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A Soldier's Life - 479 - Return to the Telhian Empire (edit 11-5-25 +300 words)

🕑 Added 2025-11-04 06:30:14 +0000 UTC

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Cody Resnik

Loving this book so far. Honestly the wait for Eryk to see Raelia and his son is making me so antsy lol. EDIT forgot he will see Renna soon so that will help tie it over. That's going to be interesting

Erick Thiemke

yes, please. sometimes I dont get to edits until I am in the editing phase of the book. but i frequently do read/edits of the last chapter

C Morillo

Are we still helping to catch minor typos? If so, at or near paragraph 23 Evie’s dialogue is missing the beginning quotation mark: Twenty feet and still maintaining… In paragraph 28, “how am I supposed to help you fight?” “Your not….” Should be “You’re not.” Tyftc!


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