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A Soldier's Life - 363 - News From Abroad (Edited 3-22-25 for Clarity +200 words)

🕑 Added 2025-03-21 23:40:38 +0000 UTC

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daniel dantas

Since when has Viridia known that Eryk is from another world? That was never revealed to her.

H

The real power of guns is that you can move from hundreds of skilled soldiers to “as many as you can arm” without much training.

GucciG

I'm not surprised. Modern humans are arrogant and tend to look down on their historical counterparts. Guns are not the end-all and be-all in a world full of magic. I could see firearms filling in a niche... somewhere between a non-mage warrior and a mage, where the firearms themselves are expensive artifacts that can somewhat mimic wands.

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Wonder what’s up with the gunpowder. It’s entirely believable that people who’ve never produced it would have a few accidents recreating it from descriptions they got in textbooks or on YouTube. Even for those who have fiddled with explosives on Earth trying to use new source materials instead of the nice chemically pure compounds you can easily acquire here might well lead to mishaps and of course any attempts to produce at scale are going to produce incident after incident as with that sort of business you either hire experts (industrial experts not just some chemistry teacher) or you learn proper safety procedures at the cost of lives. Or I suppose magic could just screw with gunpowder. Perhaps dense potential energy is similar enough to mana for the two to interact, and potent explosives are prone to detonation by the right currents of waste mana from spells and affixations crossing through them. Or perhaps some previous enemy of the titans used gunpowder so they set up some system to find and detonate it. I hope it’s not one of those lazy “the physics are just different” cop outs so many authors use to delete gunpowder from the equation because they want to keep melee dominant even at the low power levels. If the physics (meaning the interaction of the fundamental forces) were different enough to make gunpowder not work then they are different enough to make the idea of anything like our native biology and environment impossible. Also what absolute idiot sets up a gunpowder mill in a city? I can’t imagine how anyone could read enough to not just remember the formula but to be able to produce it from local materials and also not know that when setting up primitive production of gunpowder explosions are a question of how often not if. They obviously had quite a stockpile too.

Erick Thiemke

no - otherworlders are resources - thinkk like instant modestly powerful mage that needs training

Erick Thiemke

Huh, I would have to read book 5 to remember! I think Blaze figured it out. Otherworldlers - they arrive in groups, and the radiation is dispersed among the arrivals - usually highlighting a strength they already had. The MC came alone and got super dosed.

AK

Thank you and one more - which chapter did Eryk shared his origin with Raelia? Also is everyone aware of Eryk’s deadly dimensional space move then as well, cause Mateo’s kid mentioned it or am I connecting too much? Not sure how important Elaro for the future but he’s likable and knowledgeable - a good friend to have for Eryk. Maybe Elaro’s pov could go into how he came to guessing about Eryk’s origin and maybe had concerns and voiced them to Castle… in chp 265 he goes into his nation’s history and war between human coalition - 100 elven mages vs 1000 human mages and all to have exactly weather affinity..are mages rare? Can otherworlder (s) be part of human coalition and that’s why Elaro was concerned with Eryk. Now otherworlders - specifically human race, seems more op then others no? Are other otherworlders from earth common or rare? Any alive and thriving as individuals or groups? Was the dead emperor the only one who looked at otherworlders as apex essence? Or perhaps short lived because they self destruct due lack of magical knowledge.

Erick Thiemke

I can always edit in a "reveal" in book 5 for Blaze, Mateo and Benito

Erick Thiemke

As for the company....I dont remmeber but they are aware of his high affinities and big space

Erick Thiemke

Elaro figured it out I believe

Erick Thiemke

Raelia's people figured it out in her POVs

AK

Can’t seem to recall where was the knowledge of Eryk been “otherworlder” was shared with others besides Castile and Konstantin, can somebody point me to that chapter please

Jordan A

I think this comment is a little premature as the parts of the story focused on recently haven’t included Castille since she was in a different part of the continent/world. Now that Eryk is back with the whole group, if Castille isn’t included in the plot moving forward then this comment makes more sense to me.

Ivan Kanewske

Love firefly

Erick Thiemke

"me and mine" is from Firefly, corrected

Erick Thiemke

yes like Glasha. it is a made up word that I use. autocorrected

Ivan Kanewske

“Are you also a chronological of dungeons?” Chronologicaler Also chrono is time, Do you mean a dungeon historian?

Ivan Kanewske

“You have done well be me and mine, and this is another secret I was you to hold. It is a dreamscape amulet.” This needs reworked

michele 00

I didn't like this chapter at all, especially the last part, it seems too precipitous and too silly, and yes, the romance in this story sucks lol

Eriach

Probably

Eriach

I'm thinking it'd be like a M.O.A.B lol

Mason

I was more trying to lock you into him finding out about his baby. >;)

NovaZero

Firth is gonna be hunting them down? And then we get to see Firth roflstomped!?

Inner peace

LFG!!

Erick Thiemke

i just kicked the can with the letter. the rest of this book is about the otherworlders

Erick Thiemke

yes - extremely unstable when combined with aether

Garrett

Thank you for the chapter

Justin Barnett

Great chapter. Really enjoyed getting to see Eryk going about his daily life. The ending did feel a bit rushed though. He didn’t have as much of a reaction to hearing about new other worlders as I would’ve expected and his decision to go find them was a little quick.

Justin Barnett

I wonder if gunpowder is more dangerous on Desia because of aether.

Mason

Spicy! He gets to meet his baby and struggle with the elves!

Matthew D

Great story. Can’t wait to see out worlders interact with Eryk.

Chachi

dont want guns being introduced hopefully would kill off the whole blade and sorcery trope

Chachi

need a judge like villain to balance out the wholesomeness imo

Zabuza Momochi

Looking forward to the next chapter

SUlex

Nice! I’m glad we get to see more Castille!

Erick Thiemke

Castile also has not dropped the bomb that Renna is Octavians wife

Erick Thiemke

She was actually going to go with…

PatronTurtle

Eryk is definitely gonna forget to send a letter to Rae that he may be delayed before galavanting off to save these people

IndyBart

Greatly appreciate your dedication in continuing to drive the story. Can’t wait to see what happens next, or comes from having an S tier necromancer under his care. Wonder if she can use the gem he took previously, and if she can grow to help him get back to the lost dungeon.

SUlex

It undermines the effort eryk and the others went through to heal her.

SUlex

It feels a bit railroady with how fast eryk decided to rescue the otherworlders. I guessed he would be a bit more apprehensive. I also feel like Castille has been pushed to irrelevancy. The whole journey was in parts to heal her burned channels and since the return we had like 3 Castille scenes each maybe couple sentences long. She was one of the better characters and deserves more screentime

Stephen Gauthier

Great chapter! So happy to read Castile is no longer burned. The love letter was a great touch as well.

Andrew

Thank you!

Erick Thiemke

this is yesterdays chapter. i spent a lot time yesterday editing book 4 to get that closer to publishing. it looks like I will not be getting Sunday off this week - unless I get another chapter out tonight. starting in an hour.

Erick Thiemke

yes! italics are working now when I cut in paste!!! before they just made the entire doc italics


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