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World Sphere - 218 - Hints of Trouble

🕑 Added 2025-05-08 04:54:24 +0000 UTC

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Ivan Kanewske

There should maybe be a pov of them meeting the cats, or an addition of a paragraph or 2

Ivan Kanewske

Add and Additionally, specialty crews would trained for the skiffs AND for the dungeon hopper crews.

Joseba LM

No more chapters to read, I finally caught up :( . Nice story, really liking it.

Mugatu9

Finally caught up. Fun story

Erick Thiemke

thank you

Tuqueque

Binged and caught up to here with audible’s release. Amazing story with potential to to have this fully fledged out universe. Enjoying it very much!

Marvin Amann

Read the entire series up to this point in the last two weeks after I finished A soldiers life. Liking it a lot, think the story has massive potential! Favourite was definitely book 3 of the series so far, but all others were also excellent

Erick Thiemke

He is starting an artificer branch at the academy. However, it takes years to develop artificers who can handle skyships. The best enchanters have spells to aid them that take years to evolve and master. Storme cheated. As for mentoring the ghost elves, there is nothing he does besides give them plenty of material to practice. I felt the MC's time was being stretched too thin and he needed to dump the easier stuff

Dennis Crocker

Love these chapters! I was wondering if Storme should somehow bring up mentoring the ghost elves since they are at an apprentice level, or perhaps another mentor. I can’t remember if artificing is taught at his academy. I’m guessing not since he’s adding these apprentice level ghost elves from another city. These were just thoughts in my head. I enjoyed the chapter.

Dennis Crocker

Or every one as two different words

Brianna Stormcloud

Thank you for the chapter! I forgot which book we were up to here, and was confused for a minute as my head was still back at the 1 year Hens Hollow academy 😳🫢🤣

Ivan Kanewske

Everyone had a single runic pattern, mostly a durability rune, but a few had the sharpness or anti-rust rune. Maybe change everyone to every piece, or every tool

Ivan Kanewske

My next stop was Tallot, a dark elf enchanted weapons dealer. I think you maybe need an apostrophe after Elf. This sentence reads weird to me

Erick Thiemke

Because editing chapters with the changes takes me so long, I am alternating weeks between writing book 5 and editing book 2.


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