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A Soldier's Life - 478 - Occupied Varvao (edited 11-3-25 +100 words)

🕑 Added 2025-11-03 03:57:37 +0000 UTC

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daniel dantas

I feel uncomfortable with Alhar's opinions. I believe he is right, and in a way, it is to be expected that the son-in-law should strive to win the approval of his in-laws, but I don't like that the protagonist has to change who he is because of two strangers. I like him the way he is, I like that he behaves like a soldier, that he is an extremely charitable leader (he could be a little less so, especially when it comes to sharing essences with some members who do nothing in certain battles, but I understand his logic), that he keeps his friends close and travels like an adventurer. Making him change to behave like a king is... frankly, annoying. I don't know, I think I'm being arrogant because I know he's the protagonist and his potential is so high that, in the future, only titans and dragons will be at his level. It bothers me that he's stuck to norms that won't make sense in the future (Cronos was an idiot, but I liked how straightforward he was, without many pretensions).

Erick Thiemke

a lot of people mentioned the accent thing. I am going to look at in a bit as I do a read/edit on the chapter. the point was to show there were orcs who hate Telhians...

C Morillo

I’m confused on the opening dialog from the orcs. Are they speaking elvish, telhian, other?? If they are speaking orcish, then the follow up comment doesn’t fit: “He is Telhian. I can tell by his accent.” She probably thought none of us spoke Orcish.


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