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A Soldier's Life - 344 - Gone Manticore Gone (minor edit on 2-13-25)

🕑 Added 2025-02-12 04:27:31 +0000 UTC

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Adam V

They should have said sorry to the dungeon haha

Andrew Crews

The manticore tilted its head, and then it panicked and began to howl[.] [Its] powerful claws scratched at its head, cutting flesh, and it seemed to be in extreme pain. I noticed the large glowstone in the ceiling dim ever so slightly, and I felt a brush of the dungeon’s presence against my mind fortress defenses. We had to cover our ears as the manticore[’]s distress increased. Raelia looked away as bloody shreds of flesh were torn from the mane and face of the manticore as it tried to claw into its own skull. It was a horrific scene, and I almost felt pity for the creature. I started to regret my insistence on talking to the manticore. It only seemed to anger the dungeon, and we didn’t get any real answers. A black[,] wispy smoke spewed from the end and quickly turned in[to] a cone of fast-moving fog as it raced across the chamber. The wave of black, ominous fog quickly dissipated after twenty yards into nothingness. “Well, that was very anti[-]climactic,” I muttered. “I have seen such a spell in the field. She is right[;] normal men[,] and even legionnaires[,] will shit themselves or flee when it washes over them,” Konstantin said in seriousness. I must have [had] 500 pounds of fillets already in my dimensional space, but Konstantin had been hooked on the minor endurance essences that formed from the fish most of the time. “Harpies[’] tits,” Konstantin growled. “That’s not a manticore.” All I could think was we had definitely pissed off the dungeon.

Erick Thiemke

As far as a "contract," it is more of an agreement between the dungeon and intelligent creatures to fight. Otherwise intelligent creatures could give away dungeon secrets or just refuse to fight

Erick Thiemke

having past life memories helps intelligent dungeon creatuers fight

Erick Thiemke

corrected

Bananaboat

Title suggestion: Hoes mad

MacMahon Wenzl

I feel like I've heard that someone before. Maybe it is just similar to another chapter title I've read somewhere?

MacMahon Wenzl

-Chapter Suggestions: "Words to Regret", "Dungeon Woes", "Speak no Evil" followed by the next chapter being "See no Evil" then the next chapter can be "Hear no Evil". "Curiosity [Killing/ Killed] the Cat"? Kind of my favorite actually, since their curiosity to talk to the Manticore (which is part Lion/ "cat"), caused the dungeon to do something to the Manticore

Silver Beard

Dungeon Remorse

Silver Beard

Have you actually tried to read what you wrote?!

Jordan A

It would save them time if they got everything they needed know if gaining more channeling essence remains more likely than not after certain dungeon fights. At there current pace another week or so is Al that’s needed so there’s no point in stopping early.

Silver Beard

It's a little adorable that the Dungeon is so infatuated with Eryk. "Constantly invading his mental fortress"? Not everyone is equipped to rebuff the attention, but nobody else is complaining either. It's time to move on, report to the Adventure Guild, and lock down this asset. Naveik won't like it but an influx of Adventurers can winnow the Manticore population and if the Dungeon is taken care of reguraly, there won't be any new ones to repopulate.

Silver Beard

I think they've collected enough. Returning Castille to fighting shape (while she's still young) is better than getting 100%. They can always make another trip.

John Donovan

Dungeon Discipline

Ivan Kanewske

If Eryk can grab the core, would be a good foundation for his future if he could move it, also be interesting if he finds other dungeons and moves them or even figures out how to combine them

Ivan Kanewske

Title as simple as That's not a manticore

Ivan Kanewske

I knew one person who might now, though—the seer. Now to know I believe This just doesn't read well to me, so an edit of some kind may be needed

Andrew

Thank you!

Ivan Kanewske

The creature continued to wail under Maveith’s hammer came down on its skull a moment later Under to as

RebelRitch

How about Dungeon Displeasure?

Garrett

How about "A talk and torture" as the title

Ken WoTCom

Possible chapter titles -Answers and More Questions. -A Change of Scenery -On The Right Track -Directions from The Lost -The Light Dims

Nick Nicholson

I think it’s time for the MC to get a new piece of gear

Justin Barnett

I don’t remember the doppelgängers mentioning anything about a contract. I thought dungeon’s just recreated things that died in them. Or do they need contracts for sentient beings?

Erick Thiemke

3rd of 4 for cycle. Next chapter to be written is Town Builder, though. Have about 300 words down for it so far


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