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DRR Book 3, Chapter 50 — Elsewhere, Elsewhen

🕑 Added 2024-12-14 15:34:30 +0000 UTC

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Zerum Sparklez

Oof, corrupted Kauku? This should be…interesting. Also, BEST BOY GHERAA IS BACK! LETS GOOOOOO!

Clara

I thought that was him starting to like realise things aren't right and subconsciously remembering that he's in a dungeon, before he gets memory wiped. It's possible that the memory wipe actually came from the dungeon and not Kauku

Silver Linings

That's an error of phrasing on my part! Great catch, thank you. Getting that fixed!

Hayden Hodge

Interesting POV in the front part, the only thing that caught my attention was Varus referring to there being a change in the dungeon. It reads like Varus knows he is in a dungeon and not just his world. A little weird and threw me out of the world for a moment, but that’s the only thing I noticed myself. Great writing, great chapter!


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