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A Soldier's Life - 342 -

🕑 Added 2025-02-09 08:09:50 +0000 UTC

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Kudugu

Not to forget that girl servant that betrayed him by telling Boris of the dreamscape amulet.

SlaveToMyWhims

I never appreciated the girl sharing details of her sexual past in real life. It's a necessity if you are going to take a woman on for a long-haul, because those kinds of things tend to jump out and make a messy mess at the wrongest times and in the most inconvenient ways. But it never felt good hearing about it. In a lot of cases it cools the relationship off, especially if it was an eventful past. What I'm saying is that i would have appreciated having these bits left out.

GucciG

I understand the jealousy but Eryk has no ground to stand on here, lol. He’s been here for what, two years? In that time, he slept with a charismatic captain and Renna.

Andrew Crews

Chapter title: One Knight of Virtue

Andrew Crews

[When Maveith finally recovered his aether, Konstantin happened to exit the dreamscape, looking content as he handed me back the amulet.] Konstantin slowly lowered the helm [on → onto] his head. Its large size made me want to make a Spaceballs joke, but again, it would be fruitless [in → with] the current company. “[Aether → aether] control isn’t great,” Maveith complained. It didn’t take long before the hideous chimera noticed us. It flapped its powerful wings, circling high above [in → above] the chamber. I was relieved he was on my side as I distracted the injured beast, allowing his hammer to slam into its flank, but not before the tail, still [hold → holding] a number of barbs[,] slammed into Maveith’s chest and stuck.

Daniel Foster

"The reward chest was slightly disappointing, yielding the same silk rope as last time." it should be - Same silk cloak.

michele 00

Good opinion, you could say I agree.

Erick Thiemke

i think that might be a funny scenerio. Konstantin making Eryk as he sees him. have to wait and see

Brett Ulakovic

Ok thank you

Apophixas

I get why it would make sense for Elves to develop a more "take our time" approach to a lot of things. But we've seen that it's clearly not the case in this world. It would make sense if the Elves in this world were extremely insular and xenophobic, but they aren't. The young ones are just as impulsive as any human, and the old ones are not immune to the pettiness and anger that afflicts the other races. Also, the whole, "If I don't know, I can't care" mentality is nice and all, and most of the time I agree. In regards to someone being a virgin or not though, it's stupid. That's important info, because it changes things about how you need to approach your first intimate experience with someone. And some people have preferences as well.

Apophixas

I think it was mentioned before that hundreds of years old is still only sort of youngish. For context, the Shimmering Labyrinth was THOUSANDS of years old.

michele 00

That said, it doesn't bother me that people have experience, it annoys me to have knowledge of it. You know the saying 'eyes that don't see, heart that doesn't feel' (Translation: occhi che non vedono, cuore che non sente) or something like that (I'm Italian) ? Pretty much what I'm trying to do here, why would I get upset about something I'm not even sure about ?

michele 00

Hmm, tbh I don't really care, I don't think she's the final partner...and what do I think about the age? I think assuming she could still be a virgin is ok. Why ? because having such a long life expectancy and a system/culture that surely was also formed around that, it wouldn't be all wrong to think that some things take 'time' for such long-lived races as for example finding an ideal partner, having sex ecc.

Brett Ulakovic

Will they be farming the ram room s for the Ather fruit and the Sentinel helm to see if more of them drop Another question for the dungeon shouldn’t be bigger since it’s been untouched for hundreds of years. Not sure on how the dungeon grows

MacMahon Wenzl

I also thought Raelia was like 47 or something, it would honestly be a bit strange. There could be a "save yourself for marriage" thing but if you lived 1000+ years that might be a bit much.

Shandlar

The fact it dropped Apex means he needs to do it only like 20 more times instead of 150. They already have something like 8 Apex channeling and twenty something majors. 25 Apex and 25 majors should be enough to heal 3 points for a normie. Maybe 30. He would have need 150+ majors if he hot stuck with only the 7 Apex he had previously.

Eriach

Not a bad idea, but the air shields consume alot of mana

NightRider

Konstantin was happy when he left the Dreamscape amulet, Did Konstantin add an Eryk version to the amulet? It would amuse him no end to get payback for Eryk adding him!

michele 00

Bro, I definitely didn't want to know the BOP's past 💀 (btw just an innocent question... to find a girl without experience in this world you have to be in a relationship with a 10 year old girl or what ? 🤔)

Mark Corwin

Alright. Looks like he only has to do this 160 or so times. I hope he get plenty of aether shaping essences

Erick Thiemke

Also when Glasha did a lore on the black spear, Heartseeker

Ivan Kanewske

I have noticed when you drop at 3am, your errors or higher, Way less when you have time and drop at 9pm, I am glad for your work, Just finished listening to the first 3 again, this time in a row, they did lightly discuss seeding a dungeon in the shimmering labyrinth, you just didn't use the term seeding. It's either where the ranger cloaks came from, or a ranger died and now the dungeon has the ranger cloaks as a reward

Erick Thiemke

he already search - at least as far as his earth pulse went - about 60 feet

Erick Thiemke

edited

Erick Thiemke

corrected

Erick Thiemke

corrected

Erick Thiemke

Weird. It must have been a Grammarly correction because I'm pretty sure I wrote it as one. Correcting. But then again, it was 3am when I finished writing the chapter.

Erick Thiemke

sure, editing. it was the same coordination

Jordan A

“I took only one essence, giving two to each of the others.” Can you add what type of essence was received? It’s not mentioned in the chapter.

Ivan Kanewske

but the sentinel helm wasn’t in fallible. I believe infallible is one word

Ivan Kanewske

He only needed to initiate the channeling with his other hand on the other horn. With just the illusion active, the armor had no substance, and you hand could pass through it. With his other hand on the other horn, With his hand on one of the horns?? And you hand could pass through it You to your

Ivan Kanewske

jealous. I bite my tongue I believe Bite should be bit

Ivan Kanewske

Did Raelia or Eryk give Maveith a small mirror from the shaving kit? The way that is written is confusing, I assume it was Eryk,

Justin Barnett

I was just confused because the collector worked on everything in the vault of the spirit arachnid and that dungeon was more heavily delved than this one.

Erick Thiemke

It isn’t struggling. It functioned normally. The reason for the blood catiplers not all giving essences is the dungeon didn’t invest a sufficient amount of aether in their creation. And before yes, the dungeon was trying to interfere and figure out what the collector was doing

Erick Thiemke

Good point…will edit to have the tail strike come as he moved in for the blow

Garrett

Why was the tail still moving with a broken spine?

Justin Barnett

Why is the collector still struggling? I thought the dungeon was intentionally resisting it before, but now that they all left and returned, shouldn’t it be functioning normally?

Silver Beard

Wonder if the core is under the fig tree? Too valuable to uproot.

Kio

Should have done the spaceballs joke.

Salvo

You know, I bet Maveith can throw Eryk in the air and he can make an air shield lookout for a few seconds for the goat maze, don’t know if it would be better than just using Baldo.

Andrew

Thank you!

Erick Thiemke

1st of 4 for cycle. I did edit the last chapter for grammar and wording. Also posted two more Book 4 edited chapters this afternoon. When I add those book 4 edited chapters you are not notified.


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