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A Soldier's Life - 378 - (taking chapter title suggestions)

🕑 Added 2025-04-16 02:44:01 +0000 UTC

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Peter Cigáň

Title: New people, old secrets.

Erick Thiemke

i prob forget she had the affinity....i will look at when this chapter comes up for an edit.

HappyNoms

As a mild confusion and not a critique. I didn't follow the reasoning for why Eryk wouldn't give Castile the clairvoyance essence, since one of her major abilities is remote viewing, and spellcraft gains from increasing stat points are exponential and not linear. Castile would get greater effects out it than anyone else he could give it to.

Zachary Atwood

Title: "Just Like in Anime"

Sean Hall

"Wanted: Dead or Alive"

Michael S

Title: Set my people free! Lexi asking Eryk

J. L. Mullins

No need to change this as it fits that he might think this, but it still got a laugh out of me: [she was too young to manipulate me] spoken like someone who's never raised kids. 😋

Karkas

Chapter title proposal: Battle forged

Chriron

Chapter title proposal : Super Hero

Steve

Illusion

Skyra

I approached Selene and gave her a choice of the fire or clairvoyant apex essence. Doesn't Eryk's night vison use clairvoyant affinity?

Wiggles1

Might be confusion here. Dutch isn't descended from Old English, Old Dutch is a "2nd cousin" of Old English. Their most recent ancestor is proto west germanic. The Istvaeonic (Dutch ancestor) and Ingvaeonic (English ancestor) are thought to have separated in 1-2 BCE. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/West_Germanic_languages#Family_tree


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