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EC Book 4, Chapter 34 - Ichoric Ascent

🕑 Added 2024-04-15 16:09:35 +0000 UTC

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Silver Linings

Thanks!

Douglas Miller

I'm very interested to see how all of this ultimately comes together. Great job so far! A couple small grammar corrections: > as he emerged This should be "as it emerged", because the only reference for the pronoun that makes sense in context is that it refers to the rock. > drawing on the gods and to try The "and" shouldn't be there.


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