be honest will be pretty boring to explore. But at the same time a guy who sees his child once a year because he is busy trying to be stronger is not really likable . Or a woman who finds out she is pregnant and plans to run away for a year. I enjoy the story but in my personal opinion Eryk’s and Raelia’s relationship didn’t really help their characters. It just highlighted their selfishness and immaturity. My worry is a baby will just make they more unlikable

glare31337

Clearly she is not planning on hiding it long term (thus the plans to meet in a year's time). I don't see a rational reason for her to keep it from him though. I think this is less a mark on her character and more a contrivance by the author to get her out of the way for some other woman (maybe setting up a quest to save Renna).

Prinny Knight

I'm thinking she might be pregnant, as well as realize such. With that view point, she's just worried and wants to head home to give birth? I have no idea how long it takes for elves.

Aiden Wilker

Agreed. It will be interesting to see how he would handle that news. Has the author mentioned how long it takes for elves to give birth? Because if it’s longer than a year he will be in for a shock when she shows back up. I do wonder how her family will react to the news.

Robert Jacobs

Went from rooting for Raelia to really disliking her after this chapter. I hope Eryk finds out about his kid at some point.

Robert Jacobs

I really dont understand why she didnt just tell him. Now we get to watch her get into trouble or do something with the kid that will really blindside Eryk. All she had to do was talk to the guy about it.

Chachi

YOOOOOOOO ok maybe i do like the drama🤣

Erick Thiemke

Not it is not mentioned in this story but I hinted that the dungeon was being intrusive. Generally it is not a thing in soldier but the particular dungeon they were in took interest…

Erick Thiemke

Next chapter is the raelia pov…

Aiden Wilker

Raelia better comeback, I have enjoyed her character throughout the series. Doing great work as always!

Jordan A

Is this story similar to World Sphere in that members of different races can have kids together if they have sex in a dungeon? I don’t think that’s been specifically established earlier in the story, but I could be wrong.

Jordan A

Agreed! I’m really curious especially as he made a comment about not absorbing all the shaping essence (if I recall correctly) and so I’m curious about how his core is generally doing

Chachi

is that confirmed

glare31337

Has Eryk not done a tablet reading since exiting the Manticore dungeon? I was looking forward to seeing his new shaping affinity.

Erick Thiemke

to be fair to the MC & Raelia the odds of it happening were extremely small...too bad for them they did the nasty in the dungeon

Erick Thiemke

that is Konstantin's plan....oh you meant the MC

Erick Thiemke

yeah probably not. just arrogant masters....drop the young

Erick Thiemke

story needs some drama without having the drama. it is part of the overall plot/MC motivations

Erick Thiemke

For Zyna...I would suspect low to mid 80s. The Emperor mid to upper 90s. Renna had 72 in multiple affinities

Erick Thiemke

i dont know if I mentioned it anywhere. 40-60 would be the average mage. anything under 40 is kind of ehh. 70 would be a strong mage and 80 would be extremely powerful...not many approach 90

NovaZero

I think Eryk hiding his slowed aging in conjunction with telling her how his Time affinity is his minor should get her to be more upfront. But hiding shit comes with consequences so eh

NovaZero

From what I remember 80 was considered ridiculously high. So yeah I wonder what's considered high by the Empire's standards - especially since it required a few apex essences to make their potential budge.

BubblyGhost

That's definitely my biggest confusion here. Why would she *want* a kid with Eryk? I'd say they're in a dating stage and having a child is one hell of a responsibility to neglect to ever discuss.

Theo Tomss

I always wondered what would be the aether shaping and prime affinity of the strongest mage like Zyna or the emperor, will it be said in the future or not ?

P3t1

I really don’t get why she would want to hide it though. I’m sure there is magical Plan B so if she didn’t want to get a kid, she wouldn’t have gotten one. Now she’s running off to her elvish family, who probably hate half-elves. Either hormones made her stupid or I’m missing something.

seth dauer

Even though she has his baby?

Roxanne

My thoughts as well.

Chachi

man i cant wait for the duels eryk has with the so called master swordmens of the city. i never really was a fan of raelia and the cheesy comedy imo i hope she gets married off im a bit of a reena fan myself lol. maybe even konstantin levels up some in these upcoming chapters

Shandlar

No way. She's hiding how pregnant she is. The moment she saw a way to get away before he noticed she jumped on it and found a way to leave within 24 hours. Then tried to act all casual. There was no reason to pick a year when he said he'd only be staying a few months other than to give herself time to have the child and hide it's existence if she wishes to do so.

Salvo

I would guess there is a master ledger than logs missions and payments. So each time an adventurer checks in, that gets recorded, like a forwarding address. They store payments, so you ‘pay’ the guild to render payments and messages if needed. It’s a dead end for hounds cause the book is basically Fort Knox of info. Maybe each day a courier mission to each guild happens and queries like mission done, missing person, and urgent summons are a part of it. They then can sell ‘news’ if possible to pay for their efforts.

Steve

Hopefully he learns the ageless spellform so at least the old man will not leave him for a while

Erick Thiemke

I suppose it is a buisness. Thre have been a number of messages sent in the story so far. the further te distance the more aether required

Erick Thiemke

the Empire and Adventurer's Guild do not get along

Tamati Mccallum

Morning sickness, sensitive to smells, and odd food options. If elvish pregnancy is anything like human id say youre right.

Mark P

Can you leave/send a message with the adventurers guild that would be available at any branch Eryk checks in rather than a specific one? Sounds like a way the empire could find out he's alive.

Salvo

Thank you for the chapter. Okay, let’s be clear here. Magical sending is possible, the hounds had books to do it. Does the adventure guild handle messages? Is there a guild for such a thing like magical message? The necro Orc story had a message adventure quest, but that was paper.

Ivan Kanewske

The woman who collected them moved precariously around Baldo’s sleeping but didn’t even notice the three missing Add form, after sleeping

Ivan Kanewske

Even if there is a war is still hot, I know this is wrong, too tired to muddle through fixing it

Salvo

Poor Eryk, should have taken the reasoning essence instead. You know, I feel bad for Raelia’s brother. He’s a general and lost his sister to telhain war, she comes back to life, disappears AGAIN. The family shuttles her off to be married and she wanders off to Ork lands, all kinds of diplomatic damage… and now she has a half-human bun in the oven!

Ivan Kanewske

could tell Dorrel had been prepared to tell me he already knew what I had said, but he paused. He stepped closer and learned. Learned ro leaned

Ivan Kanewske

“What is I could tell you something that you do not know?” I tested his thirst for knowledge. Is with if

InfernalDrake

She’s an elf that will live for a millennium. I don’t think she thinks all that much about time the same way a human does. A year is really nothing to her.

Joel

Let the man sleep lol

NovaZero

Fuck I should have started a betting pool....

BubblyGhost

Well it's a good introduction to how Eryk's likely long life will go. He's going to see many people exit his life as the years roll by

Jordan A

I didn’t get the impression she was gone for good. I certainly hope not. That’s a cruel thing to do and I don’t see an action like that being some thing her character would do.

Andrew

Thank you!

Gwalmeich

The term "sect" reminds me xanxia web-novels. I wonder if Eric will be angering "arrogant young masters" in the near future.

Gwalmeich

The weakest pull-out game in Desia: Eric Marco.

Silver Beard

Gone for good most likely. Best he can hope for now is a letter; though he didn't tell her where to find him. I suppose the Adventure Guild would be a wise choice.

kaalveiten

Lol yeah she totally preggers.

Nick Nicholson

He should train with the best sword masters and add them to the amulet

Mike Stewart

So we can expect another at 1 am?

P3t1

Uh-oh, morning sickness and now a sudden yearning for a specific type of food? Weirdness in the intimacy? I see what you’re doing.

Erick Thiemke

4th of 4 I believe and a chapter not posted a 1:00am in the morning. I am going to edit a book 4 chapter and then return to the chapter of World Sphere I have been working on.


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