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A Soldier's Life - 450 - Desperate Times Call For Desperate Action (edited 9-7-25 +200 words, mostly cleaned up the action)

🕑 Added 2025-09-05 01:37:44 +0000 UTC

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FastFoodNation

Well, this is one hell of a stupid chapter. So they had no failsafe in case the knowledge fell into the hands of an enemy? At least make our main character useful by stashing the knowledge in his space. Yep, sometimes to drive the plot forward, intelligence of has to sacrificed I guess.

Adam V

Edit: “Yes,” the young dwarf relpied. relpied --> replied My hope of an easy victory was dashed as the Nashasari mages and the brood mother emerged with them from below decks… decks --> deck

Aspiring Sage

Seems like the Nashasari are staying true to form by backstabbing their latest allies. I am still confused why Eryk just doesn't take random stuff as he passes them. I think most readers would be confused too. So some form of quick explanation, like he doesn't want to use aether, it would be too obvious to the Sentinels since all know of his space by now, or even he felt moral compunction not to steal in the middle of a battle... any form of a one line explanation will benefit your readers.

John

One power you can give the sentinels is the ability to disrupt the nether energy of the undead, possibly making an undead collapse, or taking control of the body of weaker undead, or letting a sentinel to take on the abilities of an undead when in battle


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