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A Soldier's Life - 474 - Good Things Come in Small Packages (edit 10-26-25 +150 words)

🕑 Added 2025-10-24 00:28:11 +0000 UTC

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Adam V

Edit: Maveith said, patting me on the back and making [a]-->[me] cough when I swallowed wrong. When it came into view, I reconsidered seeing the danger of the creature occupying the town. “I don’t think anyone is left alive,” I said with anger. (word choice, "anger" is vague and doesn't fit the mc being analytical at that moment) I said [with anger] --> grimly, bitterly, darkly, with regret, resentfully, with dawning realization

DB Laing

The line < I gave them instuctions on harversting. The crimson flowers stained you hands red rubbing off easily. I wore my spider silk gloves but evie was not kyrenic assured her the stain would fade in time> needs to be improved . How about < I gave them instructions on harvesting,the crimson flowers quickly stained their hands red . Evie needed Kyrenic assurance that the stain would fade in time and she asked about getting spider silk glove like mine to protect her hands .

Erick Thiemke

a lot....30 miles for ships when he was a sentry

1536539

In order for Erik to fully utilize his teleportation spell he needs a good clairvoyance spell, I believe he can also use the spyglass to teleport safely to further locations, can you remind us how strong the magnification of the spyglass is?


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