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A Solider's Life - 336 - Not Following The Rules (edited 1-28-25 +500 words)

🕑 Added 2025-01-28 05:56:35 +0000 UTC

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Adam V

Edits: And [we]->[why] hadn’t the entrance to this dungeon been found? With my other hand, I drew [Aesop’s]->[Corvus's] dagger and began stabbing the beast repeatedly in the chest.

Erick Thiemke

Corvus....I changed the name to Corvus when I edited book 4

Émile Dufresne

Who tf is Aesop?!

Karnnie

What if there was no exit? And we hadn’t the entrance to this dungeon been found? What if there was no exit; and why hadn’t the entrance to this dungeon been found?

Karnnie

As Konstantin said, never let your guard down in a dungeon.

Invalid Entry

I kinda feel like him being subconsciously wary of the anther potion and giving it to someone else makes sense after his mageburn episode. I as a reader would honestly immediately expect the author was planning to nerf him for a bit with mageburn if he got another of those potions lol.

Silver Beard

Thanks for the edit/update

Silver Beard

As long as the loot is good; this group can overcome almost anything. Eryk getting the most animosity is perfect really. He's the most capable of dealing with the unknown. His spell forms make him the perfect tank to soak: Self healing, Purity of the Void, Mind Fortress, Earth Speak, Night Vision, and Air Shields

Erick Thiemke

corrected

PatronTurtle

Ah, so there are gonna be mirror perspectives where the surface is the dumping grounds for Dungeons (like this one). Also means if there's ever a goal to kill all the dungeons it'll take forever. Interesting

Erick Thiemke

yes a dungeon can have an entrance in the Endless Dark. it was mentioned in the Caliphate arc

Erick Thiemke

No spoilers!!!

Ivan Kanewske

And we hadn’t the entrance to this dungeon been found We to why

Doritoscrunch

Seems like since there are too many delvers (breaking the rules) that now the dungeon can also break the rules

hrs

maybe dont do a full maze. the room could be a mini mountain side with the entrance at the bottom. there could be a switch back track with several dead end sections. goats and couple manticores could try to take out people as they hike up. there could be some caves that act like short cuts between paths if you manage to kill whatever is inside or they have hidden entrances.

Eriach

TFTC

PatronTurtle

Do we actually know for certain that dungeons have to exit on the surface? I'm wondering if this one's main exit will be in the underdark and the crack they entered was where a new entrance would form in a few more centuries

Andrew

Thank you!

Erick Thiemke

I forgot to write in the essences. He is getting an apex essence from the large panther

Zurko

I feel like you're making the MC a bit too generous, like the aether potion really makes no sense. in a moment where his life is at stake he can chug the potion and kill whatever. like he did In the shimmering labyrinth.

Zurko

that's crazy he didn't take the aether potion. him being able to use another instakill dimentional space is better than 10 of Raelias fireballs.

NightRider

I think the dungeon only allows for delvers at once.” Maybe it should read, I think the dungeon only allows FOUR delvers at any one time”

Ken WoTCom

A maze with an open top could be very dangerous if there were manticores or other flying monsters about

Erick Thiemke

thanks i will fix it tomorrow...i just forgot and the bigger one gives a different essence

1536539

They should have used the collector on the cats

Silver Beard

This needs some tweeking: And we hadn’t the entrance to this dungeon been found

Erick Thiemke

3rd of 4 for cycle. Not sure if I like the cavern maze yet. May change it. It sounded better in my head than in writing. Maybe I just need to describe it better.


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