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A Soldier's Life - 390 - A Journey Of A Thousand Miles Begins With A Single Step (5-14-25 minor edits to Evie's affinities)

🕑 Added 2025-05-14 04:04:46 +0000 UTC

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Aspiring Sage

Chris, I genuinely don't understand this hateful rant. What leader? He has ZERO formal role or position or responsibility. It is all self imposed, so it's his call what to do with his life. He finally has freedom to choose what to do, and minimal fear as he is out of Telha and the Emperor's grasp. Why shouldn't he go traveling to a new place to protect an innocent young Earth girl from the massive dangers she faces. What other path do YOU think he should be taking that makes more sense within his knowledge base. If he was shown to be more self centered or lusty, maybe he would prioritize getting to his lover to get more sex. But that not him. If he was more vengeful, maybe go to Telha to kill some remaining first citizens, but he is not. If he was more cowardly, maybe go to Gramney, to settle down as a shop owner or researcher. If he was more power hungry, maybe he'd want to carve up his own kingdom. But he is none of those things. He is adventurous. He is protective. He feels responsibility and duty. And he is acting on all those traits that he has shown in the past 6 books. So I just don't understand your critique whatsoever.

Aspiring Sage

Just a minor correction. She has 9 affinities showing above 10, one common, 3 uncommon, and 5 rare. With two imprinted, she should have 7 to go, not 6. Also, when did Eryk find the spell form for essence feast? It seems like it's different than the one he imprinted at the graining camp. And do we know the minimum requirement for it?

Chris

Can you add an artifact that lowers the MC's int by like 98% so we can understand his decisions? In the completionist they had the hidden debuff thing so maybe that would work. Do you know who goes on long journeys for very little reward...apprentices, not the leader. This journey if longer than 3 chapters is stupid as f. The MC literally has more important s to do. Like God this is like reading the thoughts and decison making of a 5 yo and inconsistent at that even. "what you've just said is one of the most insanely idiotic things I have ever heard. At no point in your rambling, incoherent response were you even close to anything that could be considered a rational thought. Everyone in this room is now dumber for having listened to it." Is the only thing I feel justifies this arc...in chapter 1. Literally no leader would make this mistake and in fact his presence would lead to adverse attention on the girl is leading to adverse outcomes. He knows he is being watched and he's like 'I know let's draw attention to this girl that nobody was curious about before'.

Gruesome_Garry

I appreciate that it kinda feels like he might be training her into a mini Erik (the world isn't ready for that much Marko lol) It would be interesting if she ended being close to an actual adoption for him.

Lindasm

The sentence is too long. I could hear Lesna and Evie talking through the wall on one side and Benito and Blaze arguing on the other side about who got which room. Recommend I could hear Lesna and Evie talking through the wall on one side. Benito and Blaze were arguing on the other side about who got which room.

Karnnie

Blaze did not give the money to Eryk for selling the horses.

Erick Thiemke

when I get to book 6 rewrite, Lesna is going to come off as mischievous/good-natured. I will probably add 2-3 encounters in Godok with her and the MC. Basically she will be a kinder from DL

MacMahon Wenzl

Lesna being an escape goat for some of Evies actions seems like legit way of moving forward, hopefuly people just see the first few chapters as establishing a character instead of thinking "this is annoying". Lesna had always added friction when she was with the group. Having her influence Evie into making mistakes makes a lot of sense.

Erick Thiemke

Okay I will confirm and then edit Evies affinity to 41

Justin Barnett

I’m pretty sure Zyna told Eryk that a convergence affinity of 40 is needed to imprint a spell form that maximizes essence.


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