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A Soldier's Life - 411 - 'When The Dead Rise, The Living Stand Together'

🕑 Added 2025-06-21 01:42:02 +0000 UTC

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Jordan A

“That too. But you don’t abandon a brother in need.” Blaze finished his rant. I wanted to get choked up, but that is what I planned to do to Evie—abandon her once she was settled in. Her wide eyes looked watery, and she was going to cry. The wording of the emotions in this paragraph is a little confusing.

Jordan A

“I tasted some of Orrik’s wash and was disappointed since it had a vanilla-citrus flavor.” wash -> mouthwash

hasrul naim

And a hard kick to the nuts

Kevin

As someone who only tolerates mint in toothpaste, and who was once a loyal buyer of Listerine Orange Citrus before it was discontinued, I say change the flavor of the Dwarf Mouthwash. Vanilla grapefruit is suitably awful, as those taste like Lemon's unstable cousin.

Brian T

Eryk can be such an asshole. He is in dire need of empathy essences.

Erick Thiemke

that was a tool of the conversation - but it is creeping into his mentality. hopefully i wrote it that relationship was growing stronger

Erick Thiemke

yeah i think he went into it thinking they were escorting them for safety reasons. he didnt expect them to use a few years of their life staying with them

Erick Thiemke

corrected

Erick Thiemke

dead end....must have been mispelled and auto corrected

Erick Thiemke

My thought is yes, but it just take more aether

Dylan Alexander

That’s what he said before. Two of three years and then he’ll leave. And with his son, he definitely needs to leave to see him or risk losing him and Raelia.

Justin Barnett

Would Eryks purify self work on necromantic infestation, or does it just work on physical substances?

Joshua Mclemore

Eric shouldn’t be surprised by his friends loyalty to stick with him at this point. I love the whole “blaze snapping at him “ but I want it to start off with Eric seeing the disagreement coming followed by a heated discussion which makes blaze break character and flip out on Eric. Blaze is his best friend and I would love to see a stronger bond grow with Eric attempting to actually count on him for the big stuff.

Ivan Kanewske

He gave me a nod and seemed to be dismissing, eager to get back to the book he had been reading. Add me add he appeared He gave me a nod and seemed to be dismissing ME, HE APPEARED eager to get back to the book he had been reading.

Ivan Kanewske

The Death Hunters’ recruitment office loomed at the far end of a darned street, half-swallowed by shadows. Did you mean to use darned? Or something else

NovaZero

“Two more than, > then, as than is a comparative

Jake

That game was insane. Worth it

Shane clark

I think Eric needs to stop being surprised that the people who respect him want to follow him. He should just accept it now that they’re not going anywhere until he’s ready. It seems that every time a situation comes up he surprised that they’re following him. I don’t think he’s that dense.

Andrew

Thank you!

piranha

It would be way too cruel for him to abandon Evie just after coming there. I figure Eryk stays on for a couple of years and learns a displacement spellform so he can reassure Evie that he will be able to drop in on her when he does eventually leave

PatronTurtle

Did he not think about anyone besides himself and E? He's also getting way too attached, calling her stepdaughter

Erick Thiemke

yesterday's chapter. Working on todays now. Sorry I ended up watch the NBA Pacers-OKC game last night and didnt write much. I did edit three chapters between yesterday and toady for book 5 including the Orc boy necromancer one. And yes I have a World Sphere chapter in the works


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