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🕑 Added 2025-02-08 05:59:18 +0000 UTC

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Dennis Crocker

Another thought, I’m wondering why Storme hasn’t mentioned anything about learning how to stop and deal with the specific issue of having someone that was able to project themselves directly into his personal space. If we’ve learned anything from Storme it’s that he’s usually thinking about these issues.

Dennis Crocker

I like the progression of the story. If this is the first chapter of book 5, I’m thinking you might want to give us a reminder of his current levels and statistics, spells, core etc.

Ivan Kanewske

More devastatingly, the ancient teleportation rings in the cities were destroyed, making it difficult to travel easily in this region of the Sphere. Maybe try Even more devastating, the ancient teleportation rings in the cities were destroyed, making it difficult to travel easily in this region of the Sphere.

Brianna Stormcloud

Thanks for the chapter 📖🍿 *Edit suggestions: She generally played *remove>with< her cards close to her chest, but hadn’t manipulated me openly in months. I headed straight into the *Archimage’s>Archmage's or Archmagus'< work room.

Erick Thiemke

unlikely at it was very costly to build and artifice. not economical. no Sebastian lost his ship with no reimbursement

Brett Ulakovic

Will storm and his people ever make a smaller version of the night wraith or other versions of the maelstrom for trading? Did sky home ever reimburse Sebastian for the loss of the wind splitter when they commandeered it?

GoodEnough Name

Excited for this new book! Thanks for the chapter

Erick Thiemke

the world walkers are being teleported to destroy the dungeons/portals. they are monsterous creatures but think extrmely slowly so appear to be instinctual

Erick Thiemke

i tend to look at magic like sci-fi sometimes. most sci-fi could be considered magic-like but the power comes from devices instead of the person

Lemes

Sometimes I still come back to this and other fantasy stories with an overdose of magic, but I always realize that this is not for me. At first it is interesting, but then the excess of magic tires me. I think what still attracts me to the story of the soldier is that magic is just an accessory to the story and not its reason for being.

Zadar Thule

Yeah, currently the dungeons are probably to weak to get the attention of world walkers.

Erick Thiemke

True but maybe that is a good way to kill them…they would walk right off the island

Erick Thiemke

That would have been good but I was going to give an update on the taxi skiffs in next chapter

Erick Thiemke

The novel goes for sale on Amazon tomorrow (9th) will see how it is does before I start the book 2 edit. More focused on editing book 4 of soldier at the moment

Zadar Thule

Skyholme has no teleportation blocker up. So I see no reason why the world walkers can't reach the islands. Or did Loriel found a new heartstone?

Silver Beard

Surprised he uses the big ship as a Taxi...seems like that would have been a better use/advertising.

Andrew

Thank you!

BubblyGhost

Any more edits of early chapters on the way?

Alias

This does feel new bookish. Happy to see World Sphere. Thanks!


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