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A Soldier's Life - 376 - Unearthed Secrets

🕑 Added 2025-04-13 23:14:39 +0000 UTC

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Adam V

Edit: “The Shiunyuet revere all women with [all]->[any] magic.” I nodded in understanding. “We [killed]->[encountered] a necromancer—an orc boy in the Caliphate. I couldn’t raise my sword to do the deed. The four Earthers slept close to each +[other].

Erick Thiemke

Book 6 has a lot of edits coming. The orc boy necro was just edited last week

Chris

Needs edit that he didn’t kill the orc necromancer.

Jaimenz

They weren't scyring him. The were scoring the area and found a blindspot. Then they started to investigate it.

Karnnie

So Please forgive my ignorance but can you possibly explain why Eryk would have someone trying to scry his location? If it is due to the girls and/or the necromancer, wouldnt they be trying to scry them instead? No one knows Eryk from any random adventurer. If it is someone from the Empire (which I suspect it is), no one knows he is alive, why would they be scrying him in the first place? Are you trying to force storyline or is there actual, logical reasoning for the scrying?

fulli Jelly

When I say "being pushed by," I mean people concealing things from the MC, forcing him to deal with the consequences of their actions. I’m fine with him helping, but he should display genuine anger. He showed some anger with the orcs, but it was only mild vocal frustration. I want those who hide things to face real consequences, rather than the MC simply accepting and resolving their issues without complaint. While the MC also keeps secrets, he at least takes responsibility for handling his own problems when they arise.

fulli Jelly

Not a fan of the MC behavior in this arc and the orc one ngl. I dislike how the MC is too kind and too passive. People around him keep hiding things and pushing him around. One could say it was the case when he was a legionnaire. The difference was that it made sense because he didn't have the power to do different. But here ? He's being pushed around by people he shouldn't be pushed by. Not a fan. It doesn't make these arcs bad either, I still enjoy the book but this is still something I dislike.

Erick Thiemke

that is how people felt about the Caliphate plot line too. hope that one improves with the edit of book 5. hopefully the otherworlders get more likeable in their POV chapter that is only half written. I have been picking at it but not finished

Maxamud Ciise

Not really enjoying this otherworlder plotline, it feels like the people we care to follow are just being dragged around. just my opinion tho

Erick Thiemke

we will see if that sticks in the rewrite. you all voted for the POV of Evie so that is why this plot circles around her. i have not defined necromancy too much before this but book 5 has two encounters with necromancers that I can add some background to

Jacob Friebis

I get that Eryk is fond of these girls for some reason but he literally killed a young orc for accidently reanimating his parents but when evie is doing it intentionally all is good?

IndyBart

Why hasn’t Eryk dropped the table yet one night just to test the girls? She probably had an equally awesome adjacent affinity but just doesn’t have a spell form. She needs to be led in that direction…

NovaZero

Yeah I was thinking Karina was speaking in English so huh

Salvo

So Karina Latin is that good to converse with Eryk and Castile can listen in? You should give Castile the language translator necklace at least: she had the money to buy one and the need with elven teachers.

NovaZero

Like Eryk.

MagicWafflez

I'm annoyed. evie isn't "accidentally" making undead. she's doing it consciously and *that's* a problem. it makes her selfish and uncontrollable. we don't have enough character development on her to make me *not* intensely angry at her for causing all of this. Why can't they put orc tattoos on her? Also, I'm about tired of the otherworlders. I thought I'd enjoy this arc more... like maybe it'd be cathartic for eric to give them the opportunities that he didn't get, but like... they're combative and secretive and causing problems


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