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A Soldier's Life - 343 - Unraveling The Dungeon (edited 2-11-25 +200 words)

🕑 Added 2025-02-11 04:52:24 +0000 UTC

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Adam V

Edit: It didn’t affect Raelia, and her eagerness soon had me ignoring the dungeon’s [ever-presence]->[ever-present] vigil. I snorted as I was sure a powerful mage would value any apex essence that -[was] targeted a magical attribute.

SlaveToMyWhims

The dungeons sound basic, straightforward and not thought through all the way. Also exploitable as all hell. Though the author hedged by stating that the dungeon are that way by design, which while a bit self-aware, also sounds like a bit of a narrative shortcut. Ohh, and these grinding bits with little development feel like grind for the reader too. I can't wait for the dungeon to be over. That being said, the story is... well, good enough for me to reach for my wallet, which is a kong-sized praise with all the free content out there. So take my critique as a major compliment that it is. I don't poke at bad stories, I move on from them. Just because X about the story is bad, doesn't mean i think the story is. I just make observations and pick at things that stand out to me.

Andrew Crews

Our second apex channeling essence was a positive sign. It had been just over two days since we cleared the manticore room. The next question we needed answered was whether we could wait two days in the safe room and then return to obtain an apex essence[,] or if we would have to completely exit the dungeon and come back to get [another] apex essence. Maveith hovered over the manticore with his runic skinning knife. “My people do not have strong mages. These advanced spellbooks wouldn’t hold much value for them.” I met Konstantin’s gaze; it was clear that Maveith still supported destroying the dungeon. Manticores had plagued his people for centuries. There was no point in pressing Maveith right now to spare the dungeon. “It is rare, but some rooms in dungeons have reward chests tailored to certain occupations. A reward chest that always gives armor or a weapon is the most common. This room,” she indicated the large stony chamber, “has only given items [intended] for mages.” Raelia’s leather armor and Ranger’s cloak had her quickly struggling to swim. I assisted her out of the pool[,] to Konstantin’s amusement. As I passed through the jungle room, Raelia surprised me, having hidden with her Ranger’s cloak, which was [already] perfectly dry. It didn’t affect Raelia, and her eagerness soon had me ignoring the dungeon’s [ever-present] vigil. We waited as a group for another hour before I entered the room with [the] others behind me. My own aether channeling attribute was 42/61 the last time I used the assessment table, and I wouldn’t mind adding a few extra just in case Castile needed a couple more—and to have a few extra [for] myself. The reward chest in the jungle room consistently provided us with a healing potion along with another: one lesser aether restoration, two strength potions, one cure disease, and two night vision potions. The reward chest in the manticore room yielded three additional spellbooks[:] two nature spells, and one healing spell. My mind still wandering, I walked [over] and opened the chest. Inside was a single apex essence on [a → the] bed of silver coins. Raelia was a lesser mage, but she was a mage. I tossed her the clear sphere. Of course, if a shaping essence appeared next, it would be my turn. I looked at Konstantin to confirm he didn’t want it. He was already harvesting the fresh tea leaves, indicating his lack of interest. When I turned back to Raelia[,] the essence was already gone, and her face had a euphoric glow to it.

Chachi

HERE! HERE!

Silver Beard

Yeah- power he can get anywhere... shaping? This is the first ever- hoping he collects a few more. This is what slow aging was for right. Time to find the resources that'll let him grow. They could leave and he return on his own or with the guild... to keep on farming shaping essences

Silver Beard

Cute idea though...shame Erik can't make it happen. That'd be one hell of a wake up call for the old lady!

Erick Thiemke

adding an edit to address this

Erick Thiemke

that was a grammarly correction I didnt catch

Erick Thiemke

no aether pool essences have dropped yet

Erick Thiemke

he harvested them twice so far

Erick Thiemke

iam not sure. for a moment i did move the wrong apex/major count on the excel spreadsheet but i thought i caught it and fixed it

Erick Thiemke

not how it works. the dungeon is on the ley line and the entrance would be within a certain range of the dungeon

Erick Thiemke

it would be a courtesy title other mages would bestow. where as a high mage would be the strongest in a certain affinity. High Mage of xxxx. Whereas an archmage is just a powerful mage. So all High Mages would be archmages but not all archmages are High Mages

Lemes

Yes, it makes much more sense that way. I always thought the idea of ​​having to consume hundreds of apex essences to reverse the damage to the ether channels was an exaggeration.

Justin Barnett

How do you earn the title of archmage? If I remember right, master mages have mastered multiple spells, while high mages are overwhelmingly powerful in a single affinity.

Sean Kauffman

I don't understand the "They had a dozen fillets and began cooking one of them, acting as if nothing unusual had occurred." Part. The MC let them catch a dozen fish but didn't leave them the collector to get all of the minor essence?

visigoth

It was stated that while elves do live long, they do not, in fact, live forever. Barely a dozen chaps ago Eryk was internally monologuing about how he's going to outlive her. Like Silver Beard said, since she thinks he has a normal human lifespan of a hundred years compared to her couple thousand, this is likely more of a passionate fling for her before she returns to her fiance. Meanwhile Eryk is actually gonna live orders of magnitude beyond her lifespan bc of Slow Aging or w/e the spellform was

Ken WoTCom

There's a certain mage back in Telha who would be interested in these spell books especially the elemental ones.

Simão Wiborg de Carvalho

So, now that Erik and the manticore can communicate, will he learn where the dungeons core is? Will he take and seed it on another place, (like Castilles basement)?

michele 00

Honestly, after all this effort I hope Erik at least gets a bj from Castile Lol

Dominic French

I'm pretty sure elves don't have to worry about death from old age in this world.

Justin Barnett

My count could be wrong, but I thought they had ten major essences. Eight from hunting manticores outside the dungeon and two more from inside it.

Silver Beard

Rather than read the MC's mindings I'd like to see him discuss is with Raellia. Their future if there is one. He needs to come clean on his affinities/spell forms so she can make an informed choice. She likely thinks its an 'affair', but if she learns he's going to outlive her many times over... will she stay with him or run? It was never brought up but surely Konstantan read his legion file which would have listed his highest affinities as space and time. Space is well known; but Time has been ignored. Maybe the moment is up to reveal it.

Silver Beard

Missed out on the figs for a week or so. Did they ever grow back?

Erick Thiemke

The math made more sense. I might tweak it some when I get to Zyna’s monologue in book 4. I think the MC quest will be him expecting to get major essences and not apex essences from wild manticores

piranha

I love the fact that so many apex magic essences are dropping. I want to see him increase his aether pool significantly so that he can imprint and cast a displacement affinity spell form easily

piranha

So Castile needing only 10-14 apex channeling is now canon? As opposed to 45 or more mentioned somewhere earlier

Andrew

Thank you!

Ivan Kanewske

Maybe the dungeon realized we were here to channel essences and gave them to us in the chest to get us to leave. To Maybe the dungeon realized we were here to gather channeling essences, and gave them to us in the chest to get us to leave.

Ivan Kanewske

“We would you want to talk with a dungeon spawn?” Konstantin barked incredulously. We to why

Aaron edison

I'm honestly expecting a stone giant to be messing with the dungeon core or something

Erick Thiemke

2nd of 4 for cycle. And yes the MC has been consuming essences during his time in the dungeon. I will review those gains in the next chapter


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