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A Soldier's Life - 332 - Descent Into Darkness

🕑 Added 2025-01-21 05:38:13 +0000 UTC

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Adam V

Edit suggestions: It is unlikely to lead to the dungeon, and if it did, the [decent]->[descent] would take days and be dangerous.” Konstantin found his tongue, “So, Eryk rescued +[you] in Macha?” Konstantin had just spilled more of his past in the last few minutes than I had learned from +[him] in the last two years. “[Whose]->[Who's] Baldo?” Navek asked, confused, but we ignored him.

Aspiring Sage

ARAO, if the Sep vote for the POV chapter chooses #4, it would dovetail quite well with this chapter. You may wish to consider changing this part of the story slightly to mesh with that POV. It would be a great fit, and provide additional insights into the Death Hunters that can help the readers for book 7. Also, can you please bring up the named daughter in book 7 so Eryk can tell her how her mother died! That would be an amazing side story. Maybe even have the daughter promise to go seek out Kon to get the full story from him!!! That would be so cool.

Salvo

His void power probably is the only way to stop vampire and werewolf transformation.

Apophixas

I feel like we've actually had a number of those. His Hound training days sounded ALOT like Witcher school training, and the way he hunts monsters (without the dimensional space) and uses potions just practically screams Witcher. And I love it.

Zurko

just a suggestion, but he can climb down using his air shield spellform to make steps. if he runs low on aether he can use his dimensional space to make a small cave in the wall where he can rest and recover.

Ivan Kanewske

Because it was mentioned, he became a hound, he will live a long time, its almost what he does, it's a way to gather high level essences

Silver Beard

That's what I assumed; 'course his romance with Raelia likely forgot all about them. The story keeps giving great opportunities for him to come clean he's the immortal one but he never does it. The bit about being a married couple would have been perfect time to propose...he could honestly admit that he was getting the shit end of the deal with her short life span.

John Donovan

Why

Ivan Kanewske

I feel like Eryk might go be a Death Hunter

Ivan Kanewske

Whatever happened to the two demons he stored? if he still has them why have they not been harvested yet? Or are you going to use them as distractions like the goblin in the shimmering dungeon?

Eriach

TFTC

NightRider

Konstantin found his tongue, “So, Eryk rescued in Macha?” Should read, “So, Eryk rescued YOU in Macha?”

Enk

not sure the title isn't wishful thinking - they do not, after all, descend into darkness, they only stand around talkin'

Laggmaster

Getting some Witcher type chapters would be awesome

Andrew

Thank you!

NightRider

Terrific Chapter, Konstantin’s past is starting to come out and build his character! Absolutely Awesome!


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