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A Soldier's Life - 388 - Epilogue

🕑 Added 2025-05-07 02:29:49 +0000 UTC

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Adam V

This chapter was excellent, I love how it turned out. Surprising him with a sword while he's naked and without artifacts is top tier. Especially appreciated the foreshadowing in book 4 when Eryk said she'd have to become the Empress to be free

Chris

I hope book 7 rescues this series.

skati5

>”The mage’s identity had been a secret as he was responsible for keeping the Emperor’s physical body young…” This took me aback, as it’s a significant pivot point in the Good Guys/Bad Guys series plots by Eric Ugland (great books), and I don’t remember that the Emperor here had a similar deal?

Gruesome_Garry

I agree that it feels like Erik is being reactive and getting yanked around but events have forced this upon him and I don't feel like he's becoming a failure. Just too much happening foe any one guy to deal with reasonably, plus he's still keeping mostly in line with his morals so that's nice

Karnnie

I agree with your statements and have said as much many times. Eryk lacks motivation, and simply moves from one event to the next with no real reason to do so, only to become way more involved than a random person should be. I do know that the author wants to stay away from a dungeon diving story but the fact that he is no longer worried about becoming more powerful as fast as possible is kind of jarring. As he has been overwhelmed by events over and over again and if I were almost eaten by a Wyvern, I would not stop struggling to get more powerful now that I had the freedom to do so. Maybe if the author explained that the time (slow aging) spell form had the side effect of changing his mindset for the more long lived outlook then it could be explained but right now, he should not be adjusted to thinking in centuries of life.

Zeetes

So I’m just going to dump a lot of feedback I have, and that has probably been seen by everyone in these comments so many times before, right here, since it’s the end of book 6. To be clear, I think the author is doing a great job—that’s why I paid to read this far ahead—but there are some things that have stood out to me as I have read. First and foremost, Eryk feels like he’s being pulled around from one event to another, and there is very little motivation behind a lot of his actions I would also argue that the motivation that is there would usually only lead to much more minor involvement, for example with the kid there’s no guarantee the Death Sentinels would even take her since all we know is that they have necromancers, but so does the empire that doesn’t mean they’ll take a necromancer as strong as her they may only accept up to 40-50 aptitude for example and after that its too dangerous, why didn’t they drop her off with the Matron sure it may not seem as ideal as it did originally but no matter where she goes she’s in danger, and you have a place that is probably one of the handful in the world that’s safe-ish. Next, there’s the opportunity cost of Eryk’s actions. He’s a selfless character who’s always involved with something. Still, it only took him maybe a couple of days max in the orc dungeon to get a serious boost to his stats, especially considering how often he ends up dragged into serious fights; why doesn’t he spend more time looking for a hidden dungeon that he and the team can monopolize, or even if you want to say that’s too uncertain why doesn’t he go to the endless abyss or spend time in the more monster-infested parts of Desia. He’s strong enough that going to these areas isn’t a significant risk anymore. I even feel like you have been picking his spell forms specifically to make him as effective as possible in the abyss with abilities like immunity to poison, Earth Speak, and Darkvision. By exploring these kinds of areas, he would get a lot of essences and have a significantly higher chance of finding an undiscovered dungeon. Now, I want to address my own previous two points somewhat: the way the story, whether or not that’s the author’s intent, feels to me right now is that you don’t want to deviate from the fighter with some magic that’s powerful but not unbeatable style character and the moment that Eryk gets his shaping high enough he will immediately become a very powerful mage, that’s not even considered how high his other affinities and magic stats would get in the process, and it feels to me that you are doing everything in your power to stop the story from becoming that or stretch the time it takes as long as possible before you have to start busting out the dragons for a good fight. For example, it makes sense that Eryk chose to live a super long life for his time spell form. Still, conveniently, he’s now in less of a rush to collect essences. Oh look, there’s always something going on (whether that be otherworlders in need of saving or an orc in need of help), and Eryk is always staying in big cities that have long waits to enter the dungeon. Like again, I’m not saying that’s what’s happening, but that’s the vibe I’m getting, and I think other people may feel the same.

Alias

Great end. Some thoughts on the book and the direction of the series. Eryk seems to have gained confidence in his abilities and has moved on from being a pragmatic survivor to a full fledged hero. (Though a reluctant one at times). However, I think the great grittiness of the world has been preserved. Case in point, all of the otherworlders died except the two children. Love that. It continues to make this fiction unique in an otherwise saturated “transported to another world” genre. Some things I hope to see in the future: Eryk’s power progress has slowed in recent books. Likely this is for plot pacing…and because Eryk has an instant win ability in the form of “Spacing” folks. However, others like Rena also seem to have instant win abilities. Her immolate ability seems like it could instant kill Eryk. (Though I’m sure absent mind control she would not attack Eryk.) Point being, I am hoping the immortal Eryk might begin taking the long view on his life, and focus a bit more on power progression and building up a power base. (Like the tavern). Currently, Eryk seems to be solely reactive. (Saving Carsile with essences) (saving the otherworlders). I realize that the baby is about to be a huge part of the story, and that Eryk can’t go full mage training arc until the next series. But I’m hoping that Eryk might realize that his low-ish Aether Resistance attribute (Less than 20) if I recall, is a HUGE weakness. Taking the long view and planning how to interrupt that threat to his immortal self might be a good way to lay the ground work to transition Eryk from a reactive Solider/Hero to something even more interesting. Just food for thought. Love the series.


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