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A Soldier's Life - 356 - Return To Gramney

🕑 Added 2025-03-09 06:22:04 +0000 UTC

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Aspiring Sage

ARAO, in the Godok chapter, you wrote the ship we headed to Gesedmuriah, however they ended up in Yuetsen which is in Kityeunia. So you may need to correct that earlier chapter. Also, Zikh is between three nations, not two. I do love the minor world building you do in these small sidebar conversations. It really gives Desia life. Keep up the amazing world building... I just don't know how manage to keep track of it all. Quite impressive.

Erick Thiemke

Find out tonight

piranha

Does the last paragraph imply the teleport has has gone wrong?

Stephen Gauthier

I forgot about Linus! It might be useful to keep Brutus alive to show up at a later date as an antagonist but I think him getting whacked sooner won’t cause anyone to lose any sleep.

Erick Thiemke

he is going to learn of their existence and go seek them out. I am moving that chapter to just after he learns of their existence and it is only half written

Sky Chicken

Think I misunderstood this somewhere, there's another group of earthlings in Spanish Yatsen, and Eric goes there so they might meet. Until Eric takes a teleport halfway across the world. Will the earthlings follow? Will Eric go back? Or Are they forgotten?

Erick Thiemke

@ Stephen - there was Linus too who went to work for Duchess Veronica. I might edit Brutus' death into book 5 when he kills first citizen Boris. But I am writing Firth and Wylie in the next chapter

Stephen Gauthier

Wondering when Brutus is going to pop up again. He, Firth and Wylie were the only ones to have separated from the main group.

Stephen Gauthier

I could see Lurkin getting whacked. He seemed to have sort of given up the life of a warrior/adventurer with running the inn and hooking up with the barkeep lady. When it comes to the last few originals that were coming back over from the Orc Caliphate they all still seem pretty capable of carrying on as characters in a variety of ways.

IndyBart

Hate seeing everyone that has made it this far slowly getting ground down. Really surprised there hasn’t been a peasant revolt yet, down trodden people can only take so much before they say F@&$ It and take action.

Chris

My post was meant to point out that not enough information was given about Lesna, the city they were in, and/or the Guild itself. Expecting the MC to find companions with the same loyalty and morals as Maveith on their first or second encounter is naive. His legionnaire buddies never went back for him in books 1-3; not even Konstatin. It wasn’t until book 6 they went looking for him during the werewolf fiasco. Everyone has an agenda and goals in life; Lesna was introduced/appeared in what 2-3 chapters? The content of those chapters didn’t have much information given about Lesna/her team/what went down at tower, and a lot of conjecture was being made about her personality and intentions. You’re generalizing all branches of the military and every command/unit/squadron/flight/etc. In some commands I’m seen E5s pranked, by other E5s, and in others I haven’t. Of course Non-NCOs/junior ranking members don’t prank higher ranking ones. That would never go well for them. Did it state that Eryk’s silver guild medallion was out in the open, or did it state that Lesna/her companions at the table were bronze/silver/gold ranking members. Eryk walked into a new guild hall, and instead of walking say 5-10 feet to the receptionist’s desk to ask for directions, he chose to walk over to a table of random people, and interrupted their game/conversion to ask for directions. So far, every single guild hall had a receptions’s desk on the first level/right when you walk inside. What Eryk did could be considered rude/bad manners, and could also give the impression he’s a newbie. That’s the equivalent of walking into a military building trying to figure out what floor/office you need to go to, and instead of reading the directory when you walk inside, you walk into an open office and interrupt the occupants. An NCO would know to not do this, and if they didn’t then it would be a learning moment depending on the occupants inside of the office they barged into. Eryk left himself wide open to what happened to him. Sure, Lesna could have just said your interrupting our game/we are busy and to go away, she also could have told him to ask the receptionist. She didn’t and played a prank on him. 🤣🤷‍♂️ All I was saying was that people were saying that she was vile and nefarious person. We don’t know if this a halfling trait, especially for young halflings. We don’t know that she is a famous adventurer in the Guild, known for her mischief; I felt people were quick to judge. But that’s my opinion and this will be my last post on the matter. Enough said. I love the world building and the fantasy world the author has built. I’m curious to learn more of the halflings.

Karnnie

I am also very happy she was left behind. The MC is always being manipulated, especially by women. He is taken advantage of more often than not because he is a good person. I am happy to see him standing up for himself and setting boundaries. For whatever reason, she ran to eryk for protection but he is a stranger to her, why run to a stranger and stowaway in his room? Seems odd and suspicious, I am sure she is up to something. She then got herself a horse, perfect for travelling with the group, only wait, plans changed and she tried to sneak into a portal with him? what did she do with the horse? At least now she has a way to travel if she wants to. She isn't broke, horses cost gold, not silver. She is an adventurer, she can handle herself. As for the military/hazing, you only do that to new, junior members, you would never haze a new E5 that had transferred into your command because they are not new. She had no way to tell who this guy was or how long he had been an adventurer, she was out of line, end of story. She was pushing herself on Eryk and his group since day one and we still have no idea why. I am glad he left her behind. It shows that Eryk is growing and evolving.

Silver Beard

@Chris you are stretching. IF she had any morals or integrity- she'd have taken note when Eryk said no to the 2nd raid and done the same. All she saw was GOLD...AND SHE WENT FOR IT. And when the Emperor's hound show up and offer her GOLD... she will go for it. Eryk be damned. That's the creature you are trying to elevate. Greedy little bitch who thinks her tricks can get her out of anything. I can't recall a single tearful remorse of all the companions she got killed attacking that tower- it was like they were just numbers. She talked about losing her 'friends' like it was just yesterday's news. That's what your type you want to keep around Eryk? That kind that are playful, lethal, and after dead...shrug and say ce la vie?

Chachi

i feel like eryk needs a bit of a nasty streak to him. not necessarily be evil turbo murder hobo but lesna is the sort to rat and lie to get what she wants. i feel like eryk couldve told gilda to get rid of her. just my opinion but i get what u mean about the bad taste of it.

Chris

Sure, to us her manners were lousy, but we don’t know enough about that the people of that city, how halflings typically act, or how Adventurers in the guild treat each other. I’m in the military and at work we play around/prank new members to our unit. The MC walked into a new guild and approached a random person asking for directions. Maybe it was a bit of hazing that’s typical of members to each other at that guild. Also, she was in a desperate situation being hunted. She truthfully admitted that she thought of selling their information, but ultimately she didn’t do that. In desperate situations people could/would do anything, and she ultimately didn’t go down that path. She at least is truthful to admit it the MC, and it shows she was able to maintain whatever morals she does have. I was saying that we didn’t know enough about the situation, and about Lesna herself. I was interested in her sticking around to learn more of the halflings, and it seems she was a powerful mage. We don’t know that she got her companions/friends killed. She approached the MC, but it’s never stated that she was the group leader. Who knows, maybe she is, and maybe she went back and tried to convince her group not to attack the tower. Maybe they vetoed her decision/ignored her warning. We do see some compassion in her and how she treats her mount. So far only the MC and Realia had names for their mounts. The MC’s buddies gave him a hard time for it. They only see the horses as a means to an end. Mynasha even treated her mount poorly, but Lesna actually already named her mount Honeysuckle. She also seemed concerned with what the MC fed the horse.

Silver Beard

Wager it's the inkeeper/cook that gets killed. No way Firth fails to recognize him and a good chance he was able to get close. Did the balance of the Orc party ever make it home; could be a couple of them too.

Silver Beard

Hunting enemies is one thing; farming convenient nuisances for essence leaves a bad taste behind. That's what the Empire was known for. Eryk clearly doesn't want her dead only to keep her distance.

Silver Beard

Pranking a new arrival who has been courteous is lousy manners especially when she was aware she had a bad disposition with the Archivist and insisted on using the back entrance. It was her judgement that got her companions killed, having failed to thoroughly investigate the target Tower. I agree she ran to Eryk to survive; but that she even suggested selling him out as a bargaining chip just proves how desperate she is and how low she was willing to go. It's like the fake tears. She's used to manipulating others to get her way. This is not someone to take back to Castille and the conspiracy they are building against Octavian. She could do some real damage to all of them with her loose lips. If she does show up; it'll be years. She clearly doesn't have the coin for the portal- not honestly at least and earning enough from delves to travel 2K miles? Won't be fast or cheap. I'm actually impressed author left her behind. I expected Eryk to feed her the oblivion pills and stash her away. Surely he's got a little space available. Could have held her for 4-5 years and then let her out. Nobody would be looking for her then.

Chris

Another takeaway, is that the MC believes she has never left the city she fled. Given how she was acting after disembarking. If that’s the case, then her personality can be explained by her hometown. That place was very corrupt, but she didn’t appear to be. She also must not of had any family given that she left the city entirely/the unsavory places she had to hide before getting onto the ship.

Chris

I’m sad to see Lesna was left behind, but I hope she makes a reappearance later in Gramney. Honestly, I didn’t find her that bad of a person. There was still much to learn about her before making any concrete judgements, but so far she didn’t seem like a bad person. Her first interaction with the MC was pulling a prank on him. Later he paid her back by stealing money and eventually returning it her; she was left confused how he did it. Later she approached him with a business proposition to join their team. The MC warned her and later they attacked the werehyenas hideout. She snuck onboard the ship and we learn that all of her friends were killed. She was being hunted and she stowed away with the MC. Honestly, she was trying to survive. Nothing nefarious there. She had no place to go and no one that would shelter her. She also didn’t come across as experienced/proficient at sneaking/spying on people, otherwise she wouldn’t have gasped seeing the MC use magic. The MC told her to leave and she did. She didn’t sneak or disturb the MC until they got to shore. It shows that she has good judgement and understands boundaries. She can see that the MC isn’t a bad person, and respected his space after he didn’t want her in his room. We haven’t seen much of the halflings or dwarves yet. So we don’t know much about their race/culture/dispositions. Elves are long lived and appear to take away to mature/be treated as adults. Realia was around 47 years old when she had her first physical encounter. I was interested to have Lesna in the group to learn more about Halflings. So far, there was the guild member in the Telhian Capital that seemed shrewd, and there was the apothecary at Maveith’s home island. Maybe halflings are mischievous by nature.

PatronTurtle

So the Spanish-derivative city sounds like the place the other Terrans were looking for. Could the assistant be one?

Erick Thiemke

she is safe

Stephen Gauthier

Please don’t kill off Castile

Ivan Kanewske

Powered powdered chalk could be an ingredient, alchemy, just ups the cost but helps the mage Lol

Gwalmeich

No worries, bro. Just commenting on Lesna's behavior.

Erick Thiemke

i just assumed it was a Grammarly correction that changed a pronoun or something

Erick Thiemke

unfortunately it is

Erick Thiemke

yes, she knows where they went. she was listening in when the displacement mage told them the trips "itinerary"

Gwalmeich

It's a joke, ya silly goose!

Erick Thiemke

where is the error?

Erick Thiemke

corrected, have to give me a break as I was seeing double at 1 am

Ivan Kanewske

Without a flat surface to use his chalk, he switched to powered chalk to draw his complex spell forms on the packed earth. Powered? Or Powdered chalk?

Erick Thiemke

corrected

Erick Thiemke

corrected

Ivan Kanewske

had noted the dungeon as the worms yielded earth lesser earth essences with about eighty percent likelihood. 1 too many earth's in this sentence,

Gwalmeich

Lesna's mom must have been hella ugly if she's confusing Eric with her.

Justin Biebow

"There were thirteen worms in total, and when you killed all thirteen, a thirteenth" either fourteen and fourteenth, or, after you kill twelve, a thirteenth?

Sunto

Totally, she also just seems untrustworthy. 100% she’d sell him out if someone came asking for information on his location.

Chachi

lesnas little stunt could’ve costed the mc his life. He shouldve put her out imo also for that sweet essence her corpse wouldve provided

Chachi

hence why i want eryk to be s bit more of a murder hobo

Sunto

Damn, sounds ominous.

Sunto

God Lesna was annoying, if she had offered any kind of mutually beneficial partnership, or even just begged for help it would be different. But just trying to leech on and get help from the party for nothing was infuriating.

Andrew

Thank you!

Nick Nicholson

Never thought I’d say this, but I actually feel bad for Lesna

saber

Well I'm depressed I liked the little halfling. I hope we get to see her again. I feel bad for her she's like a lost puppy

Erick Thiemke

The next chapter is a POV chapter featuring Firth, but I'm not sure whose perspective it will be yet. As a reminder, Firth was sent to kill Castile by Octavian. And the events in the chapter will have occured weeks before. THey do not arrive in the nick of time


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