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A Soldier's Life - 389 - Prologue

🕑 Added 2025-05-12 02:30:03 +0000 UTC

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Adam V

Edits: “I think you can +[thank] Delsanra for that. She must have layered a dozen spells on you.” “A message came through the guild for you. I thought I would expedite it,” [his]->[her] brother said steely. Castile is bringing one of them to Gramney to be trained, and I am bringing the other one, +[to] Nausis, to be trained. It is the only place where she will be safe. the consensus is he returned from the Isle of the Dead to try [an]->[to/and] save the Empire from itself and choose Antonia.

Aspiring Sage

A couple questions. In this chapter, it says the capital of Gesedmuria is Felington, but on the latest map in your repository, it shows Hai as the capital. Any clarification on that? Also, which country are the olive orchards in? Do we, the readers, know?

Mark Corwin

4th chapter " i think you can Delsanra for that" its missing the "thank"

tim Tuite

I really like the set up so far and am excited for the whole meeting and dealing with Raelia’s family arc. I was hoping to get to see her family learning he was an otherworlder though.

Erick Thiemke

they dont. 371 was a major edit so i posted it at the end of book 6 so readers didnt miss it. the chapter before is 388

KipBR

Why do the chapter numbers jump from 371 to 389? Am I missing something?

Erick Thiemke

can you be specific in what rash remarks

Enk

So, is Bartiradia going to survive Raelia's rash remarks? I don't THINK so!

Erick Thiemke

it does get hard to give everyone screen time. i regretted having Selene, Helena and Sylph join them

Daniel McConville

I am actually quite excited by this prologue. I know I have had several criticisms of the last arc in the previous book. I am very interested to see Eryk perhaps learn some new skills and get some more lore outside of the Empire. I like Castile turning into her own version of Aontonia the spymaster/merchant lady if thats where that is going. I do prefer the story when only four or five people are on screen tops. Once we have ten to fifteen not so much. Like others have mentioned we now have several children thrown in to the mix and writing children well that are not frustrating or selfish/annoying/whiny seems very difficult. Kind of turns books into escort quests from an mmo and most people hate them. I am hoping that both Lexi and Evie grow up fast, if not in age, but through the situation. They don't really need horrific things to keep happening to them, but there is a good reason why people where considered adults much younger centuries ago, the world needed us all to grow up and contribute and look after ourselves much faster than in modern times. I am curious to see how each adjusts, one surrounded by healing people and one by death. Thanks as always for your wonderful writing and hope the migraines are staying away.


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