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World Sphere - 212 - Bringing Home the Bacon

🕑 Added 2025-03-24 04:51:01 +0000 UTC

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Dennis Crocker

The issue with Kaira seeding his mind with the naming and ability to overcome Storme’s defenses seems a major issue that he has given little thought to since the first time she overwhelmed him a book or two ago.

Ivan Kanewske

I had talked with Mira before we left to purchase the Spicy Fortune, but instead of crewing just a single ship, Mira to Mia

Ivan Kanewske

You said the ship would have 3 swivel canons, then an additional 2, 1 each for the skiffs, then you totaled that at 7 instead of 5, So add 2 more canons to the ship in your notes Are you adding 2 to each skiff? If so write that more clearly, and 2 to a skiff almost seems overkill when you only have 3 on the big ship. Also skiff size, 2 canons, 1 pilot, 4 gunners, then marines or delvers to drop

Andrew G.

But it wouldn’t make sense for the dwarves to accept the offer so early. Maybe after a year or so of trade and some visits to the islands

Andrew G.

Should probably mention to Sebastian that future ships will be made with dungeon lumber. And wouldn’t it be a good idea for the Dwarves to relocate to Skyholm? MC has all those estates. They only export ships and mundane stone and could use some of the forests on his estates to quickly build their own village. Safer for them, more opportunities for their people, better profit.

Sam Miller

Amazing chapter. Always happy to see a fast World Sphere!

BloodStorm

World Sphere is my new favorite series

Erick Thiemke

okay read/edit done +350 words and lots of mistakes corrected

Daniel Foster

What is this self-control you speak of? Wait till lunch time? 😂


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