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REGAL BLOOD: Vestige Three

🕑 Added 2021-06-04 18:25:57 +0000 UTC
REGAL BLOOD: Vestige Three

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Pedro

This was a good read but feels like a little taste ^^ (as you were a bit concerned, your English overall was good with proper words for the era of the story - that made it more immersive) ✌️ Would only mention 2 things: As Void said, there's still some double spaces in the text but it's quite minor (for me personally) Also minor, I'd always tag who is speaking between dialogues (happened in Vestige Three - just to be a bit easier and friendly for the reader). It's fine if you follow along properly. The story was interesting, I found Rhella quite interesting and a intriguing character (specially her dialogue with the King hehe). Would be cool to read more and the follow ups of the 'previews' you have here, also we need to know more about the White Queen ^^ I liked this Nix, very cool to find out you have done this. I find this stuff fascinating :] p.s. The scene between Vesra and the Red Queen was portrayed nicely in your drawing :)

Eugene Sladkov

Dream: this art with only left 😍

NIXEU

Thank you very much :)

Christian

The scenery is not in my top pictures of you. I'm not a specialist, but it does seem to me that you have improved a lot in a very short time. The faces are almost photorealistic. The jewelry is also worked out better than usual, which was very good for me before. It is really nice to see your work and I am happy to be able to support you. Please keep it up!

Stoia

Side note: Regal is German for Shelf. Which confuses me a little every time before my brain snaps back to English and everything is dandy :D


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