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A Soldier's Life - 365 - This Is My Plus One Half

🕑 Added 2025-03-25 17:48:39 +0000 UTC

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daniel dantas

I find Eryk's discomfort with the two women strange. He owes them nothing, and even if they were still hostile towards him, so what? Eryk is currently a monster. At the first sign of trouble, he can put up a shield, summon a weapon, and kill them both in seconds. Why does he act as if he's in an uncomfortable position?

Simon

I have a suggestion: since it's such a big risk to be responsible for Lesna why not have him keep a blood sample so he can hunt her down if he needs to.

R. Maxwell Steele

They showed in an earlier chapter that she could use magic to strengthen her hand and strength enough to punch through a tree. So yeah super powers.

Karnnie

Everyone hates that Lesna is trying to force herself into Eryks group. Next Chapter Author throws Lesna into Eryks group

Kel

I've been training in my local MMA gym for over 2 years, when the coach puts men against women, we are told to not use our full strength so that the women can also learn. It is more effective to divide the sexes because it's too easy for men so they don't learn, and the women have no chance. So this chick who can beat men twice her weight, she better have some superpowers.. As a man, fighting a man twice my weight without a weapon would be insanely hard..

Ivan Kanewske

Cool, made it more complicated in my head

Erick Thiemke

just an FYI - I am basing the magic on "DNA" you can get DNA from dried blood. not sure how long it would degrade but a few months is my guess based on modern forensics

Ivan Kanewske

Cool beans, Thank you for the clarification The bad thing is that you have to be aware of every scrap of blood you lose even more now, in my head at least, a scrap of dry blood is so much easier to get and keep than wet, I thought for some reason there was an Alchemical concoction in the jars keeping the blood fresh

Joey Regan

Chapter 223: “The best way to use this device is to place a piece of cloth inside with dried blood. Wet blood will tarnish the runes and damage them over time.” The blood that the compass is pulling towards is what has to be fresh (I just reread that part :) )

Ivan Kanewske

It took a few minutes before I found a discarded bandage with dried blood. If i remember correctly, the blood needs to be damp, not dried, per what you said in the hounds book, Not dried and then made wet either, I got the impression the wet blood was alive and gave the connection, the dried blood is dead??

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I’d love to say it’s messed up they’re looking to hang this group when it’s so clear they’re unconnected to the gunpowder manufacturers but my government would do the same to mask their incompetence and gain brownie points by feeding the bloodlust of the stupid masses. Then it would all come out a couple decades later, no one responsible would be punished, and the idiot masses would assuage themselves by acting like that was something that only happened in the bad old days. So I guess it’s more just depressing.

Joey Regan

I’m going to have a really good laugh if he ends up Earth Speaking a senators valuables in the edit because of this

Joey Regan

Solid chapter! I really appreciate how Lesna’s character has been built so far

Andrew

Thank you!

Mark P

Would be nice if Eryk took a stroll looking for survivors. Any chance Eryk can get ahold of magic messaging books the hounds used? He could stay in touch with home base and Konstantin.

Chachi

meh unironically could not care for lesna and her character as a whole. And eryks wholesome schtick rubs me the wrong way imo

PatronTurtle

I don't think it's possible this early. We just need to see her interact with others and be useful. Before this chapter, she was on only a threat

Erick Thiemke

I will add that it has been 8 days...most likely, people are dead; if not, others have magic too. Or better yet, I can add that he pulsed earth speak while walking the streets and didn't find anyone alive... I just added that in there because I knew a reader would say, "Eryk should rescue people!!!"

LundeFool

he can save people while the others search for info/the house and it could take a day

LundeFool

I think it's strange that Eryk spends so much time and effort on those from Earth and Lesna, but don't have half a day to save people under the city.

NovaZero

If she fucks around when no one wants to find out I think people will like her a lot less.

Justin Barnett

I don’t mind her mischievous and playful side. Before she just seemed heavily self motivated and pushy. If you use her recent experiences to make her more considerate and loyal, I think I would like her character.

saber

Nice job! I'm looking forward to how they make use of her invisibility and theif skills.

saber

She did help when konstantine was wounded.

SUlex

It will come with time. We saw mostly her mischievous and overconfident side, but once she opens up more and her character gets explored deeper she will be more likeable

Sunto

As one of the more vocal opponents of Lesna, I agree she comes off as way more likeable in this chapter. I guess the problem for me is it just doesn’t make sense to me why Eryk would care about her whatsoever. Or at least any more so compared to others, I mean if she was being imprisoned over that misunderstanding what makes her more worthy than the other two halflings beside her? It just feels to me a little contrived his helping her, and unrealistically motivated.

Theo Tomss

Yeah I don't mind lesna staying with the group but she needs to pull her weight now and help find and protect the ohterworlder with them, if you make her into a character that has a strong sense of debt despite being a trickster and an opportunist then It would make sense for her to stick around and repay erik and maybe gain the friendship of everyone

Alias

Woot woot!

David H

I like her

E Brown

That will be an uphill battle, but I’m curious how you’ll flesh out the character. You haven’t shown any redeeming qualities to her yet.

Jacob Garza

Thank you for the post

Erick Thiemke

already rewritten twice. trying to make the folding in of Lesna palatable to those who dont like her. I think she may, as one reader suggested, be Eryk's eventual teacher in shaping aether


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