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DRR Book 3, Chapter 61 — Changed

🕑 Added 2025-01-09 15:55:56 +0000 UTC

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MrMurpleqwerty

"Like an ocean." Oh crap. ohcrapohcrapohcrapohcrapohcrapohcrap

francis perez

Just take your time man I wouldn't want you to get overwork about some small spelling mistakes.

Silver Linings

Hm. I think that could use a bit of cleanup in general--I'll take a look at it for edits tomorrow!

francis perez

Sorry I meant the sentence before that one. I just edit my comment so it can make more sense.

Pete Magnuson

"you risk all your progress" seems fine to me, it's a slightly odd way to phrase it but I've seen it before.

Vinohr

I suspect the lore here is that a liquid core is essential for true advancement. Submerged skills becoming more accessible after that change seems to imply that at least. And the nomenclature all describing a descent into the ocean...

francis perez

I think you made a mistake in this paragraphe were the knight is telling Ethan that he is almost done, The mistake is the one before the last sentence. also thanks for the chapter "Your repairs are essentially complete," it tells me. "You can re-compress your core and rejoin the battle. This process need not be perfect, Ethan. You risk all your progress."


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