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A Soldier's Life - 444 -

🕑 Added 2025-08-25 21:56:13 +0000 UTC

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Shane clark

I had a thought this morning. If we have a demon taking control of a continent by possessing their leaders, and they want to free the undead from the island to help them conquer the world, maybe a message to the Titans would be a good idea. Because the Titans would surely not want a demon to conquer anything!

Erick Thiemke

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Erick Thiemke

it was more square and grammarly told me squarer is better but I can change it back

Erick Thiemke

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Erick Thiemke

looking at it now. one of the notes I have is that Blaze needs to get a new bow at Sanctuary so I shoved it in this chapter

Erick Thiemke

he had the run of Sanctuary for a while and didnt steal anything yet....maybe a back edit

Andrew G.

Feels like a good opportunity for Eryk to add lots of supplies and whatnot to his storage space for future use.

Erick Thiemke

i would have noted it if he did

Erick Thiemke

Valar Morghulis

SENLI

Eryk should add many crossbows in loaded state to his space then he could swap them in/out and fire several quickly, he doesnt have/use ranged weapons much after the hound period, I find that odd as some of the battles he has been in could have benefited from it

Jim D

They would’ve used a lighter crossbow historically which he does call them as medium but yea may still be too much for a child, maybe mention a lever system to deal with the draw weight. But in general bows were superior to crossbows, especially the longbow. England required long-bowmen to stay trained and ready for war specifically for this reason, it countered the increased training and gave them the benefit of range and rate of fire in battle (think 100 years war and all the times the longbow shredded French troops before their crossbows were even in range). But I would dispute the accuracy, a well trained bowman was just as accurate as a crossbow man and typically if someone was using a crossbow they were not “well trained” more likely levees called up and trained quickly for a campaign so they would not have necessarily been accurate, volley fire was the norm for this reason

Jim D

Should be wearing the sentinel armor he got when he picked the runic sword (that detects undead) but I don’t think it mentioned much about its quality, would be cool to see a runic chest plate or bracers or something

Enk

Eryk's musings about the bow's traits are strangely identical to Blaze's words - it reads weird.

Karnnie

Instead, you can steady whatever you wish…” I said, indicating the shelves. Instead, you can study whatever you wish…” I said, indicating the shelves. Paragraph 60, Sentence 3.

Karnnie

“You are going to be inscribed to night,” “You are going to be inscribed tonight,” Paragraph 32, Sentence 2.

Karnnie

This room was squarer than the crossbow room, with seven rows of shelves dividing the room. This room was more square than the crossbow room, with seven rows of shelves dividing the room. Paragraph 5. Sentence 3.

Marvin Amann

Why did Eryk never get a high quality armour? His weapons are constantly mentioned, but seems like he is just wearing basic leather armour at the moment when the sentinels have the highest quality armour in massive surplus. Or what is he currently wearing? Couldn't find it anywhere

Bob Hiler

I kept on hoping that Eryk would go to sea with an illusionist and take out a huge section of the hulls of a few boats, to sink them and drown hundreds of troops to even the odds!

Chris

Not when he just got a new bow!

Otto Kovar

Well the paragraph about crossbows was dumb. Crossbows were used alongside bows over centuries. Yes they are more expensive to produce and take longer to load, but they are more accurate, because you can actually aim. But yes lesser trained marksmen used them, mainly because in war to be effective with a bow a draw weight of 100lbs is like the starting line, and thats a lot of training, putting great stress on the back elbows shoulders etc. with plenty of risk for injuries. Furthermore crossbows are heavy weapons, combined with risk of unintentional friendly fire and uintentional discharges noone would put them to use through children.

Ivan Kanewske

“I am done,” Lepidus announced, pouring *A* potion into the scalp and folding it back up. Add a

Ivan Kanewske

“Do you know what is going to happen?” he asked after bathing in the ecstasy of the essence. “Likely in the next day,” I said in a whisper. What? Or when it is going to happen?

Ivan Kanewske

“Bring Evie to the Lepidus at sunset.” Remove the

Joshua Mclemore

Blaze better not die…

Victory Holcomb

Anyone else think Eryk pillaged more from the storerooms than was asked for? 😀

Stephen Gauthier

Why do I get the feeling Blaze dies saving Eryk and Evie…

NovaZero

You know, I wonder if Evie will be making Revenants to fight back against them or something.

NovaZero

You can carry her to her bed. She should rest for a day as she will have a headache. > Should be in ""

Erick Thiemke

yep...it is foreshadowing. she read the book on the First Legion and how they opened a world gate back to Earth

Brett Ulakovic

you can steady whatever you wish…” Is that suppose to be study?

Lindasm

Blaze agreed to watch Evie the next day, but my contribution was too valuable not to contribute. Perhaps this would flow better. Blaze agreed to watch Evie the next day, but my contribution was too valuable to be unused.

Erick Thiemke

fixing. I prob hit ctl c instead of control x when I moved it

shabbybook

Enough to arm a army of 60k thats not good

Lindasm

Put what you got in the drying shack,” Jalorien yelled when he saw me walking across the plateau. This exact sentence is duplicated in the next paragraph.

Erick Thiemke

long chapter....trying to hit all my notes for stuff, so might need better transitions. they also changed the creater interface again. took me a few minutes to figure it out. onto the big battle chapters....


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