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A Soldier's Life - 351 - Groundhog Day (edited 2-25-25 +200 words)

🕑 Added 2025-02-25 04:45:37 +0000 UTC

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Adam V

Feels suboptimal that he would halve his overnight training just to avoid crashing beside Konstantin. Understandable though lol Edits: We used it on alternating nights as I was not going to share a bed with +[a/ the] old man. it wasn’t a dangerous [posion]->[poison], it did slightly slow your reaction speed. She still had not figured out how I had stolen her large stack +[of] copper coins and was stupefied when I returned it. It was my idea, and one of the [rimary]->[primary] reasons I suggested we have rooms next to each.

Aspiring Sage

I really love this montages chapter. Seems perfect for Eryk. Having Kon and Gilda with him is even better. Just hope you give us a tablet reading before he leaves Godok.

Andrew Crews

The door to my room in the Adventurer’s Hall pounded, waking me. It soon pounded impatiently again. I pulled the griffin-down pillow around my ears to block it out. Every damn morning, an hour before sunrise, Konstantin came to wake me up. [Why did I suggest he get a room next to mine? → I had only myself to blame for this—after all, I was the one who thought it was a good idea for him to get a room next to mine.] Honestly, this was my own fault. I had swapped the ring of sustenance for the ring of surefootedness two weeks ago. This was partly because I wanted to understand the effects, and partly to gain a slight edge when practicing with the best weapon masters in Godok. Never in my wildest dreams did I think I would need more than eight hours of rest for my mind and body to recover every night after removing the ring. Konstantin hadn’t stopped his eager pounding, so I sighed and made to rise. We needed to be at the sect’s entrance at sunrise to challenge it. Groaning, I rolled out of bed and made the griffin-down pillow disappear. It wasn’t that I didn’t trust the maids in the Adventurer’s Hall, but [I considered that pillow one of my prized possessions. I wouldn’t risk losing it as it reminded me of the company, Baldo, and Raelia all rolled into one—also it was damn comfortable. → that pillow was a prized possession, a tie to Baldo, Raelia, and the comfort of home all in one. And, frankly, it was just damn comfortable.] I walked to the door and opened it to find Konstantin in his new off-black armor, ready to go. He had commissioned something that resembled his old legionnaire armor with a different helm so he wouldn’t be associated with the Telhian Empire. [We found the Empire and Telhians were not popular on this side of the world. → The locals didn’t take kindly to the Empire or Telhians on this side of the world.] “You are not dressed,” he said, annoyed. “Ever the observant one,” I grunted tiredly. [He slapped the dreamscape amulet into my hand and it disappeared. → He pressed the dreamscape amulet into my hand, and it vanished.] We used it on alternating nights as I was not going to share a bed with an old man. He took a perverse pleasure in leaving instructions with his manifestation in the dreamscape to train me. He waited while I dressed. “Where are we going this morning?” I asked, strapping on my armor. “Sect of the Vanishing Moon,” he said cheerfully, and I groaned. They were one of the more malicious sects in the city. [In our last visit, Konstantin had sustained a serious injury that required him to use one of his healing potions. → The last time we visited, they’d nearly gutted Konstantin, forcing him to burn one of his healing potions.] It had been a week since we had been there, and I assumed he had been training fervently in the dreamscape for revenge. After being in the city for half a month, I was certain that the other worlders who had settled here were primarily from India and the Middle East on Earth. There was some Asian influence in their features, but not much. [I don’t think one in fifty people had fair skin. → Fair skin was rare—maybe one in fifty had it.] My own skin had tanned considerably, but it was still easy for the locals to know I was a foreigner. We arrived at the large gates, where a dozen other warriors, mostly from different sects, were waiting to challenge as well. Each year, there was a massive tournament among all the martial sects, and you needed a specific number of victories against other sects to qualify for entry. I had no aspirations to participate in the tournament, but I was getting the impression that Konstantin did. He had collected four tokens in two weeks and needed nine. [I had three tokens myself and would have refused them, but that would have been considered an insult. → I had three of my own and would have gladly refused them, but apparently, that was an insult.] When the sun cracked the horizon, the gates cracked with it. All across Godok, the same thing was happening at the martial sects. We formed an odd line as two of the sect’s masters exited. [on seeing Konstantin, one of them smirked. → One caught sight of Konstantin and smirked, clearly recognizing him.] There was a short formal declaration from the first in line before both sect masters nodded, and he entered. This went down the line, with no one being denied. [In our time, we had only seen a challenger denied twice. Once was a boy, probably no older than 10 and the other time was someone we later learned had been expelled from that very sect. → We’d only seen two denials—one was a boy, maybe ten, and the other was someone we later learned had been expelled from this very sect.] When our turn came, Konstantin spoke for the both of us. I just nodded along and waited. [One sect master’s lip turned up in glee at seeing Konstantin again. He had been the one who had nearly killed Konstantin the last time. → The same master who had nearly killed Konstantin last time practically beamed at the chance for a rematch.] We only needed the approval of one, but both sect masters nodded us through. We walked straight into the courtyard to see the students stretching, swinging weighted practice swords, or crowding around one of the masters in instruction. Once the challenges began, they would all watch, but there were some formalities first. This sect only had a weak healer among its members, so there was a short speech to us as the challengers as a warning not to take or give a lethal blow. [It was not unusual for the sect of the Vanishing Moon to have one or two deaths a week—almost always challengers. → The Sect of the Vanishing Moon was notorious for weekly deaths—almost always among challengers.] The door to my room in the Adventurer’s Hall pounded loudly again. I pulled the griffin-down pillow around my ears to block it out. Every damn morning, an hour before sunrise—[my own personal alarm to Groundhog Day. → like some cursed reenactment of Groundhog Day.] ⸻ Let me know if you want further refinements!

Koral

Minor correction: primary It was my idea, and one of the rimary reasons I suggested we have rooms next to each.

Erick Thiemke

it takes two weeks to acclimate the ring of sustenence

Koral

I don't understand why he doesn't wear the ring of surefootedness while practicing and fighting and the ring of sustenance the rest of the time or at least before he sleeps.

Chachi

hope eryk levels up his swordmen ship a to a higher level including konstantin the old man needs it

Ivan Kanewske

someone tried to break down the door while the other was in the dreamscape, the noise would them. Add wake The noise would wake them

Erick Thiemke

It would not be much for Konstantin but yes, next chapter is an MC tablet update

Sean Kauffman

You many want to add something about Konstantin getting quicker due to minor essences he had been taking, or maybe a blerb about working through their backstock for both of them.

Silver Beard

Still think they'll have to force them down her throat. She'll see them as assets in her cause to do in Octavian not as a cure for her issue.

Doritoscrunch

Excited to see the grind/progression again

Theo Tomss

Did he create Rhuuk to practice against in the dreamscape amulet ? He seemed like one of the best fighter in desia so It would make sense

Bananaboat

Something I've wondered too, maybe he didn't fight him long enough to bring an accurate copy into the dreamscape

Nick Pincus

I love the idea of consitine holding back for erik

NovaZero

I'm interested in whether or not Eryk has managed to make greater healing potions. Glad to see he has lesser covered though!

Andrew

Thank you!

Jordan A

Thanks for the chapter!

Justin Barnett

Did Eryk ever add warlord Rhuuk to the dreamscape?

The Old Guy

Nice, thanks for the chapter

yehUahe

I really wanna see her reaction to the essences they farmed for her!

yehUahe

beat me to it

Garrett

the noise would them. Would "wake" them.

Erick Thiemke

Back to the grind of the MC. Not going to spend too many chapters in Godok. We need that Castile reunion.


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