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A Soldier's Life - 441 - The Emperor's Return Policy (edited 8-21-25 +100 words and cleaned up a little)

🕑 Added 2025-08-20 02:30:06 +0000 UTC

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Austin Byrd

"i didn't feel any remorse for the elf's death" after being the direct cause of it... And then shifting the blame to the leader of the failed expedition is just really really bad.. I try to give Eric the benefit of the doubt because he's the MC but this just makes me despise him. I believe Eric himself has even judged other people that he's witnessed who have caused similar deaths indirectly over the course of his time on Desia. And Eric also has blamed others before while he is leading the group, for incompetence and laying blame on them for how a situation turned out. This might be the worst hypocrise i've seen from the MC yet. Also I really don't think reading about an MC who has the sheer gaul to act this way is sustainable. My patience is fraying. Why can't he feel bad? He indirectly caused a death at least partly due to his reckless, greedy nature? Why even have that sentence in there at all? If you aren't going to point out that he has some degree of conscience then why not just gloss over it? Seeing as you refuse to let him have character growth? Is it supposed to tie into his white knight for female syndrome because the elf was a guy?

Aspiring Sage

Great revelatory chapter, but the fight scene was a bit short. I guess it makes sense, since the Lich is just THAT powerful. I do hope Eryk has enough time to collect the lizardman mages essence and the one from the soulless. Maybe not the dead Dwarf though.

Erick Thiemke

Lepidue blames Eryk for the failure of the insurrection of the Telhian Emperor. The Empire is crumbling. Eryk is not directly responsible, but he was an agent of change. Eryk doesnt trust Lepidus becasue he is antagonistic and he just tried to use Eryk to kill the Lich Emperor

John

Is there a reason that lepidus and Eryk hate each other so much? I feel like the hatred is too artificial 🤷‍♂️

Jim D

Zynae switches back to she with her body, kid etc. in the paragraph after your edit. Then when the elf gets speared “lurked” think you meant lurched? Great chapter 👍


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