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A Soldier's Life - 435 - The Soulless (edit 8-10-25 +220 words)

🕑 Added 2025-08-08 22:32:56 +0000 UTC

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Aspiring Sage

Seems like the Sentinels are being played. I also don't feel the urgency to find out about the dungeon. I think the thinking there needs to be explored more so the reader can follow along with the Sentinel leader's thinking about this.

christopher fryhover

Pretty sure you need a head too. I feel like early in the story he put someone’s head in his storage and couldn’t use the collector until he pulled the head out and put it roughly where it was supposed to be. I could be misremembering that though.

Justin Barnett

I realize this is a bit brutal, but Eryk could simply move the parts of their body that contain their aether core into his space. If he does it right, no would notice anything and then he could just take those parts out later to use the collector on.

Erick Thiemke

good guesses. some are right

Jeffrey Worrall

Just thinking out loud but it seems to me the target of the greater undead might be the ship more so than killing the Death Watch. They somehow set off the Demon Dungeon to weaken the Death Watch and to convince them to sail to the island where they could weaken them further and steal their ship to sail to the continent while the watch is both weakened and without means to immediately pursue them. Might be fun to watch Erick try to hunt down a Vampire Lord in the middle of a war with the Lizard People. Hopefully he is able to bring Evie with him. I think an agreement that she could go with him as long as she promises to come back at either 16 or 18 to complete her training(maybe send some people along to protect her and make sure she doesn’t go bad).


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