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A Soldier's Life - 393 - The Shadow Belt

🕑 Added 2025-05-19 04:24:33 +0000 UTC

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Lindasm

You are definitely more than you appear. Warrior, father, mage.” Warrior, father, mage….isn’t a complete sentence. This might be one of the uses for a dash. I like the wording, so I don’t think you should change it. You are definitely more than you appear—warrior, father, mage.

Lindasm

He stood next to me uninvited, his black cloak pulled tight, and his stubble with a few gray whiskers. I recommend breaking this into two sentences. He stood next to me uninvited. His black cloak was pulled tight, and his stubble was sprinkled with a few gray whiskers.

Erick Thiemke

sorry!

visigoth

I think you accidentally uploaded chapter 394 here as the contents instead of 393+edits

Efe Philip

Thanks for the story I really enjoyed it

M.A.C.

Try reading Reverend insanity, it might give you a little more wisdom.

Shane clark

I stayed up for the chapter drop hoping to see the collector used… learned my lesson. Go thing i was off today 😊

Erick Thiemke

i dont know. you tell me

Erick Thiemke

nope

Kingtie

It's the guy!

NovaZero

Yes, we need to remember Mateo is at Gramney

NightRider

What did Benito give Evie for a birthday present?

piranha

I really don’t want to see any more deaths of Eryk’s friends. The only thing that should happen to them is dying of old age

Otto Kovar

Don't know why but I kinda liked Kyrenic. It was brief but he seemed observant, intelligent and not arrogantly confident.

Tharineish Jeyaraj

Loving the book series so far has been an enjoyable read.

Eriach

You're quick with it lol

Ivan Kanewske

Lol

Ivan Kanewske

saw a curious merefolk pop his head above the waves on port, only to disappear shortly after. Merefolk to merfolk?

Andrew

Thank you!

Chachi

either a powerful mage ot mergolk are at work causing the storm hopefully eryk gets to duel kyrenic

William

Two hours later, I cursed, “Pluto’s ghost! Where is Lesna?” Mateo* and Blaze looked at each other, then back at me, apologetically. “If she isn’t back on the ship when we sail, she can stay here,” I said, acting angry. Evie looked panicked as Lesna had been a good friend to her. She was desperately scanning the docks and the streets she could see. ... Two hours later, I cursed, “Pluto’s ghost! Where is Lesna?” *Benito* and Blaze looked at each other, then back at me, apologetically. “If she isn’t back on the ship when we sail, she can stay here,” I said, acting angry. Evie looked panicked as Lesna had been a good friend to her. She was desperately scanning the docks and the streets she could see.

Erick Thiemke

if I tricked you into thinking the MC was getting a cool new artifact with the chapter title - mission accomplished, muhaahahaah


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