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A Soldier's Life - 367 - Chimera (pic attachment) (edited 3-28-25 +150 words)

🕑 Added 2025-03-28 02:45:36 +0000 UTC
A Soldier's Life - 367 - Chimera (pic attachment) (edited 3-28-25 +150 words)

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Because he’s responsible for her actions per the conditions of her release. You don’t have to like a character to enjoy a story they’re in, this is fiction, not real life.

Thaabit Rivertree

Why is Lesna here? I really dislike this character. She forces herself into every situation. The other characters treat her like she's someone they love and they don't even know her. Even Eryk hardly knows her.

William

The surprising backlash caused me to stumble a step back from backlash as the creature resisted being killed. *** The surprising backlash caused me to stumble a step back* as the creature resisted being killed.

Joey Regan

Same here! I’ve enjoyed the Raelia and other POV chapters they add layers to the characters

Daniel McConville

BTW I've been waiting to comment on this but binge reading through I noticed many 'author notes' bold comments where you talked about people being unhappy with Rahlia PoV. (apologies spelling?). Just want to chime in and say I really enjoy books where you see the MC from other peoples perspectives. I *especially* enjoy when they see things about the MC that they themselves do not, or when they make incorrect or correct conclusions but with faulty information. It's really fun to see someone powerful and how the world around them see them vs how they see themselves. TLDR ADHD rambling: I like the PoV's a lot including all of Rahlia's so far.

Erick Thiemke

thank you

Medhanie Kidane

I don't know if I have said this before, but you are one hellable writer Erick. ( read it with a Konstantine voice). 😉

PatronTurtle

I'm so confused about what kinda training Lesna has. Turning on a light source at night seems like a big no no out in the wilds, but she thought it was the best idea. Is she just a city girl who's never been out far?

NovaZero

Or you can say the spell was already formed and the amount to close/cancel/unweave it would have actually dipped into her aether pool? Or Lesna wove it with a stupidly high amount of shaping?

NovaZero

Benito needs a conversation with those lawyers. The one that starts with "shut the fuck up" and ends with "no, you shut your mouth and shut the fuck up".

NovaZero

Or use it on her if she does. He DOES need more spell shaping.

Theo Tomss

Apex aether pool essence incoming ! It would also be fun if each head yielded a different essence !

Joey Regan

The use of the magebane to help finish the fight after emphasizing the magical strength of the chimera was an awesome touch! Great fight!

Joey Regan

This could just be me but in this sequence: “I swung Heartseeker in an arc above me blindly as I rolled away. It was just in time as I felt the ground tremble as the chimera landed.” For increased clarity I would change “it” at the start of the second sentence to “my roll” or “I dodged”. My initial thought/impression reading the sequence was that it was the spear swing that was just in time

Erick Thiemke

As for the steady hand, the ship was very far away…30 miles? Even I tiny movement would be huge change. Here the chimera is 1-2 miles away

Ivan Kanewske

Benito replied to her immediately and if you ever wanted to keep a secret, Benito was the last person you should tell. Feel like this part should be in italics, or something that for sure gives the impression of a mental comment if you ever wanted to keep a secret, Benito was the last person you should tell.

Ivan Kanewske

Lol

Ivan Kanewske

and I heard Blaze’s bow twang, scaring a strangler away from our camp Strangler to straggler

Mark P

Hope lesna's light wasn't also a beacon to those adventurers who lost the trail.

Erick Thiemke

Ehh, I can’t think of everything …guess it’s out of her range…

Erick Thiemke

That was also the first time he experienced it. You might be thinking of the time he tried to put an extra dimensional belt into his space and got knocked out

IndyBart

Sweet, I haven’t read your other stories and I’m sure they are good, but this series is easily one of my favorites. Makes my day when I see new chapters pop up.

Steven Savage

Whatever happens, they gotta make sure Lesna doesn't see the essence extractor thing.

Andrew

Thank you!

Justin Barnett

Is there a reason the backlash didn’t seem to hit Eryk so hard this time? When he tried to use it on traeliorn, it was nearly incapacitating.

Gwalmeich

At this rate, Eric will find the secret dlc super boss.

MagicWafflez

damn, what kind of essence do yall think this will be? that was wild~ maybe it's aether resistance, since he couldn't pull it~ I wonder if the other worlders are okay? they're just out here with a damn chimera? smh.

Stephen Gauthier

Great action chapter!

J. L. Mullins

Fun so far! Also: [The halfling voice sounded from somewhere, “I…I can’t. I put enough aether into it to last an hour.”] If only they had a Mage with them who specialized in disabling ongoing spells. 😋 [My steady hand captured a clear image of the beast. ] What's changed? Before, he had to have a stand to get a good look at even a ship that doesn't move quite as much.

Erick Thiemke

still working on town builder from yesterday but got this draft done in four hours. as i get close to releasing book 4, i have a ton of editing to do and approve over the next two weeks but i will keep up with writing chapters


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