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World Sphere - 208 - Unification Quest

🕑 Added 2025-02-22 22:45:51 +0000 UTC

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Erick Thiemke

Spoiler - It is more learning about how to use the codex so he can destroy the Maurader Moon in a future book

Mercutio Montano

As a reader: Uniting the islands is unimportant to me. They're doing just fine in pieces, with a stable economic flow. Joining them also seems more of a vanity project. This, of course, can change if there is significant benefit in the action, but not in the form of an accidental benefit discovered after the fact. For example: Joining the islands allows the mechanism for creating aether crystals to be repaired, polished, and provide significant benefits.

GucciG

I remember seeing that Overseer Warren was the Overseer of another region, not the one Storme and Skyholde is located in.

Ivan Kanewske

This was a same game every morning when he came to A to the

Brianna Stormcloud

Thank you for the chapter, enthusiastic to see where this book is going 📖🍿

visigoth

I know, it doesn't change the fact that Gareth was *also* sleeping with her. Idk at some point you'd sit the guy down and go, "stop sleeping with all my employees and female friends" lol

Space Cadet

Just so you know, Talia is Sana's (ie the archmage who made the cleanliness spell) grand daughter

Alias

I think the Guildmaster is a great secondary antagonist who maybe has a more interesting puppet master who can be the main antagonist? This could help consolidate the island as an enemy free base of operations for Storme. Anyway, I’m super stoked that this book could be a power up book before he goes to either fight the marauders or world walker guy.

Silver Beard

More magitech could be fun. Learn how those systems work for Sébastien ship. That would put him in reach of the bidder for the kittens

Silver Beard

Wasn't he also going to recover more halfings from the goblin pirates...eventually

Silver Beard

Whatever happened to his gravity core development cycle? Still a growing youth and a critical time of development.

Brett Ulakovic

Maybe you can use the Guild master as a tie in for that. Could be that he Works for or is being influenced by the Bircio faction remnants or some other power? What if comic presents The crazy idea that got me thinking during my last reread of the 207 chapters was maybe Tessa torrent is still alive. She was captured by the brothers when they assaulted the Citadel and wanted to get revenge against her, for the loss of the mithril shirt and the sequence of events that came after its loss. she was sold into slavery in the pirate city. The body that was found was someone that looked close like Tessa, but it was too badly damaged to identify, and everyone thought it was her. Storm finds out about this From some journals left on the harbinger that he gave rellik as a bonus during the black marauders attack

michele 00

Yes, you are right, I just wanted to expose at what level the secondary characters are in my mind, and probably also because I like RI so much, I will have read the novel 10 or more times 💯

visigoth

I feel like the Guildmaster is definitely not strong enough and is simply holding the position until Storme decides to address the issue. Not that it's necessarily a bad thing, since that's technically two domestic fronts now: Loreil and the Guildmaster. I can't recall the politics of it, but I thought the guild guy who helped him seed the dungeon said the Guildmaster was more mid-level

visigoth

Well, Aelyn was introduced as the love interest for Storme pretty early on. And it's not like alwaysrolls has shied away from sex as a topic in any of their series. I wouldn't really compare this to reverend insanity, though... That's a different genre and style altogether.

michele 00

I guess you are talking about my comment, right? Honestly the characters seem so insignificant in my mind that I don't even remember who talia is 😂 I'm more of focus on MC and think that the other characters are useless blood sucking insects...and regarding that, read reverend insanity, you'll like it a lot 👍🏻 My mindset regarding what to think of other characters stems from that story, I would say it's definitely the goat. 🐐

Brett Ulakovic

Did storm ever do anything for the loss of the twins nieces, and nephews due to the shifter to theshifter?

Erick Thiemke

Author notes page has an excel from each story

Erick Thiemke

They would need to know he is alive first…forgot about that myself. I did plan something for that

visigoth

Glad to see more characters in the mix getting time on the page. One thing I did remember about Talia is she had a fling with Gareth, right? lol one comment mentions sex but I’d like to point out how interestingly sexually liberal the islands and Storme are in regards to Gareth - even tho it’s kind of a meme/trope. The guy practically sleeps with every single female friend Storme has but it never rly blows up in his face.

Brett Ulakovic

What about Gareth and storm start looking for Callem’s Son like on page 426 Unfortunately, just before I climbed into my bunk, Gareth whispered to me, “We should try to find Callem’s son when we explore the Sphere.” Well, I liked that about Gareth: he was an optimist.

michele 00

By the way, are there any notes/glossary? ...already in chapter 100 I find it difficult to remember everything, especially a spell that was mentioned recently (Aether Fortress) that to me seemed to appear out of nowhere in chapter 100+ where its levels were shown in several spells, I ask because I know you are rewriting some things, is that a mistake ? I had never read about that spell (or it could also be that I have Alzheimer's...).

Erick Thiemke

close...as in a sexual relationship close

michele 00

That's all ? Meh...but whatever 😮‍💨

Erick Thiemke

yes Aelyn comes back and they are close

michele 00

I'm on chapter one hundred+ and there's something I'd like to know, the MC will have any partners ? I find it annoying that he doesn't have any and also being forced to watch chapter after chapter how the only eunuch is him while everyone else has one...pretty pathetic! not because he doesn't have partners, sex ecc... but because he seems to be the only misfit. 🤷

Erick Thiemke

there is an arc where he goes to the Dark Moon to confront the Mauraders planned. But I feel it is too early for that. He also needs the knowledge he is getting from the Codexs to do that arc... I figure the Black Dragon Mother is patient enough to wait. Having the advisary for the World Walker attack is too much too. This is more a growth arc so spell review will be in the next chapter.

Andrew

Thank you!

Jordan A

I agree with knightfire. The Guildmaster could maybe be a minor antagonist as he is only causing issues when it comes to dungeon access. I don’t think that’s a strong enough reason to make him the main antagonist.

Knightfire

Thanks for the chapter…not sure the guildmaster is strong enough unless you link him to a bigger threat like the Black Mauraders as a first step

Erick Thiemke

I'm still feeling out book 5. I think I know two of the major plot points: one is emphasized in this chapter, but I'm not sure what I want for the antagonist in this book. I was leaning toward the Black Marauders, but I think I’ll let that cool off. Do you think the Guildmaster is a strong enough antagonist? Working on Seraphim Solider now - already have 500 words


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