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A Soldier's Life - 354 - Stowaway

🕑 Added 2025-03-03 05:42:57 +0000 UTC

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HappyNoms

Just saying, seeing that he's getting practiced at this point at sleght of handing coins into his palm from his dimensional space, it ought to occur to him to become a godlike cheat at gambling games like cards and rake in huge profits at will. Teleporting cards gives him (or anyone with even a tiny dimensional space) absurd advantages and undetectable cheats at many gambling games. Swapping weighted dice in and out would also be huge.

JohnathanR

Feels a little messy to stir the pot and dip. They should have some long standing consequences for this.

Erick Thiemke

yes that is the inspiration for the character but I read it so long ago. didnt he end up betraying the group? maybe i need a reread

Mercutio Montano

Lesna appears in the cabin... My mind: HAH. Tasslehoff Burrfoot. Here we go. :D

J. L. Mullins

Yet they would still be immensely useful. He bottoms out his magic and can't heal himself quite often, and he often calls healing potions 'very important' and needs them for his friends. 🤷‍♂️ To me, it was a bit confusing why he suddenly didn't seem to care about them any more (in adventuring halls), but he will still go out of his way in dungeons to get one more healing potion, and is glad to have them when he finds them. (In the empire, as he's leaving, he's upset that he can't buy any, but after he arrives in elvin lands, when his capacities haven't changed that much, he doesn't ask after them, nor ever again.) Might be worth a line or two in one of the early Elvin halls if you want his attitude to change.

Erick Thiemke

he can heal himself and has brewed his own lesser potions I believe at this point

J. L. Mullins

Oh, it's this one that he leaves another thriving adventuring hall without trying to buy potions. :P

Andrew Crews

The halfling snapped her fingers in front of Konstantin’s glassy eyes as he tried to focus. [“He got mind-fucked real good,” Lesna said, amused. → “Damn, he got mind-fucked good,” Lesna said with a smirk.] Konstantin’s jaw tightened, and I hoped he didn’t punch the halfling woman. [“What can we do to cure him?” Gilda asked heatedly, ignoring her question. → Gilda, ignoring the remark, asked sharply, “How do we fix him?”] I could tell she didn’t like the short woman. [Gilda had probably watched Lesna in the common room many times in the last few weeks. → She’d probably spent too much time observing Lesna’s antics in the common room.] [“Time. Two, three, maybe four days, and he will be fine if he isn’t spelled again. → “Time. A couple of days, maybe four, as long as he doesn’t get spelled again.”] I hear submerging in freezing water can help as well. Regular healing will not speed it up.” I frowned, as Konstantin had already taken one of the precious dungeon potions. [“Is he going to stab us in our sleep?” I asked, half-serious, and Konstantin narrowed his eyes at me. He hated not being in control. → “So, should I be sleeping with one eye open, or is he going to behave?” I quipped. Konstantin shot me a glare, clearly hating the lack of control.] [“No. He will have trouble swinging his sword for a while,” the halfling chuckled mirthfully. → “Nah, his sword arm’s shot for a few days,” Lesna chuckled.] [“I know a mage who can fix him. Ten gold.” → “I know a mage who could patch him up. Ten gold.”] [“No!” Konstantin barked. “I will be fine. Let me sleep!” → “No!” Konstantin snapped. “I’ll be fine. I just need sleep!”] I looked at Gilda, who nodded slightly. She would keep an eye on him. She narrowed her eyes at me, not picking up on what I had done. [“Thank you, and you can leave.” → “Thanks. Now, get out.”] She huffed and stormed out, [well-stormed out for a three-foot woman. → or at least tried to, which was hard to take seriously from someone three feet tall.] The next morning, a body from the Sect of the Venomous Serpent was discovered outside the Adventurer’s Hall. The werehyena in sect robes had fallen from a great height and was midway through his transformation into his hybrid form. We had decided on this course instead of claiming credit for infiltrating the sect’s tower. [I had access to the roof of the building, and he failed to yell as he appeared in mid-air and fell one hundred feet in the dark, head-first to the cobblestones below. → With access to the roof, I simply popped him into existence and dropped him into open air. He didn’t even have time to scream before his body [met] the cobblestones a hundred feet below[, with a sickening thud, the impact deep and resonant, like a slab of meat slammed onto stone. A wet slap followed as flesh compressed and split, the force driving internal fluids outward. Then came the unmistakable cracks—sharp, successive pops of bones shattering under the sudden, brutal stop. The echoes of his body folding in on itself, the grotesque squelch of ruptured organs, and the final, hollow stillness reached even my ears at the top of the building, lingering in the air long after the fall had ended. It was only then that I realized—I had left my focus amulet on. A curse caught in my throat as I recognized why every awful detail had been so painfully clear. The heightened perception had made the fall unfold in excruciating, unbearable sharpness. With a thought, I shifted the amulet into my dimensional space, forcing it away like shoving an unwelcome memory aside. The rush of adrenaline from ending a life, combined with the amulet’s effect, had sharpened my focus to a level that was unnervingly intense—nothing like the calm, deliberate concentration of alchemy. That was controlled, methodical, a focus born of patience. This was the opposite—raw, immediate, and all-consuming. Every detail, every sound, every awful sensation had imprinted itself into my mind with perfect clarity. I wouldn’t be ending another life while wearing it—that was a mistake I wouldn’t make twice.] [Gilda was on the body instantly below to ensure his death and walked away. → Gilda was there to make sure he didn’t somehow survive the fall, then slipped away into the night.] Later in the day, we learned he had been one of the sect’s leaders. The city governance was slow to investigate the sect’s tower, and by the time city guards and mages arrived in the late afternoon, it was completely abandoned. Konstantin was angry about the incompetence, but we had stirred up quite [the shitstorm in the city. → a mess in the city.] Now, city guards walked the streets randomly, requiring citizens to hold a pure silver coin in their hand. [Anyone who refused was arrested, and it was putting the entire city on edge. → Refusal meant immediate arrest, and paranoia was sweeping through the streets.] A few martial sects had even closed their doors to challengers. A week later, I was working on my alchemy, and Konstantin was sitting on my bed. [He had been hiding out in the Guild Hall, being bored, and thought annoying me was a decent pastime. → With nothing better to do, he had taken up annoying me as his new hobby.] When he did wander the streets, it was without his armor and in disguise. We were also very selective in the sects we challenged in the mornings. He was too stubborn to give up on the training. [“Eryk, I think it is time to go.” → “Eryk, we need to leave.”] I paused to listen to him. [“The werehyenas are looking for us. They interrogated several people in the slums and killed them afterward. By now, they might have a decent idea of what we look like.” → “The werehyenas are closing in. They’ve been interrogating—and killing—people in the slums. By now, they probably have a description of us.”] I studied him. Konstantin was not scared, just being prudent. He preferred to be the one on the offensive. [“How has the city watch been doing?” I asked, knowing several people had been cut down in the streets. → “How’s the watch handling it?” I asked, already expecting the worst.] [“From what Gilda has picked up in rumors, they have killed nine werebeasts, but only two were werehyenas,” he said, disgusted by their incompetence in finding their new lair. → “Gilda says they’ve killed nine werebeasts. Only two were werehyenas,” he said, shaking his head at the city’s incompetence.]

Apophixas

For once, I'm kind of on board with the murder-hoboness here. She has basically been nothing but trouble, and has shown she is too into scheming and mischief. To the point that it could fet people killed. She needs to go, one way or another. Either by spear through the head, or enough time in the dimensional space that by the time she is released, it doesn't even matter.

NovaZero

Pocket halflng. Huh.

NovaZero

Or large dungeon silver?

Silver Beard

Just a typo: Large Dungeon [Coin]

Silver Beard

I'm thinking she's been 'marked' and she ran to the only human who's faced the Mind Mage and come away scott free for protection. He should give her some oblivion pills and tuck her away in his space for a few months. She's small enough- she should fit...if barely.

Andrew Gonzalez

Don't know how to feel about Lesna, we haven't seen much of her besides being slightly annoying

Chachi

she seems like a conniving manipulator always out to get something imo she should be dealt with like the rhuuk

Erick Thiemke

As Otto says, 4 week for Soldier Seraphim. I also write one chapter of Town Builder a week and one of World Sphere a week....as well as edit 5-6 past chapters from stories. I have been walking my work week forward a day for the last month. it used to be Wed to Tue, but it will be Mon to Sun. It gave me eight days for a bit more time for editing and a mental vacation. Starting next week, it will be set to Mon to Sun permanently.

Erick Thiemke

corrected, thanks

Erick Thiemke

corrected

Erick Thiemke

corrected

Silver Beard

I was hoping he'd make more contacts for the future; but Lesna is a pest- a cockroach seemingly.

Andrew

Thank you!

Dominic French

It's a soft secret now, the cat got out of the bag with the orc warlord arc in my opinion. She could still be dangerous though she's did show up in his cabin on a ship and he barely knows her.

Chachi

murder hobo eryk when?

Chachi

now that she knows his secret shes gotta go….lol

Otto Kovar

~4 per week, no fixed days

NovaZero

He has pocket dungeons now?

Ivan Kanewske

but the plate she delivered was as big as her head, filled with clams in a white butter sauce She delivered? She had delivered? She ordered?

Ivan Kanewske

He gripped that there weren’t many places to hide half a dozen Gripped to griped

Ivan Kanewske

I pretended to perform a sleight of hand and produced a large dungeon. Large dungeon gold? Silver?

Mrtotoro

What is the release schedule for soldier's life

Jeffrey whitworth

Thanks!

Erick Thiemke

1st of four for cycle. Next chapter is the POV chapter you all voted on


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