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A Soldier's Life - 362 - Spreading the Wealth (edited 3-20-25 for clarity +150 words)

🕑 Added 2025-03-20 04:19:40 +0000 UTC

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Adam V

I feel like their cover is blown, the empire knows exactly where they are, yet they are staying in the same place? If the empire is willing to attack them once, a second attack shouldn't be a surprise. Putting Eryk's name on the shop seems risky Edit: I got an excellent deal on the lease if I promised to store all the tools in the basement for when [he]->[his] son came of age.

Aaron Spielman

The Porter’s Secret Stash: Our Prices are Out of this World!

Sean Hall

The shop should definitely be called "Lirkin's Gherkins"

William

From Mateo’s eyes, I could see him warming to the idea. “What is your shop going to be called?” I waved my hand like it didn’t matter. I just wanted to try and profit from all the crap I had collected and clean out my space some. “Eryk’s Curiosities,” he suggested. I shrugged, and he looked hard to be thinking of a name I would like. *** From Mateo’s eyes, I could see him warming to the idea. “What is your shop going to be called?” I waved my hand like it didn’t matter. I just wanted to try and profit from all the crap I had collected and clean out my space some. “Eryk’s Curiosities,” he suggested. I shrugged, and he looked to be thinking hard of a name I would like.

J. L. Mullins

"It’s in Elvish!”. Yes? All the books have been and that hasn't been a problem so far...

Apophixas

Was Eryk just being super humble with the children (what's the point, they're kids, and kids generally have no appreciation for humbleness, particularly the uneducated), or did he somehow forget he really did kill a dragon, and a damn dragon sized wyvern even? Like, if he wants to be humble around other adults, sure why not? But kids, and around his own men? Pointless.

Apophixas

Definitely. The author keeps having Eryk mention that shit to himself on-repeat like every 3 or 4 chapters, but then he inevitably fricken says some stupid shit again. Considering how well he keeps certain other secrets, it's getting really ridiculous. Is he he Eryk, or is he fricken blabbermouth Benito?

Enk

i look forward with some interest as to how he arranges this :P

Erick Thiemke

They need to be grown in the dungeon to be aether saturated

Kel

He is too generous in my opinion, already bit him in the ass with the giants. Honestly, it's the only flaw I really dislike about him. Another thing is that wealth is almost meaningless to him or the reader. He's throwing around thousands of gold when just a year ago that would have been a dream to him.

Enk

eryk needs a garden where he can plant his figs and apples and coffee.

william farmer

I would argue that if you only gave away things that didn’t matter it is taking out the trash, not generosity.

michele 00

Really? In my opinion his generosity is not bad, but sometimes it seems stupid because more than a few times he gave things (like essences ecc) that would have given more help to him than to others lol

PatronTurtle

You're right! Don't know how I forgot that. Thanks

Erick Thiemke

it is a so-so series. kinda of like an outline for a star trek style universe. my only foray into sci-fi genre besides "trapped in VR"

william farmer

Want to say that I think the generosity Eryk is showing is one of the most enjoyable parts of the story.

Reid

Completely agree

Bananaboat

Everyone knows that. That's why legionaires with space affinities are chosen as porters to carry potions with their dimensional space, that way they never lose their effectiveness. (the reason why eryk was assigned to Castille's company in the first book)

Chachi

eryk also needs to stop mentioning that amulet

Chachi

eryks to generous i too agree with konstantin

PatronTurtle

Have any of them figured out that Eryk's storage pauses time? The whiskey-ifier requiring a time-delay means Eryk has to defer it somewhere else no matter what, so this is a good exchange of convenience

Andrew Crews

Key for Edits: • (Grammar/Spelling Fixes) → Standard parentheses • [Clarity & Readability Improvements] → Square brackets • {Stylistic Suggestions} → Curly brackets ⸻ “It is in Elvish!” Ignis lamented. I had painstakingly copied three pages, and while my artistic renderings were passable, my steady hand and sharp memory had made me a (much better→far better) sketch artist than I had expected. She softened, clearly recognizing the effort I had put in. “Well, for these pages, you (an→can) translate for me now.” (He→Her) tone made it clear I didn’t have a choice. For the next two hours, as I translated, she bombarded me with question after question—many of which I couldn’t answer. Frustration crept into her expression as she struggled to grasp the nuances of Elven techniques [lost in translation→that didn’t directly translate]. Ignis sat back, exhaling a long sigh as she flipped through the pages. “Don’t translate them. The masters’ intent might be [lost from Elvish to Telhian→distorted when converted to Telhian].” She pinched the bridge of her nose. “I’m too old for this, but I have to learn Elvish.” I was (a bit shocked→taken aback). That was a commitment I hadn’t expected from her. But if it gave me more time to work without her hovering, I wasn’t about to object. I offered a practical suggestion. “Talk to Ambassador Elaro Morlamin. He can help [find you someone who can teach you→connect you with a teacher], but just—” “I’m not a fool, Eryk,” she cut me off. “If I (told→so much as breathed a word about) this manual, a thousand Elven smiths would come knocking—most of them not too politely.” With my afternoon now free, I turned my focus to leasing a building across the street from Adrian’s Rest. It had once been a furniture crafter’s workshop specializing in chairs. About four months ago, (he→the owner) left his wife for a strange woman, and they disappeared from the city entirely. Desperate for income, his wife was more than willing to strike a deal. She had a young son to support, and I was happy to help. After logging the lease with the city’s bureaucracy, I sent Benito to [find and bring Mateo→track down Mateo and bring him] to my new shop. An hour later, Mateo arrived with three children in tow. He greeted me with a broad smile, while Benito stood beside him, grinning like a man who had just completed an important mission. The three children peeked around the dusty shop, their expressions a mix of awe and confusion. “I wanted to offer you a job—running my shop.” I opened my arms wide. Mateo frowned, spinning in place as he took in the half-finished chairs, scattered tools, and stacks of wood. “You are opening a furniture shop?” he asked, (confused→bewildered). “I have no skill—” “No,” I interrupted. “The widow sold everything of value except for some tools. We will store (it→them) in the (seller→cellar) for her son when he’s old enough to learn his father’s trade. But for now, I plan to use the back workshop for some alchemy experiments.” I smirked. “The display room? That’s just for selling some treasures I’ve picked up on my travels.” “No! You!” the younger girl, Mabel, giggled. “Mateo said you (can→are able to) slay dragons, hunt werewolves, and (rescued→rescue) an entire nation of goliaths! You look… normal.” Mateo looked (a bit sheepish→sheepish). He had (told me at the party→warned me at the party) that he’d talked me up to the kids, but I hadn’t realized it was this extreme. I chuckled. “Well, I’ve never killed a dragon—or even seen one. Mateo and Benito both helped me in the Caliphate with the orcs, so I didn’t do that alone. As for the werewolves… I suppose I can take some credit for that.” Mabel’s expression fell slightly, clearly disappointed that I wasn’t the legend Mateo had made me out to be. I sighed. Time to fix that. I stepped into the air, hovering effortlessly on an invisible aether shield. Their eyes widened in pure wonder. Twirling my hands, I summoned the fire bear cloak, spinning it theatrically before draping it over my shoulders. Then, with a fluid motion, I flipped forward, landing softly on the floor in front of them with a wink. “I do know (some tricks to get me out of tricky situations→a few tricks to escape tricky situations).”

Salvo

Baubles, brews and beyond? Kinda a bed bath & beyond joke. Dungeon treasures are too broad a concept.

NovaZero

store it in the seller for > cellar*

Ivan Kanewske

Thank you, Also obviously Mateo is going to find out, I have been working through your engineer series, 3 for 3 I am enjoying the books Thank you

Ivan Kanewske

I had a revelation scroll applied used on it.” Add and I had a revelation scroll applied AND used on it.”

Ivan Kanewske

He tone said I didn’t have a choice. He to her

Ivan Kanewske

“Well, for these pages, you an translate for me now.” An to can

Andrew

Thank you!

Ivan Kanewske

My study hand, and excellent memory had made me a much better sketch artist than I thought I was. Study to steady

Erick Thiemke

this is going to be a long chapter....this is just the first half


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