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A Soldier's Life - 422 - Surprise, It’s Not A Drill

🕑 Added 2025-07-14 02:57:00 +0000 UTC

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Erick Thiemke

you talking back in the intro? trauma is hard for me to write but I assumed with her friend and surrogate protectors she managed to wiggle through and I tried to build up the Eryk father figure before she was handed off to his care. I think more trauma when the women died maybe but she has also discovered her death affinity by then

Bumblebeepotato

Why was Evie parents moment basically glossed over? Shouldve been way more emotional and drawn out. I was expecting a way more serious moment for a 11 year old kid alone in another world. I think that part should be looked at again.

Lindasm

My guess would have been that the dungeon was purging, but because the entrance was under water, the denizens would drown. They could only escape alive if the purge occurred at low tide.


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