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World Sphere - 75 - Fries, Milkshakes and Politics

🕑 Added 2025-08-16 02:18:08 +0000 UTC

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Adam V

The Tessa (sky)ship is afloat! Edits: “I wanted to finish connecting the water and -[the] enchant you[r] cooler and stove,” Loriel cautiously put down [here]-->[her] milkshake, unaware of her milk mustache. Selfishly, I wanted to do what +[I] could to protect my family.

Ivan Kanewske

I smiled inside because I knew what was going to happen after I said my next. Add few words I smiled inside because I knew what was going to happen after I said my next FEW WORDS.

Ivan Kanewske

She closed the door behind, and a missile was launched from the other end when she stepped into the hall. Add herself She closed the door behind HERSELF, and a missile was launched from the other end when she stepped into the hall.

Battleborn

Correction, "Aelyn forgot what..." Change to, "Aelyn, forget what..."

Battleborn

Possible correction, "The cook must have worked hard to get them done in so short a time as my conversation with the manager." I think you are trying to say the convo with the manager, "was short too." But needs some kind of tweak.


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